[The blurb is pretty good, but the tension is lacking and the plot hasn't really unfolded. Read with caution.]
[What am I even writing? 1.0]
Su Ruoruo transmigrates into a xianxia novel as a cannon-fodder supporting female character and saves a very handsome passerby.
Su Ruoruo has been in this world for so long that the System has run out of power and gone offline. She's completely in the dark and has no idea who anyone is.
Worried that the passerby might be an important character, but unable to bring herself to abandon him, Su Ruoruo takes especially good care of him. As soon as he's well enough to get out of bed and walk, she hurries to send him on his way.
But he simply refuses to leave. He silently follows her, holds an umbrella for her when it rains, makes dinner for her at night, gives her a carved hairpin for her birthday, protects her when demon beasts attack, and even says things like he wants to repay her by giving himself to her.
Su Ruoruo: How could I not fall for him?
The two are just one step away from confessing their feelings when the System finally comes online: Host, the person beside you is the second male lead. He loves the female lead but cannot have her, so he turns evil and eventually kills himself.
Su Ruoruo: ...
Later, when the female lead comes to find her, Su Ruoruo makes an excuse to leave home. She wears a carefree smile, but the moment she turns away, her eyes redden.
According to the plot, he will leave with the female lead and begin their own tale of love and hate. None of this has anything to do with Su Ruoruo.
As rain poured down, Su Ruoruo sat not far from home and suddenly felt the rain stop.
She looked up. He was holding an umbrella over her, gazing at her with gentle eyes.
"Ruoruo, let's go home."
P.S.:
Su Ruoruo x Xie Xuan (Xiaoxi)
The male lead has a frail constitution, a fragile, broken quality, and is helpless when left to his own devices. These traits may show up at any time.
The male lead is viciously strong in a fight, but especially gentle with the female lead! Especially devoted!
There may occasionally be gender-bender scenes, such as the sickly beauty being on the receiving end (.
The male lead has never been in love with the original female lead.
One-on-one romance, happy ending.
Theme: True love gives you courage.
You are the villain of ancient Chinese literature!!!! Today's villains are no longer so easily angered! They are all calm and composed
Why does the male protagonist have such a high affection for the female protagonist? Is it because of the nestling complex + life-saving grace?
The selection of copywriting materials seems very attractive ~ I want to add some sugar in it! At this point, I feel that the heroine is not very likable: probably because the character and emotions are not well detailed, which leads to the heroine's character being a little self-centered or having her own whims, and the male protagonist is also a character who only follows the settings that he likes the heroine. It feels more like fitting two characters into a story frame and forcing the interpretation. It is straight to the point. The way of telling is more outline and not old-fashioned. The logic of the scene change is a little abrupt and feels a bit anxious! Maybe this style will work better in a short story! But congratulations on the finish!
Actually, I don't understand... The female protagonist knows that the male protagonist is wanted by the Xiaoyao Sect, and she also feels that the male protagonist has been wronged. Why should she go to the Xiaoyao Sect instead of other sects...
Love always starts by wondering if he hates me
I feel like the emotional line is too fast, a bit baffling, and I don't really like the heroine.
I finished the story, and the emotional line was a bit fast. I don't know when the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist, and the villain was easily defeated. But I quite like this kind of thing. I don't have time to read a long novel with a long word count at work. The heroine is really easy to get caught. Every time the heroine is caught, the plot is driven. The hero does not open his mouth to misunderstand and relies on the setting of the concentric spell, which gives a sense of deliberate plot setting. But the writing is smooth and the information density is high so you won't feel bored. In Chapter 30 of other novels, the male and female protagonists are probably still recovering in the hospital, and to be honest, even if other novels are so long-winded, not many of them have written the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists. The GB chapter is the highlight chapter. I love it so much. Why don't you write more (I wish I could meet my mother-in-law). In fact, I really want to see the male protagonist save the female protagonist because he has dragged her down, and his mental journey from being a father who never bothers others to being desperate for his own safety. I can also understand the emotional changes of the female protagonist. I think this story is a cookie with reasonable character motivations and a little twists and turns in love, which is not bad! The key point is that I didn't balance Xiaoshu and Liuli in the end, which was ok!
I like the great writing style!
Wow, I just like to see some gentle male protagonists!
Oh my God, how could this worldly expert become such an expert if he was so ignorant?