Pre-received article [op substitute text Gou Ming] ++++ [curse return strategy journey] Welcome to collect the copy at the bottom
[Vongola's Love Journey] is a new game given to her by Li Nai's friend. Some people on the forum have said that the game is so perverted that as the heroine, you will inexplicably reach the end of death.
For example, being affected by a bomb, being locked into a small dark room for research by a little baby, or being bitten to death by a mosquito? ? ? ?
After pinching his face, Li Nai, who was lying on the bed, was eager to try out various be games in this legend tomorrow.
After waking up, she found that she had traveled through time~~
Until she entered the otome oral game, she saw in the mirror that she was depressed due to the death of her parents and had eaten a lot of weight. She transformed into Sakurai Na and started a long weight loss journey.
Weekly program
When she first met the rabbit boy who was bullied at school, with his handsome appearance and soft and cute temperament, Sakurai Na immediately felt that such a good boy should be a good person.
The mutual redemption between the rose boy who is bullied in the darkness and the warm transfer student.
After seeing the popular baseball boy in the class, Sakuraina suddenly realized that this was not the legendary sports boy, he was just a simple boy.
Until the chairman of the Disciplinary Committee appeared, Sakuraina thought how could a cat-loving boy be a bad person.
…
But she soon discovered that this strategy game was a bit strange and more dangerous than she imagined.
In the dilapidated warehouse, the kidnapped girl did not understand what went wrong until her death?
Second week
After waking up, return to the beginning of the game again.
Looking at Usagi-kun with his bare upper body and strange flames coming out of his head, who was about to confess to the goddess, Sakurai Na said:
She must trample these people under her feet! ! !
Three weeks
When she woke up again, Sakurai Nai said that it was impossible to lose weight, even in this life.
It is impossible to even touch the black hands and mouths.
Spending your life with peace of mind is the way to go.
[Op stand-in literature is still alive]
If the rebirth op starts in Windmill Village, the Monkey D clan has absolute strength and beauty, and grew up with three little ones, then it goes without saying that it is a perfect standard.
It's a pity that Susan, who was reborn as an op, is neither in Windmill Village nor a so-called bamboo horse. More importantly, she is still wearing a costume. Apart from being younger, she is completely incomparable with the op's aborigines with abnormal physiques.
As a weakling who is useless in combat, Susan is useless except for being able to apply cos makeup.
Just when Susan thought she would spend her whole life in this small town, a flamingo pirate ship broke the peace here.
The town without naval protection turned into hell overnight.
In order to survive, Susan cosplayed as Joker's mute mother just before boarding the ship.
After lurking for many years, Susan, who only wanted to escape to Windmill Village, was abducted to the monastery of the Big Mom Pirates after leaving the Don Quixote family.
With food, accommodation and wages included, the short-term peace made Susan feel the happiness that money brings.
Until that day the angry aunt destroyed the entire monastery.
In order to survive, Susan relied on the plot to cosplay with important people in the lives of various bosses, and unknowingly, her bounty became higher and higher.
Some people say that he is joker's underground lover?
Some people say that she is the daughter-in-law that the aunt likes?
Some people say that he is the mother of Fire Fist Ace?
Only Susan knows that everything is nonsense.
Curse Return Strategy Journey
As the heroine of a former 18x game, Yuriko was trapped in the sky and never left.
Until one day, a guy named [System] found her. In order to leave the unfolding plot, Yuriko agreed to the other party's request and went to Kyoto a thousand years ago.
Yuriko, who became the daughter of a samurai, met her first target, a boy who was imprisoned in an attic and could only survive by eating snakes and rats alive.
The boy in the dream was called a "demon" by the people around him because of his strange appearance and because he had four hands and two faces.
Eventually the blackened boy destroyed the entire village.
The pain of death awakened Yuriko, and she found the boy locked in the attic based on the information provided by the system.
The boy who had never felt kindness finally saw the outside world one day, and the woman who took his hand and led her away became his light.
Have a beard? Pangzhiye Chianjuanhuo Γ? Vinegar beat cut ┯ buckle sedan O cut stunned brain to the pocket model? Block? Leg bush controlling knock which cough protection? The dream of the dream Yina Meng Shuo times floating
Concept: Everyone is their own protagonist
Pre-receipt of the op-substitute literature to survive the curse return strategy journey
[op stand-in literature is still alive]
If the rebirth op starts in Windmill Village, the Monkey D clan has absolute strength and beauty, and grew up with three little ones, then it goes without saying that it is a perfect standard.
It's a pity that Susan, who was reborn as an op, is neither in Windmill Village nor a so-called bamboo horse. More importantly, she is still wearing a costume. Apart from being younger, she is completely incomparable with the op's aborigines with abnormal physiques.
As a weakling who is useless in combat, Susan is useless except for being able to apply cos makeup.
Just when Susan thought she would spend her whole life in this small town, a flamingo pirate ship broke the peace here.
The town without naval protection turned into hell overnight.
In order to survive, Susan cosplayed as Joker's mute mother just before boarding the ship.
