The Three Sins

Shocked myself. The author read it a few days after writing it. At that time, Qian Yanyan discussed it with my friends, and we both thought it was well written. Then I clicked in again today, and I felt it, and finally it was written. (The following is basically a copy of the chat history with a gay friend) The three sins she wrote in one and a half years really shocked me. It was very shocking. I will always remember the ending. The layout of the ending was really wonderful. She first wrote about Qu Yong drawing a gun and shooting, and then writing about Qu Wei jumping out of the window sill, like a butterfly fluttering its wings. The scene is always fixed at the moment when the bullet did not hit Qu Wei. I can imagine that he was absolutely free at that moment. And from now on, his soul can gain eternal freedom This way of writing is really wonderful So spiritual Normally, after Lu Jiaxuan said you jump over here and I will catch you, Qu Wei should have jumped out of the window and then Qu Yong would draw his gun and shoot, but she deliberately changed the order. It was really amazing. (Of course, it may also be that you are fully immersed in writing, so it comes naturally) Very natural and very profound I will never forget it, really This article is also really well written. It depicts many kinds of people from three perspectives. There is no escape from the world, there is no escape from reality However, the center is profound enough and hits the nail on the head. Justice never fails And she was so natural throughout the whole story, without deliberately lengthening or shortening it. The perspective of Lu Jiaxuan in the first article is very confusing because it is a fantasy before death, like a dream, or like the sparkling powder on the wings of a butterfly. The second article is from the perspective of the police chief. As the title states, the police chief is a mediocre man who accepted Qu Yong's temptation. He cursed Qu Yong as a pervert, but at the same time he was impatient with Feng Zijun. Maybe he felt a little guilty and condemned himself, but it was not a big deal. The Sheriff ultimately lost himself. His perspective objectively shows these two people, Qu Yong and Feng Zijun The mayor's daughter, a young lady, likes to read detective novels, so she comes to work for the police chief. Her starting point was very innocent and not very serious, but at the end when the criminal taunted her, your so-called justice is just handing a knife to your father, she bravely took it, getting rid of all girlish fantasies and interest entanglements. She just wanted to seek justice, just wanted to speak for two innocent and beautiful teenagers, just for the most precious and rarest truth - and justice. She is a just and kind person, pure and respectable The second article has the most words The first article is more than 1,000 words, the third article is more than 2,000 words, and the second article is more than 5,000 words The third article is from the perspective of Qu Yong. He is a madman, but you can also say that he is an artist. It is from his perspective that the moment of freedom of Qu Wei is finally shown. This is also the perspective of art. It really echoes from a distance. (But Qu Yong has a saying, which he "said" when he made Qu Wei a specimen after his death. If he had known that it would be like this, he would not have bothered with Qu Wei when he was on hunger strike. He did not know how to appreciate Qu Wei's desire for freedom at all - he fiercely fought with him when Qu Wei During the argument, it can be seen that he is only disgusted with Qu Wei's protruding veins and flushed face. From this point of view, I do not agree that he is an artist, or that he lacks appreciation, because he only appreciates the "beauty" that he pursues and only within his own control.) Overall, this article is really artistic The story is very simple But it's really well written All are the best This introduction is like a dream, bringing out the beautiful wishes and cruel reality of the two teenagers, but at the same time, it also deeply establishes the two protagonists who have been dead since the beginning of the chapter. He fell into a state of suspended animation under great stimulation. When he woke up and actually ran towards death, he imagined that he and Qu Wei were still alive, and he wanted to escape from here with Qu Wei, so he ran to the station as if he didn't care about his life, and then chased the train that had gone away. He has stood still Qu Wei really came to life like a stuffed butterfly at the moment when he jumped out of the window sill to escape from the shackles and abandon the shackles. He finished writing both him and the whole text. It starts with Lu Jiaxuan and ends with Qu Wei. Although the two of them live in other people's memories and other people's words throughout the whole process, they are really the most beautiful souls in the cruel reality shown in this article. Confession to the author, post

