
The Chief and the Bellflowers
首席与桔梗花
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
1Chapters
3Favorites
10.0Score
232Clicks per chapter
4Comments
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Blink, it will really make you sad if you don't look, okay?
This plot is really good, but I hope the story can be written completely. I am very curious about the final truth and the previous story of the two people. If it is a complete narrative, I would really love this kind of sadistic article and this character.
Ok I finished reading it in one go. Because children really can't help but look at it carefully, I patted my wife and came over with a nuclear bomb in my arms. First of all, the overall story is not complete enough. I really want to know what the truth is (meditation). The story category is okay, but the pace is too fast and many details are not handled well. There are two bugs to catch in terms of wording: ① A pocket watch that is very good at looking after others. It should be noted here that special ability refers to a skill. For example, "Hypnosis is my special skill" is not used together with item nouns. ② Close your head and sleep. Should it be eyes? (Thinking) Now that the book has been opened, why not extend it slowly and talk about the two elders, colleagues, and "them"? Maybe there will be twenty chapters of short films, which will be much better? The content of the story is attractive, but the chapters are really not enough. If you dig holes without filling them, I will let Amitabha save you in situ!! (Knock on wooden fish) Come on, and when will my beauty get out of the carriage (looking up and sighing)/b
This is not enough to torture me (grimace)