After lurking for many years, Susan, who only wanted to escape to Windmill Village, was abducted to the monastery of the Big Mom Pirates after leaving the Don Quixote family.
With food, accommodation and wages included, the short-term peace made Susan feel the happiness that money brings.
Until that day the angry aunt destroyed the entire monastery.
In order to survive, Susan relied on the plot to cosplay with important people in the lives of various bosses, and unknowingly, her bounty became higher and higher.
Some people say that he is joker's underground lover?
Some people say that she is the daughter-in-law that the aunt likes?
Some people say that he is the mother of Fire Fist Ace?
Only Susan knows that everything is nonsense.
Curse Return Strategy Journey
As the heroine of a former 18x game, Yuriko was trapped in the sky and never left.
Until one day, a guy named [System] found her. In order to leave the unfolding plot, Yuriko agreed to the other party's request and went to Kyoto a thousand years ago.
Yuriko, who became the daughter of a samurai, met her first target, a boy who was imprisoned in an attic and could only survive by eating snakes and rats alive.
The boy in the dream was called a "demon" by the people around him because of his strange appearance and because he had four hands and two faces.
Eventually the blackened boy destroyed the entire village.
The pain of death awakened Yuriko, and she found the boy locked in the attic based on the information provided by the system.
The boy who had never felt kindness finally saw the outside world one day, and the woman who took his hand and led her away became his light.
Have a beard? Pangzhiye Chianjuanhuo Γ? Vinegar beat cut ┯ buckle sedan O cut stunned brain to the pocket model? Block? Leg bush controlling knock which cough protection? The dream of the dream Yina Meng Shuo times floating
There are some parts of this article that I still can't figure out clearly: Let's start with the beginning where the heroine travels here. Although she is said to be a Zhai, I think it is impossible for people not to miss the place where they have lived and grown up. If there are only painful memories, let's talk about it. However, the heroine has not shown much resistance to her original family, not to mention the author. Let's start by assuming that she has friends in the original world, so why has the heroine never expressed her longing for the original world since she traveled through time? If, teacher, you want to plant a foreshadowing that the heroine is originally a person in this world, how can I put it, the battle line is a bit long, and there is no sign at all, then I will treat it as if you have no setting.
Continuing with the above, the heroine not only did not express longing for her original world, but also never thought about going back. I think, generally speaking, she wants to go back, especially when the heroine later discovered that this world is high-risk. According to normal people's thinking, I have traveled to a B game world, so I want to go home. What should I do? Of course it is a strategy, but although the heroine has thought about the strategy a little bit, but you didn't notice, she didn't seem to take any action at all. He just thought in his mind and brushed it off. I can understand that the heroine doesn't want to be strategy 27 and wants to be friends with him. Helping him set up Kyoko is also what one would do to a good friend. But what about Awu? This character is very consistent with the setting of the second game. It is a popular character on campus. The heroine looks very good after losing weight. There is no reason not to take action. But you just write about the heroine learning step by step in this world. It seems that she is a person in this world and just got the love system by accident. She has no sense of urgency and the mentality that she will not do anything without conquering. It is too inconsistent. Isn't it contradictory to your previous setting?
Then there is the heroine and 27. I think in the heroine's heart, 27 is her best friend in the world. If I understand correctly, teacher, you are trying to express this. To be honest, the heroine has done a lot for 27. During the first week, I can see that she cherishes this friend, but the author has too little portrayal of 27's heart. The heroine helped him. , Although part of it was for herself, 27's reaction was a bit dull. In 27's heart, the heroine was very special. She was the first person who was willing to be friends with him when he didn't have a tutor, and she was also the first friend who took advantage of his illness just to teach those who bullied the school. This psychological description of 27 is really too plain. I knew that the heroine was important to 27, but I didn't see it clearly. I just felt that apart from the extra scenes, 27 and the heroine were just like ordinary friends.
Ah ah ah, the author will publish another chapter ah ah [crying] [crying]
Will there be any updates? !
I didn't expect that this article would be updated in my lifetime [I cover my face and laugh while crying]
I promised to come back in mid-May, but now it's almost July [crying] [crying] [crying]
It has been almost a year since I was 23 years old, and I have been writing for a year now. I have been updating regularly, and then I have been updating irregularly. I would write a leave note or explain it at the beginning, and now I am updating randomly, without any explanation. I haven't finished writing it for two weeks after writing for a year. In the past, I would be considerate of the author's troubles three times, but now it has almost become a matter of course not to update or explain. If the author really can't write, just solve v or just stop at the second week and don't do anything else.
I really like this article by the author, and I hope there will be more updates. I really check to see if there are any updates almost every time I visit Jinjiang.
What do you plan to write about this week? [Loading] Will the next time I see you be in November...
