Old Wang

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It actually made me cry when I saw it at the end!

The capitalization is very good (•̀∀•́) But... My male idol is called Wang Yi OTZ

Apart from the fact that it's everywhere, I'm not used to it, it's not interesting yet, and it feels like it's never finished.

Yeah~ When I saw the reveal, I didn't know why the settings of the kid and the flying general looked so familiar. . So Goudan became Emperor Xuan of the Han Dynasty! ?

What is happiness in life? Everyone has different opinions.

A very touching article. . But having said that, Lao Wang's death at the end is indeed a bit weird. .

Those who have chosen life for others and are deprived of their choice may not have no complaints. Only people who have experienced it can know whether it is worth it. If you don't have the opportunity to choose, you will lose comparison. If you lose comparison, this happiness will be dull and tasteless.

Short articles generally require exquisite and clever layout. The layout of this article is a traditional suspense guidance route. Moreover, the plot of this article is also very traditional, and there is not much sense of surprise. However, it is very good to express a story completely in a very short space. There is just one arrangement of this story that I personally think is not good, that is, Wang Rui's death is not necessary in Douguou's opinion, so the suspense here is superfluous. First of all, everything has basically been settled, and there is no need for Wang Rui, who has lived peacefully for so many years, to die at this time. It was probably to add a touch of mystery to the whole story at the end, but the logic didn't match, so it became a minor flaw. In addition, the name Wang Rui should be a pseudonym, Prince Rui, using the same word Rui. What kind of feelings does this person have towards Prince Rui? Is it resentment? However, judging from the lines at the beginning of the article, there does not seem to be much emotion between Wang Rui and Prince Rui. Here, Wang Rui, a person who lives in seclusion in the mountains and forests, should not be named with the same word Rui as Prince Rui. You should put a little thought into choosing a name~ The above is just my own opinion and may not be correct, so please don't mind. The above is the opinion of [Kongjun Commentary]. Please forgive me if there is any bias.

That. . . What I don't understand is whether it has anything to do with the longevity lock? Beautifully written~