Demon Hunt: The White Death (Complete)

OK, I've finished reading, you can continue~

The structure of a supernatural novel is a bit loose, and the description of the environment has the feeling of announcing a war to seize control, which interferes with the coherence of the plot to a certain extent. The more prominent problem is the smoothness of the story. The author seems to be pursuing the lens of text, just like a single picture in a comic, using language to present the content to the reader, but the effect is not ideal. Such a picture-by-picture narration method weakens transitions and connections, forcing the author to constantly use "..." To divide the content in the same chapter, which makes people sigh after reading the previous paragraph and unable to pick up the next paragraph. The content of the story is relatively thin, there are no highlights, and the development is relatively flat. It lacks attractive things. To be serious, it is empty! In terms of language, descriptive language often lacks subjects, and conversations sometimes lack demonstrative words and subjects. For example, there is no subject. [Suddenly, the vines on the ground stumbled, and I stopped walking. When I looked again, the white color had disappeared from my sight. [My eyes, which are lighter than the color of Chinese people, have a strange gold color, staring at my face for a moment. [The excitement suddenly fell below zero when I caught a glimpse of the fleeting white shadow on the hillside. The refreshing coolness spreads rapidly from the central nervous system to the entire body. [Before I could be surprised by the sudden appearance, my left ankle was already held by a slender and strong hand, and a warm feeling spread through the cold skin. Holding my ankle, Che knelt on one knee in front of me, staring at the bloody traces with his lowered eyes.

Very good story^^ In fact, it is not as scary as I imagined. Such a short story is more attractive^^ Personally, I think it's enough to just write it down here, and writing it down any further would be superfluous^^

Jun is not going to die, right??? I quite like her...

It can't be the final BOSS!??? I read too many comics= =|||

Is it a dual personality? Or twins??

I like all 3 protagonists :)

The beginning looks pretty good :) Then look down

Not bad, but the story probably doesn't end here. Looking forward to the author's next article.

Hope it can continue