It took me about an hour to finish reading a novel. The following content is based on my thoughts. The following content is based on my thoughts. It is a family talk. I would like to thank the author for such an excellent work. 1. The writing style is so amazing. The first chapter attracts readers and is mysterious but also provides a lot of clues. From the second chapter, it can be seen that this is a novel composed of three "I"s. Time goes by, the perspective is changing, and the previous plot is made up by dialogue. Each perspective has its own unique focus. I really admire this writing style every time I read it. 2. Talking about "I", the first one I have is an innocent and brave character. I have nothing but dare to try to challenge the world. The unstable mental state and the weirdness of the narrative content just hint at the injection of drugs mentioned in the next few days. "I"?, Humble and powerless, but dreaming of a better future. Xuanjing, which can never be reached in geography books, is the utopia in my heart. This illusory hope also gave Qu Wei the courage to jump. However, as an idealistic martyr, dying on the road of being regarded as the murderer is the fate of an ant that "I" cannot escape. The second "I" is an accomplice seeking profit and skin. It is uncertain whether the young man had the same belief as Feng Zijun when he was just starting out, but there is no doubt that the "I" now only sees money and profit. The characters who appear in Chapter 2 have distinct class attributes. This is because "my" eyes can only see this. "I"? Vicious, viewing life as trivial and the truth as waste paper; "I" cunning, not daring to offend the mayor's daughter and business tycoon, nor miss any opportunity to climb up. Dying on the way to promotion is the ultimate destination for such villains. The third "I"? Is a murderer with a dark heart and a nobleman who plays with power and money. "I" is greedy and uses commercial means to seek benefits, and I will hold on to whatever I see, so that the victim will never be able to escape; "I" regards power as a means, and at the same time, I face greater power calmly. This failure is just that "I" surrendered to greater power. Before that, "I" did not know how many innocent people I had hurt with power. The arrest of "I" is only the end of one case. The dark forces and gray areas represented by "I" still exist endlessly. 3. Other characters. ① Qu Wei, a poor child who grew up surrounded by the power of a wealthy family. His unfortunate illness became an excuse for his brother to restrict his freedom. He was not deeply involved in the world, but he had a spirit of resistance and a sense of self. He jumped out of the window, maybe his life was withered, but his spirit would be free at that moment. ②Feng Zijun, this is a character that I like very much. There is an unavoidable sense of contradiction in her. As the daughter of the mayor's family, it can be seen from the conversation between her and Mr. Qu in Chapter 2 that she has often experienced Vanity Fair activities, but in terms of career choice, she chose to be a police officer. Whether it is getting through the public prosecutor's office for his father, or dreaming of being a detective, the police career is a challenge for a rich and powerful daughter, and it is also a kind of escape in a sense. Feng Zijun's identity is not only a help but also a anchor in her life. The help is that she can use her father's relationship to realize her dreams, avoid many potential risks in officialdom, and find justice; the key is that the first thing people think of before mentioning her is the patriarchal society represented by her father, and her current social achievements inevitably come from her father. This is a point I feel the author has written very well. This character is a woman. Her unique female acumen can allow her to discover the key clue of the station conductor. Her gender can make people respect her when she engages in a dangerous profession. Readers can think of her as a benchmark for breaking away from that kind of patriarchal and rights-based society, and they can also feel sorry for her: when people mention her, "the mayor's daughter" is placed before "Feng Zijun", and even her career is a nail planted by her father in order to bring down the business giant. ? It is the author who gives readers just the right amount of reading space that allows readers to give a comprehensive evaluation of the characters. Everyone is contradictory. I personally feel that this contradictory character is created very well. (Kiss Awen) ③Conductor, this is a profession that allows you to see all kinds of things in the world. ? The conductor in the article plays an important role in providing clues to the main characters, but because Mr. Qu pointed out Feng Zijun's father's manipulation of his own interests in the third chapter, and Feng Zijun's excitement and active performance when mentioning the case in the second chapter, I, a reader with a bit of a conspiracy theory, began to speculate whether the conductor was kind or not. Does his kindness come from the mayor's secret manipulation? Otherwise, in the crowded train station, how could he notice the poor kid in the corner who couldn't afford a ticket, collect his paper airplane, and pass it to Officer Feng? Of course, this is just my personal opinion. No one should speculate on a person's kindness without knowing the full picture. From a selfish point of view, I hope this is a kind coincidence. 3. About the author The first time I read Awen's novel was "Are You Sick?" (There are spoilers below, warning) At that time, I was short of writing, and I saw the handwritten recommendation on Station B, so I stepped into the world of Chu Mingyun and Su Shiyu. The author's fast-forward writing style left a distinct impression on me. In that article, Chu Mingyun complained about how Su Shiyu gave Luo Xin, a general, a Confucian classic, and then when Luo Xin desperately escorted them out of the city, the only words about etiquette and justice that remained in his mind were. This plot is as deeply burned into my mind as the setting sun. After reading this story, you may feel an inescapable and interlocking feeling of powerlessness, but the story of Qu Wei and Lu Jiaxuan will reveal a truth: no matter how utilitarian or powerful the world is, there will be people who would rather be a broken blue butterfly than fight hard to have freedom. In this absurd and confusing future, why not try your best to get there before the train whistle blows? Thank you again Rusiwowenda for bringing such a good work. 24.6.17?

As I heard, you are still so awesome. It is not justice that defeats evil, but evil that defeats evil.

Although there are no bizarre and tortuous murder methods, nor are there any twists and turns that make people's brains hurt, the story line is very clear and compact. Switching perspectives to narrate this way feels very comprehensive and detailed.

The person imprisoned by the illusion embraces another soul who longs for freedom, leaping past the past but unable to reach the future. This is a fairy tale with an unhappy ending. It is highly recommended to read the first chapter again after reading it, as if you feel that there is God's will in the dark, and if you don't forget it, there will be an echo. Finally, I saw that the hidden paper airplane was real. I was happy but also the most heartbroken. Even if the letters proving our connection are burned, the resonating soul can still make a deafening sound to the world; even if death separates you and me, at the boundary between life and death, even the God of Death tolerates you and me, so that our destination will never be that high building. I hope that there will be gods in this world who will express their sincerity, grievances and deaths, and help the souls who have gone through suffering to board the train of the new world, become butterflies, birds, and boats, go to the capital, go to the world, wherever they want to go, and stop placing heavy vulgarity on people who have never valued it. May the free soul be free eventually! (╥_╥)

I think of "In the Bamboo Grove" by Ryunosuke Akutagawa, but that one is more complicated. Different people tell different stories from their perspectives, and it's hard for you to tell which one is true.

I knew she was the mayor's daughter and I had the capital to catch him. The two boys were killed by the businessman, the profit-seeking businessman was killed by the businessman, and the businessman was killed by the mayor's daughter. Will such evil be punished in reality? I'm afraid not. After all, there is no "mayor's daughter" in the novel in reality.

"I" Am I me? I am a sinner, a mediocre person, a noble person. I am dead, but I am not dead yet.

I was really shocked after reading The Three Deadly Sins. A story is completed from the perspective of three people. The title of each chapter corresponds to the content. It is really well written [Love Eyes] [Love Eyes]

Oh my god, it's so powerful... When I read certain words, I felt a trembling resonance from the depths of my soul.