? Don't tell me that my comment was swallowed by Jinjiang
It's quite sweet. Compared with the previous writing, it has been greatly improved, but the emotional changes should be a little more tactful and more ambiguous details should be described. For example, Gong Zai Shou would secretly look at him when eating, and would blush when he saw Shou bathing. I would like to improve the format of the article and add a few more blank lines, otherwise it will look really crowded. In short, if you write more, you will get used to it. I believe you will become a rising star of Jinjiang literature.
? Don't tell me that my comment was swallowed by Jinjiang
It's quite sweet. Compared with the previous writing, it has been greatly improved, but the emotional changes should be a little more tactful and more ambiguous details should be described. For example, Gong Zai Shou would secretly look at him when eating, and would blush when he saw Shou bathing. I would like to improve the format of the article and add a few more blank lines, otherwise it will look really crowded. In short, if you write more, you will get used to it. I believe you will become a rising star of Jinjiang literature.