A Handbook for Saving the White Moonlight

I have read all the text. The biggest problem with this book is that some of the logic is really flawed. First of all, I can understand that Mo Hengjun and Ning Liang broke up in the wedding room because Ning Liang lied to him. But later, after Ning Liang was seriously injured and the two of them reconciled, Mo Hengjun obviously fell in love with Ning Liang and let Ning Liang go to find Luo Qi. That's fine. Later, Ning Liang could be left alone to find the evil god? It's a bit outrageous. In the end, Ning Liang had his head chopped off and his soul was scattered. It was really bloody. The setting of love root was also outrageous. Later in the plot, it was said that love root can grow, but when it came to Mo Hengjun, it couldn't grow in order to make him the second male lead, right? , Lu Da's problem of male-male-female imbalance really needs to be changed. Mo Hengjun had too many roles, and Luo Qi had too many roles in the end. If the author hadn't forced Mo Hengjun to have no affection and made him go offline, I really don't know how Luo Qi would have won.

Please change the label. Love goes both ways. This article cannot be called a strong woman. Please change the label. The strong woman in my heart is still the author's Longevity without Borders series. In the past few days, I have read some sentences from Beiyue, Hua Xi and other female protagonists. In comparison, maybe the protagonists of these two books are gods, and they can easily reverse their destiny, which seems very unfair to other people. Thinking back to when Bei Yue prayed for Mo Lian's afterlife, in this book the Black Ghost King could easily reverse life and death; Hua Xi regretted giving him the Heart-killing Grass after knowing what happened to Chong Xi, and Lingshu wished she could go back to the past and tell her adoptive father that she was Ling'er. But in the end, there were phoenix feathers here that could reverse time, and there was also a dream about going back to the past to make up for regrets. It was simply forced to perfection, and how ridiculous it was for them to work so hard. Wei Ning's soul perished in the Pond of Ten Evils in his previous life, Hua Xi's demonic nature was washed away after countless reincarnations, Chong Kui fell into reincarnation and kept going back and forth, Lingshu was sold since childhood and had his eyes studied in a laboratory, Bei Yue changed her fate against the will of heaven and almost all her relatives and friends left. Even in modern times, they can keep themselves warm even if they live a rough life. As a result, the heroine of Ya's book awakened the power of the demon god at the age of 15, fell in love with someone stupidly, and lost her soul. She was reincarnated in modern times and lived an ordinary life that other heroines envied (except that she had no money or relatives, and the people in the organization were very nice to her). However, she went back and said that she had a cold nature. It is said that the heroine's temperament is dark and cold, shouldn't it be the temperament of Bei Yue and Wei Ning? Bei Yue and Wei Ning were both cold and cold in their previous lives, so why is the heroine schizophrenic? (Her temperament is very split) In the past life, the little white flower was warm and simple, and in the next life, she was an orphan and cold. Xiao Fan is not an orphan. Well, other heroines are not miserable? The heroine is like Hua Xi. Even after reincarnation, Hua Xi is still very proud and proud. Moreover, Hua Xi is a princess of the God Realm. She is doted on by the entire God Realm. She loves Chong Xi so passionately and persistently. Even when she was reincarnated for ten thousand years and became the king of mercenaries, she still has her own persistence and determination. Also, the male protagonist and the supporting actor were all good characters with a heart for the common people, and the layout was quite large, but all of a sudden they were all tied to the love of the heroine, especially the wedding. What the hell, the layout suddenly became smaller. To be honest, I don't like this book. The forced perfection makes the characters in the Wanshou Wujiang series that I like so sad. The male protagonist of this book was later severely marginalized and became a person who revolves around the female protagonist. Also, author, I sincerely want to tell you that your book is so uneven that it makes me sick. Maybe it's because the heroine has no charm, is procrastinating and not firm at all, which gives me the feeling that she uses the male protagonist as a backup. And that self-imagination disgusts me. I think your other books, especially Hua Xi's A Bowl of Water, should be like this. Hua Xi is really worth it. Whether it's Chong Xi, Wujiang or Ji Yue, they really make me feel that Hua Xi is worth it. No one except Hua Xi deserves their love. Especially the sentence in Jiu Feng that I love the most in this world is you. It's so touching! As expected of our Lord of Light! ! ! Even though Chong Xiaoxi is no longer here, she has not given up on herself. She deserves to be the light for the glory and the sun for the sunshine! ! As for this, in the name of the Six Realms and for the common people, the heroine was killed in her previous life as a simple and fragile little white flower. In the previous life, the Six Realms fell into a hundred years of darkness because of her. In this life, she plucked the male protagonist's hair and gave him a knife. She also shouted that I was doing it for the common people, and even thought about killing the male protagonist again for the Six Realms. We Xixi have done so much, but we haven't opened our mouths to talk about the common people, let alone give us Zhong Xiaoxi a knife. Gee, I want to go through the book and pair her up with Mo Yunsheng, the protector of the common people. Let the male protagonist be beautiful on his own, or give him a character that is good and suitable for him from the beginning; or let him not be the only Phoenix from the beginning, and have elders in Qishan to guide him. MD made me angry when I saw it. In order to be a tool, a character who only has the heroine in his heart, he can't have anything. After watching the welfare extras, I wanted to say that just the extra side with her and the second male lead is really... How can it be compared with the heroines of the Wanshou Wujiang series? Author, I hope you can recreate the glory of the past. Also, the author, in fact, in this book, I most hope that the heroine and the second hero will be together, let the hero go, and let him be the young boy who was uninhibited in the world and not trapped in love! !

