Across the Green Mountains, We Meet Again

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I felt a bit dull after reading it, and originally wanted to give it up, but after enduring it, I couldn't help but write some comments (just some personal thoughts, I would like to put my armor first to show my sincerity. After reading the whole article, I feel that the logic is reasonable, but there are some weird things. What I want to ask is, since Su Miaoyuan and Su Huanan are biological sisters and belong to Penglai Island, wouldn't Miaoyuan pass the news to Huanan, who has been looking for Xiaoqiu for many years? Secondly, it is very strange that when Su Ling rescued Uncle Mu, where did Uncle Mu's symptoms come from? Did this strange disease appear out of thin air in a small village? There is also Ding Lingquan. This person teamed up with Li Muge to kill with such vicious motives. In the end, he did not eliminate the root cause and insisted on keeping Xiao Qiu and a sword. Moreover, I barely agree with the theory that it was a coincidence, but why did she keep Li Yanqing in the end and become a big problem? This person's portrayal gave me the impression that he was very strange, strange and contradictory. Moreover, the young owner of the village knew the truth, so why did he hide it from Xiaoqiu in the middle and even at the end? It was obvious that they already had a mutual understanding and had a common enemy, but the logic that everything seemed to be serving the plot made people feel so deliberate and artificially arranged. Including the third volume of Qiu Yi's exchange of feelings, the direct cause turned out to be an unknown person's reckless confession that caused a sea of jealousy. The young village owner and the unknown person were so different that they had the nerve to hint many times, and there was a buff like love at first sight in between. Logically everything makes sense, but when I read it, I felt like: Ah! The emotional scene encountered a bottleneck, so a tool was needed to push it. It was so deliberate that it felt uncomfortable and ingenious, like a painting with predetermined lines just waiting for someone to fill in the colors. I like the protagonist group very much. I hope the author and teacher can make it more vivid in the next book hehe. I think it's a good book, and because it's so good, I hope it's even better, so I couldn't help but finally review it! It's all just my personal thoughts... It is indeed very difficult to perfectly integrate the branch plot with the main plot.

It's better to be modern, it won't kill people at every turn...,,, It's perfect. Although modern pa is perfect, I'm still stumped.

This is a heartfelt martial arts novel. The best thing is that the author is always in sync with the readers. The unit drama format guides the readers to experience one "script killing" after another. Whether it's martial arts, machinations, or suspense, the worst thing I'm afraid of is that the author is just enjoying his grudges, leaving readers confused. Although it is a relatively common revenge story, each unit is very immersive, and there are some fresh and bold ideas that make the whole novel unconventional. Renyuan Village is particularly well written. The doctor who seems to have nothing to do with the main plot connects the whole line of solving the case. The reason why the kind-hearted doctor was killed was not only the tradition of favoring boys over girls in the backward village, but also the ignorance of the villagers who helped the oppressor, and the patriarch's privileges above the law under the clan system. Of course, there was inevitably a trouble-making second generation who was greedy for life and feared death, and relied on his privileges to cry out to catch thieves. The martial arts world seems far away from modern society, but it is clear that these phenomena have not disappeared today. The mechanism imagination of Baiyingmen is also very unique, with the ups and downs of breaking through levels and the ingenious conception of magical instruments. On the one hand, I feel that it should be impossible in ancient society, but on the other hand, I feel that I have to respect the wisdom of our ancestors. The only flaw is that the reason for the apprentice to betray and massacre the entire sect is a bit thin. It would be better if this was connected with the main plot. Looking at the whole story, it seems that it just creates a reason for the fifth-ranked person in the martial arts competition to join the top four team. The climax of the revenge drama comes from the discovery that the enemy is actually an elder who has been treated tenderly since childhood. The author manages this background of grudges and hatred very well. The escape and ambivalence of the protagonist are also human nature. Often the least defensive people have the weapons that are easiest to betray, but those who one day can kill with familiarity will eventually be killed by familiarity!

Dad, do you still remember the competition between Xu Yinzhi and Alin?

The writing is really good. I seldom read martial arts themes, so I tried to read it. I was gradually attracted by the author's writing step by step. I really like the interaction between the protagonists, and the plot is also very attractive. Otherwise, I would not be able to watch it. The characters are very rich and three-dimensional, and each has its own characteristics. I am a little uncomfortable with Qiu's mother and Lin, but I also know that there will always be a mixture of sadness and joy. I rarely write reviews after reading novels for so many years, but the author you write is really good. I look forward to your next book. It would be better if there were immortal heroes in the future

One person's evil thoughts can destroy so many people, hey

I've finished watching it, it's a good read, Lin Ximu is really upset, our five-person group is soooooo

Dad, do you still remember the competition between Xu Yinzhi and Alin?

But in the end, the concentric poison of Han Zheng was not solved 💔