Love Battle in Nice

Ah... I stayed up late to finish reading it. I would like to thank the author for writing such a good article. This article brought me a lot of emotions and thoughts. I also like the author's ancient civilization series, especially Yue Xing Heyang. It can be seen that the author's understanding of the ancient West is not limited to superficial knowledge. Thank you again for bringing such a beautiful work,?

I finished reading the novel overnight. The writing is smooth and flowing, the characters are very delicate and vivid, and the plot is also very good. A small suggestion: the author can try to condense his language, use less adjectives, and focus more on the language and actions of the characters (for example, when something happens, the reactions and words of people with different personalities are different, you can give a close-up like a movie lens). Well, because sometimes it's a bit tiring to read a long paragraph filled with adjectives. But fortunately, this is purely a matter of personal preference. I am more accustomed to keeping everything simple. The writing techniques are quite skillful, especially in some slow motions and creating atmosphere, which are proficient and fascinating. What I remember very deeply is the fight and slow motion of the bullet-fighting episode. The author used various details to combine the scenes that were difficult to grasp, which was very delicate. No more words, Huahua!

When I saw Qiu Zhan's reply to Qiu's last long comment, "I think this may be the last long comment," I yelled in my heart that it would be okay, because I'm still here. Some time ago, Qiu's love battle was over, and I had finished reading it, but I didn't leave much of a message. Please forgive me for my laziness. I was really lazy, but for Qiu's sake, I have to work hard. I stopped updating for a while last autumn because of some things. In fact, a lot of things happened to me last year, many things that I can't explain. After I entered high school in the second half of last year, I made a lot of friends. There was a girl in our class who was very innocent and cute. Many boys chased her. She happened to be in the same dormitory as me. In line with the principle of first-come-first-serve, and wealth should not go to outsiders, I also started chasing her. At that time, I would write a love poem to her every other week, and when I returned to the dormitory after studying in the evening, I would read it to her in public. I think this is very interesting, but she always ignores me. Instead, she flirts with another girl in our dormitory (who hates me because we are classmates in junior high school and elementary school, but we are not familiar with her) and plays in front of me. That summer our dormitory had a floor, and the three of us slept on the floor chatting. She and I slept on both sides, and the girl slept in the middle. Because she was separated by someone, I couldn't get close to her, so I just chatted with the girl. We talked about everything and then played together, day after day. Once, the administrator caught me and deducted points. As soon as she left, we made up lies to deal with the class teacher the next day. Later, I gradually discovered that the girl I met was quite destined. We had the same surname and hometown. Once we got to know each other better, we turned out to be the kind of lunatics who thought they couldn't be understood by the world. Then, the two of us got very close. I think that innocent girl is going to be angry to death. Then we wrote poems for her every once in a while. Days passed by. I thought it was fun at first, but later I found out that I really liked her. It should be said that we were in love with each other. Next, we began to swear each other, sleeping and eating together every day. During those few months, we lived really happily. I originally thought that we could at least hold on until we graduate from high school, but unfortunately things didn't work out. She suddenly started ignoring me in the first half of the first semester of high school. I guess it was because I wrote a very unrestrained poem to her. I asked her for the reason, but she ignored me and was aggressive with me. Then I impulsively did a series of stupid things, and then she broke up with me. Alas, she actually didn't mention the word "break up" because she might have felt that we weren't really in a relationship. She wrote me an unfeeling letter, saying that she didn't love me anymore. I showed it to my deskmate and asked her what to do. She said, "I can see that she still cares about you." After hearing this, I pursued her for a while, but now she doesn't even talk to me anymore. So I was depressed, and I haven't recovered yet. My first love ended in vain. During this period of time, I secretly went online to read Qiu's novels, and I was too lazy to reply. When I found out it was finished, I thought of writing a long review. But because a lot of things happened before, my mind is very confused, and I can't remember clearly what the novel said before (forgive me), so I can only briefly comment on it. I roughly remember that Hai Yujie and Yu met because of a