My comment is a bit long, if I am lucky enough to be seen by Lao Lu, I will be very happy! I follow every article written by Lu Fei. I wrote this review immediately after reading this one. It is my true feeling. I hope you can read it patiently? I have always liked the articles written by Lu Fei very much! Every person in Lao Lu's works is vivid, three-dimensional and full of vitality. From Wanshou Wujiang to here, Hua Xi, Xiaoliang and many others are working hard to shine no matter what the situation. I want to say that I always like Lufei's articles! No matter how long it takes, I will wait for the old road to keep writing. As long as you write, I will always be by your side. Closer to home, I really like this White Moonlight. From the very beginning, Xiaoliang struggled and became emotionally indifferent until she gradually connected with the people around her, began to re-examine herself, reached reconciliation with herself, and went to save her beloved apprentice and the Six Realms. Although the process was bitter, sweet, and empty, and seemed short and long, I was able to immerse myself in Xiaoliang's feelings and feel the warmth she felt. By the way, I would like to mention the emotional line issue that Lao Lu finally summarized. Although you said that you spent a lot of time creating the male protagonist, especially the relationship between Luo Qi and Xiao Liang. I want to talk about my feelings about Xiao Liang's emotional line. At the beginning, before Luo Qi was released, he wrote about Xiao Liang giving money to Mo Yunsheng. After he felt that Xiao Liang cared about him and smiled happily, I felt that he and Xiao Liang had a deep bond (I felt that he was the male protagonist). After I started to get to know him, I discovered his deep affection for Xiaoliang and the fact that they had formed a contract as husband and wife. Generally speaking, the old style is that if it is not voluntary and you really like someone, you will not get married. I liked Mo Yunsheng very much at first, but as the past between him and Ning Liang was slowly revealed, I knew that they had been in love, and I could understand why Xiaoliang was willing to form a contract with him in Luoshui. I feel that Xiaoliang does like him a little bit, but I always feel uncomfortable. I always feel like there is something missing in this relationship. Maybe it's the guilt at the beginning, or something else? I can't grasp this feeling for the moment. Let's talk about the changes in my feelings towards Luo Qi. When he first broke up all Xiaoliang's cultivation, I really thought he was "troublesome for the children", and why did he seize this opportunity to travel through time. (But of course, according to the old routine, general systems and plug-ins do not exist, so I didn't think the system Xiaoliang used was a real system at first.) Later, I saw Ning Nuan take action against him as a master, and Luo Qi had no choice but to take action, so I understood him. After I fished him out of the dungeon, I felt that he had a bad temper, but he was upright and clean (this became even more prominent with Xiaoliang(?)). Before Bailong was born, I always regarded him as one of the little apprentices who fell in love with Xiaoliang. It wasn't until later that he fell in love with Xiaoliang, cautiously but patiently and wholeheartedly. Cooking delicious food for Xiaoliang, bickering with Xiaoliang every day, and his gentleness and concern for Xiaoliang. In short, probably after Mo Yunsheng got back the divine bones, my original preference for Mo Yunsheng gradually became more and more inclined to Luo Qi, although a large part of it was because I felt that Xiao Liang's feelings for Mo Yunsheng at that time were no longer what I considered "love", and there was a feeling of shortcomings or something. I feel more and more good about Luo Qi, and I feel sorry for him more and more, because Xiaoliang only loves Mo Yunsheng. He pursues a pair for the rest of his life but cannot get the love of his sweetheart. As the plot progressed, and when they were said to be a couple with a child, A Yun, I already preferred Luo Qi over Ning Liang. At that time, I felt that Ning Liang was really not a thing, and at the same time I told myself that feelings cannot be forced. Lao Lu perfectly made me feel a little bit of Luo Qi's feelings. I want to control my feelings but inadvertently reveal them. I am overjoyed when I get a little feedback and love. The cautious but blatant preference made me feel depressed and a little excited. Until Luo Qi's Phoenix Nirvana, before I saw Phoenix's thoughts, I was thinking that Lu Fei was really not a thing, to torture Luo Qi like this, to make him love Xiaoliang so much and still have to suffer like this. I felt so bad for Luo Qi. I was in a bad mood during that time. This mood reached its peak during his Nirvana. So when Xiao Liang held a wedding and said she liked Luo Qi, I was really ecstatic and very happy! All the cautious and enthusiastic love before finally had an echo. I guess I felt what Luo Qi meant to Xiao Liang, and her love. Finally, I want to say that it's okay to have a slow pace (at least for this book), because you can always stimulate my emotions little by little and let them grow slowly. This kind of delicate emotional change was extended over a long period of time (and the time for me to break my guard was also extended), so I also felt a lot of joy when it blossomed and bore fruit (but the ending of this article was too hasty and too short, and it was gone after I solved the problem. I also want to see more daily life after marriage and dealing with other troubles). In the end, I will always love Lu's love story, which is so sweet that it's very sweet to my heart.