I can actually see this article updated in my lifetime
Pre-receipt of the op-substitute literature to survive the curse return strategy journey [op stand-in literature is still alive] If the rebirth op starts in Windmill Village, the Monkey D clan has absolute strength and beauty, and grew up with three little ones, then it goes without saying that it is a perfect standard. It's a pity that Susan, who was reborn as an op, is neither in Windmill Village nor a so-called bamboo horse. More importantly, she is still wearing a costume. Apart from being younger, she is completely incomparable with the op's aborigines with abnormal physiques. As a weakling who is useless in combat, Susan is useless except for being able to apply cos makeup. Just when Susan thought she would spend her whole life in this small town, a flamingo pirate ship broke the peace here. The town without naval protection turned into hell overnight. In order to survive, Susan cosplayed as Joker's mute mother just before boarding the ship. After lurking for many years, Susan, who only wanted to escape to Windmill Village, was abducted to the monastery of the Big Mom Pirates after leaving the Don Quixote family. With food, accommodation and wages included, the short-term peace made Susan feel the happiness that money brings. Until that day the angry aunt destroyed the entire monastery. In order to survive, Susan relied on the plot to cosplay with important people in the lives of various bosses, and unknowingly, her bounty became higher and higher. Some people say that he is joker's underground lover? Some people say that she is the daughter-in-law that the aunt likes? Some people say that he is the mother of Fire Fist Ace? Only Susan knows that everything is nonsense. Curse Return Strategy Journey As the heroine of a former 18x game, Yuriko was trapped in the sky and never left. Until one day, a guy named [System] found her. In order to leave the unfolding plot, Yuriko agreed to the other party's request and went to Kyoto a thousand years ago. Yuriko, who became the daughter of a samurai, met her first target, a boy who was imprisoned in an attic and could only survive by eating snakes and rats alive. The boy in the dream was called a "demon" by the people around him because of his strange appearance and because he had four hands and two faces. Eventually the blackened boy destroyed the entire village. The pain of death awakened Yuriko, and she found the boy locked in the attic based on the information provided by the system. The boy who had never felt kindness finally saw the outside world one day, and the woman who took his hand and led her away became his light. Have a beard? Pangzhiye Chianjuanhuo Γ? Vinegar beat cut ┯ buckle sedan O cut stunned brain to the pocket model? Block? Leg bush controlling knock which cough protection? The dream of the dream Yina Meng Shuo times floating
There are some parts of this article that I still can't figure out clearly: Let's start with the beginning where the heroine travels here. Although she is said to be a Zhai, I think it is impossible for people not to miss the place where they have lived and grown up. If there are only painful memories, let's talk about it. However, the heroine has not shown much resistance to her original family, not to mention the author. Let's start by assuming that she has friends in the original world, so why has the heroine never expressed her longing for the original world since she traveled through time? If, teacher, you want to plant a foreshadowing that the heroine is originally a person in this world, how can I put it, the battle line is a bit long, and there is no sign at all, then I will treat it as if you have no setting. Continuing with the above, the heroine not only did not express longing for her original world, but also never thought about going back. I think, generally speaking, she wants to go back, especially when the heroine later discovered that this world is high-risk. According to normal people's thinking, I have traveled to a B game world, so I want to go home. What should I do? Of course it is a strategy, but although the heroine has thought about the strategy a little bit, but you didn't notice, she didn't seem to take any action at all. He just thought in his mind and brushed it off. I can understand that the heroine doesn't want to be strategy 27 and wants to be friends with him. Helping him set up Kyoko is also what one would do to a good friend. But what about Awu? This character is very consistent with the setting of the second game. It is a popular character on campus. The heroine looks very good after losing weight. There is no reason not to take action. But you just write about the heroine learning step by step in this world. It seems that she is a person in this world and just got the love system by accident. She has no sense of urgency and the mentality that she will not do anything without conquering. It is too inconsistent. Isn't it contradictory to your previous setting? Then there is the heroine and 27. I think in the heroine's heart, 27 is her best friend in the world. If I understand correctly, teacher, you are trying to express this. To be honest, the heroine has done a lot for 27. During the first week, I can see that she cherishes this friend, but the author has too little portrayal of 27's heart. The heroine helped him. , Although part of it was for herself, 27's reaction was a bit dull. In 27's heart, the heroine was very special. She was the first person who was willing to be friends with him when he didn't have a tutor, and she was also the first friend who took advantage of his illness just to teach those who bullied the school. This psychological description of 27 is really too plain. I knew that the heroine was important to 27, but I didn't see it clearly. I just felt that apart from the extra scenes, 27 and the heroine were just like ordinary friends.
Ah ah ah, the author will publish another chapter ah ah [crying] [crying]
Will there be any updates? !
I didn't expect that this article would be updated in my lifetime [I cover my face and laugh while crying]
I promised to come back in mid-May, but now it's almost July [crying] [crying] [crying]
It has been almost a year since I was 23 years old, and I have been writing for a year now. I have been updating regularly, and then I have been updating irregularly. I would write a leave note or explain it at the beginning, and now I am updating randomly, without any explanation. I haven't finished writing it for two weeks after writing for a year. In the past, I would be considerate of the author's troubles three times, but now it has almost become a matter of course not to update or explain. If the author really can't write, just solve v or just stop at the second week and don't do anything else.
I really like this article by the author, and I hope there will be more updates. I really check to see if there are any updates almost every time I visit Jinjiang.
What do you plan to write about this week? [Loading] Will the next time I see you be in November...
I can actually see this article updated in my lifetime