Yan Zhu transmigrates into a book, the very novel she once wrote herself.
But something seems off. Not only has the plot completely fallen apart, but the female lead she created has undergone a total reversal.
"Song Wenqing was raised in a sect from childhood. She was exceptionally gifted, gentle and mild-mannered, and beloved by all the disciples."
Yet the female lead Yan Zhu encounters is obsessive and gloomy, as well as deeply suspicious.
Song Wenqing grips her wrist so hard it hurts, corners her, and forces her to look up, making sure her eyes are filled with nothing but her. "Are you trying to leave me again?"
When Yan Zhu was writing her book, she wanted to give her precious girl absolutely everything. She gave her extraordinary talent and a wonderful temperament, made everyone around her like her, and arranged the best possible fate for her.
She wanted her to sit high above the world, untouched by hardship.
But the first time she meets Song Wenqing, she finds her covered in blood and collapsed in a muddy pit, with all her cultivation gone.
Yan Zhu wanted Song Wenqing to be loved forever, so she created the perfect male lead, someone ideally suited to her.
But she sees the male lead trying to kill Song Wenqing, while the male side characters, who were originally written to love only the female lead, all dote on the novel's second female lead instead.
Yan Zhu finds the source of the problem, and in that moment learns what she must do.
She must eliminate the outsiders and set everything back on course.
That was the fate that should have belonged to Song Wenqing.
Yan Zhu watches the statue of a god fall. She lifts the god back up, wipes away the dirt, and restores her to her altar.
But the god only grips her wrist and asks, "Are you going to leave me again?"
Song Wenqing is framed, and all her cultivation is stripped away. Branded a demonic cultivator, she is cursed by everyone in her sect and hunted by the righteous factions of the cultivation world.
Exhausted, she collapses in a muddy pit, covered in blood.
She thinks she is about to die, but then sees a strangely dressed person walking toward her.
The stranger says strange things, too, but at least she does not kill Song Wenqing. Instead, she kindly takes care of her.
Song Wenqing doesn't dare reveal who she is. She is afraid the stranger will leave her, especially now that she really has become a demonic cultivator.
But that person... seems so gentle, no matter what...
And always stands by her side...
"You won't leave, will you?"
But she doesn't answer.
Song Wenqing develops a heart demon. In the darkness, she meets a sun, and she wants that sun to belong to her forever. She doesn't care if its light burns her.
She doesn't want to sit alone on a lofty platform, doesn't care for those people's repentance, and has lost all interest in the things she used to care about.
She says, "I was a demon all along."
She will embrace the darkness and keep the sun locked away.
Obsessive, gloomy original female lead gong x gentle, sensitive little angel shou
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Theme: Strive for a better tomorrow
I never have an outline when writing novels. I originally wanted to write this book about two little girls redeeming each other. This was the opportunity for me to write. So, after watching the clip, I passionately coded the copy, and the following series of plots were just random inspirations that came to me. As for the world view and setting, because I define this book as emotionally driven, those things are just written down by me to facilitate the progression of the plot. In short, there was no outline for this book when I wrote it. The plot was spliced together by random inspirations, and the setting was so written that I needed to pick it up casually. What really made me struggle was the redemption plot between the two little girls. I hope they fulfill each other.
The world view is very broad, but due to the sporadic and house-like plot, it falls down like a straw shed at the push of a button. The hierarchy of characters is very vague, and there is no clear hierarchy that should be found in the world of cultivating immortals. There is no clear distinction between humans, monks, immortals, and gods except for forced labeling. The character descriptions that should be thick are all monologues, but there is no third party support. Characters like Song Zhiyue and Song Zhinian who should have character arcs are described very thinly and flatly, with a feeling that "the author just says they are who they are." The plot is superficial and fragmented. The main advancement relies on the inner monologues and forced explanations of the characters. There is no proper elaboration, only "afterwords" and abbreviations one after another. The plot development that rises and falls gently makes the broad world view actually look small and vulnerable. So much so that the progress of the plot and emotions is relatively poor, leaving people full of questions. It's not so much an article as it is an outline that I don't know how to modify and develop. But the setting is good, and I look forward to the author making great progress.
This article is like a man with a beautiful frame but weak blood...
So it finally became? It's so disgusting... Why do you have to write this kind of ending? I don't understand that love is illogical. I didn't write about why I rejected Song from the beginning to the end. I just kept resisting and resisting. Finally, I made this kind of ridiculous ending. I felt lonely after reading the whole story. Do you think you are very literary? Do you think you are very literary? This kind of ending??? Isn't it good to love each other well? I took it, and my mood for the whole night was ruined.
Why do I feel like this ending appears to be he, but actually it's be (crying)
The setting is very good, and the ending forces the game to catch up. The existence of supporting characters such as An Lin, Ling Shi, Jun Lin and others is dispensable. They are described in a waste of words but do not promote the plot or the protagonist in any way. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters are too flat. The logic of Yan Zhu's behavior is confusing, especially in the second part of the book. He refuses for the sake of rejection, which makes people not feel that the two of them have been redeemed. I hope the author will overhaul it after he has inspiration and complete the story. After all, it is the world created by your pen, isn't it?
Damn, the ending feels so regretful. Be (?) Disguised as he came to the end of a serialized article for the first time. It was a bit emotional and regretful. This happy ending has a suffocating feeling like a cardiac arrest and being choked. I wish my wife's life will get better and better. Please relax~ It's rare to have a chance to relax in life~
This. . . HE or BE. . . . It's a bit hard to calm down
Nice(?? . ??)
The sweet label deceived me. . That feeling of neither going up nor down