It's Chinese New Year, why don't you write a new article [crying]

What I like most about this book are the Phoenix who played the piano calmly in Qishan, the gentle knight who healed the injured Ning Liang in Luoshui, the young man who hid his heart under the sycamore tree on a rainy day, and the Qishan Lord who is still gentle after nine lives of calamity, and who illuminates the world with his life. The writing of Little Phoenix is ​​too much like the second male protagonist. For the first time, I sincerely hope that this is a story where the male protagonist is the only one who loves no one and lives a good life. This poor male protagonist must love the heroine and squeeze out all the value from the heroine. This is also the first time that I felt so stuck in my throat while reading an article. If Mr. Mo Heng were the male protagonist, I wouldn't say anything. If he is not the male protagonist, I would be disgusted. Especially in the sentence about Luo Shui's echo, I didn't lie. It was like I ate a fly. Every time I think of their aversion to the cold, I have to run out and run more than a kilometer to relieve my resentment. This welfare extra is very far-fetched, really far-fetched, a bit like industrial saccharine. Lu Fei said in the article that Mo Heng, who has no roots in love, will love the common people and Ning Liang, but if the same thing as Weicheng happens again, whether Mo Heng will save the common people or the soul-destroying Ning Liang, to put it bluntly, he is treating the little Phoenix as a spare tire. There is also the sentence, everything is exchanged for the love of the heroine. I feel that for the heroine, this relationship is too easy to get. I feel that there is no subjective initiative at all. If it is too easy to get, you will not cherish it. So, let's just lock them up, don't treat the male protagonist as a tool here, give me the gentle and calm Phoenix who has not experienced tribulations in Qishan before, and is free and unrestrained in the world! ! ! Let Ning Liang and Mo Heng lock up! ! ! Also, this setting itself is unfair to the male protagonist. Everyone is accompanied by someone. Little Phoenix is alone from beginning to end. Even if Mo Hengjun has no love, he still has a father who devotes half of his cultivation to him. , A brother who never abandons you, is respected by the world, and is a loyal subordinate. Isn't this better than the treatment of the evil god? What is there to feel sorry for? A person, oh no, a god, must have a good career and emotional success, and have status. Moreover, after Lord Mo Heng broke his divine bones, he is no longer a real mortal. He is not weak and can refine medicine. He was born in a wealthy family. The feeling given to me is not even comparable to that of Jun Ran. The Black Ghost King has an uncle, Yan Wuzheng, and a younger brother, the White Ghost King. Although he hates him on the surface, he still loves his mother. Yan Wuzheng also has a dog, as well as sisters, Yan Wuyou and Yan Wumeng. As I read this book, I wanted to go through it, kick the heroine over and lock herself with the second male protagonist, and then use my own pen to set up the male protagonist from the beginning to be wholeheartedly good to him and to protect him together, instead of always protecting him unilaterally. Also, if the situation in Weicheng is discovered again, the male protagonist will only save the female protagonist, because he does not need to shoulder the responsibility of the God of War. Originally, the male protagonist of this book gave me the feeling that he exchanged nine lives for one life of light and loved the world as well as the heroine. Now that I have changed it this way, I feel that he simply loves the heroine and does not have the original feeling. What happened to this good character in the end? Also, this welfare extra story feels like a two-way secret love, but the postscript also says that a person can only like one person in his life? This life should be a new life, but he also said that he liked Mo Hengjun, and Zhong Wutong was mentioned in the previous article. On the night of the tree (this should be Queen Weicheng), the heroine's heart palpitated slightly. This... The writing is so vague. If the echo of Luo Shui is her feelings 100 years later, it means that after she got married, she still... How can I describe it? I can't accept it. Is it possible that like Lingshu, he likes the second male lead and loves the male lead? I don't feel firm at all, and I don't feel that way about anyone, which makes me feel disconnected. Whether it was the ghost king's wishing lantern or the power of Luo Shui, the heroine's soul was scattered. However, the longing for Phoenix did not hurt her at all, and she also awakened the power of the demon god. The author created this character by not only wanting to portray her lively and enthusiastic side, but also her cold-natured side, which resulted in a very fragmented character that was completely different from the previous heroines. The mixed temperament did not turn out well.