mission to steal confidential documents, and then the most romantic and incredible story of "a mouse fell in love with a cat" was staged. In the end, Hai Yujie put down the butcher's knife for Yu, changed her ways, and gathered together in the mountains and forests to be together in the ends of the earth. The characters written by Qiu always have happy endings, and this is also the case. However, the one that moved me the most was still Two Rivers, perhaps because the author and readers have very different moods. But I can understand Qiu. Life is stressful and it is inevitable to encounter troubles. I suddenly discovered that the characters in Qiu's works are perfect and dedicated. Such people are really hard to find. I just think of myself. One time, the class sang "Only" by Wang Leehom late at night, and she sang along there very seriously. My deskmate said to me, "Isn't that the only thing she wants if she doesn't respond? You see how carefree you are." I was shocked that this might be why she didn't want me. Because when I was with her, I always liked to spend time with the people at the table behind me to be infatuated with the most beautiful girl in her second year of high school. In fact, I just admire it and have no further intention! Alas, things have come to this, it's too late, and we can never go back to the past. I feel that she no longer loves me, but I am still sticking to my promise to protect her until graduation. Say "good night" every night, always care about her, and pay attention to her every move. Sometimes you will feel uncomfortable and wonder if it is worth it. My deskmate always said that we would be fine, and she still had me in her heart, but I knew that our story was destined to end in tragedy. I just regretted that from beginning to end, I was the only one reading the dialogue. I'm so sorry, Qiu, I've made a lot of complaints again. It's just that I feel uncomfortable holding these words in my heart. All I can think of is you, and I just want to talk to you. Oh, you said emotional entanglements, why are you so uncomfortable? Originally, I loved reading gl novels and just liked this kind of beautiful romance, but this time, I finally realized that I was indeed a crook. Just bend, just like Lady Gaga sang, we are born this way. However, last week, with the encouragement from the table behind me, I successfully struck up a conversation with the beautiful girl who was a sophomore in high school, and then we had dinner together every day. I don't know if this is the right thing to do. In fact, I lied to her a lot, but she is really nice and treats me well, so I feel very ashamed. I felt like I was taking advantage of her, and I even made a bet with my nasty back desk staff that I would introduce the beauty to them before the midterm exam. The bet was three boxes of ice cream. Alas, the more I thought about it, the more sad I became. She also knew that I was hooking up with a beautiful woman, and she treated her coldly as soon as I returned to the dormitory. One time in class, a classmate was teasing her and another boy (the boy was a bit girly), and the boy said "I don't like boys" (because she was crazy), and she said "I don't like girls" very loudly, and I knew she was telling me. She always emphasizes in a high profile that she is straight, and also says that she already has a boy she likes. They were all made for me to see. I feel like it's pointless if I continue to be so persistent. I think I will fall in love with someone else again, but she will always be in my heart. Okay, Qiu, thank you for persisting in reading it and letting me express my bitterness. In fact, now that I think about it, all the emotions are just floating clouds! I am proud to say that my grades are very good, so Qiu does not need to persuade me to fall in love or anything that will affect my studies. But I really want to thank you again. Because of your existence, I have the courage to say some things that I dare not say. I also hope that you will forgive me for turning a long review into a complaint. Finally, I wish Qiu and myself happiness! Ps. I wrote it half a month ago. I tried posting it several times before going to school. Jinjiang kept getting stuck, but now I finally posted it.

I really don't want to call this a review, because I haven't written it for many years, hahahaha, but as a science student, I don't have any gorgeous titles, and I don't have as good a writing style as the person sitting here. It's very well written. I really like Lan's personality and characteristics in your writing. I'm sorry that I don't like the protagonist because I was attracted by your delicate description and the whole appearance of Lan came to my mind. I will continue to read other articles and look forward to your new work.

After watching the birds. . Go back and watch the second part, haha

Fiona is a good girl. .

Happy Dragon Boat Festival! Zongzi is delicious, but don't be a glutton! In addition, I am still waiting for your new article, please come on!

Rate, spread the flowers, wait for new articles

Forgot to give points? Make up points.

I feel like the ending is too bland and a bit unfinished.