When I read the comments, I felt that there were quite a few voices saying that the writing was a bit hurtful and unfair to both the lead actor and the lead actor. My personal understanding of this in reading the article is that I think this is what holds my heart. Loyal love is valuable, but the plot direction makes me feel the meaning of the words "the world is impermanent", just like my own life. The final outcome may be the best outcome. I have been reading Lao Lu's writings for a long time. When I read them as an adult, I have a more profound feeling that many times everything will not go as planned. It's difficult to let go, and there is a very painful past, but after that, you always have to accept a lot of things and look forward to it. The best results are often not the most perfect.

When will Jiudeng Tianmen open, Lao Lu? Will I keep waiting? I like your article so much. I have been waiting for Wei Ning's story for many years. Lao Lu must write it out?

Thank you Lu Feida! I have finally finished this book, and for now I have no regrets except Mo Wuji x Shen Weining in "Nine Heavenly Gates"! This is another wonderful story. I was very moved by Mo Hengjun's deep love for Xiao Liang. The "contract between husband and wife" is also the point that made me cry the most. He is so tolerant, kind, compassionate, and gentle. Although I sometimes think of Ji Yue in his setting, maybe they both have full regrets in my heart. And Luo Qi, his arrogance is really lacking, but I still guessed the male protagonist [sunglasses] correctly from the beginning. After all, the common feature of the male protagonist is purple eyes, which appears in the introduction of the book! It was when I saw later that Xiao Liang obtained [Phoenix's Thoughts] that the sentence "Note: Host be careful" reminded me of the relationship between the system and Luo Qi. At first glance, it seemed that the system was reminding Xiao Liang to pay attention to safety. At another glance, it seemed that there was some kind of relationship between Phoenix and the host. Fenghuang's longing is both the beginning and the end. It's like saying that the beginning of Xiaoliang's arrival in this world stems from Fenghuang's longing, and the ending of this story also belongs to Fenghuang's longing. Previously, due to the existence of the system, I couldn't read the story from the character's perspective. I always felt that I should be like Xiao Liang, a bystander looking at the people in the book. But later, I saw the system as Xiao Liang's path forward, and I felt that everything in the world was related to me. Only then did I understand why this book is called the White Moonlight Redemption Manual, The Nine Feathers of the Phoenix, reversing time and space, and rewriting the ending. Xiao Liang's kindness and bravery, and being restless with life are the salvation of others, and Luo Qi uses the system to accompany Xiao Liang along the way, and changing his fate against the will of heaven is also his salvation for Xiao Liang. Therefore, Luo Qi is the male protagonist, which is good. This reader is currently in his third year of college, and has been reading your books for seven or eight years. You have always been the best online author in my mind, bar none. I wish you a bright future and hope we can meet again! [Orange Heart]

The full text has been read. 1. There are always some inexplicable ways to replenish feelings by extending the time line: (First, I completed the Mo line from six hundred years ago, then the male protagonist line from the previous life, and finally the Black King line from six hundred years ago. It feels like it takes a long time = you can like it, which is weird. 2. Except for Luo Mo and the Black Ghost King, all the members were cured in the later period and then left aside. After the dragon story was told, most of the people who transformed into tools were in the form of dragons, so they changed their faces at the end. Yan even regained his memory and changed his job directly to Sanhao. The father would just catch fish and coax his nephew when he had nothing to do (I felt like his personality had changed)

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