I sent Yiwen to borrow a fish basket, thinking he wouldn’t be back so soon. Tianyao was still asleep, and he seemed utterly exhausted. His lips were pale, yet irresistibly alluring. I leaned closer, and the scent of his hair mingled with the smell of fresh grass, intoxicating me. I kissed his cheek, then closed my eyes and kissed his lips. They felt a little cold, but the touch sent a shock through me! He suddenly sat up and shoved me away, his face deathly pale with fright.
“What are you doing?” he gasped.
I smiled. Perhaps I seemed like some terrifying monster to him! Just then, I heard Yiwen’s footsteps approaching.
Theme:
"It was my first time to travel long distance away from home, but perhaps there is no traveler in the world who is more unlucky than me. As soon as I left the station, it started raining heavily and continuously, soaking me all over. A trolley suitcase I was carrying was broken by someone, so I had to half carry it and half pull it. Now I have spent a lot of effort to find this apartment, and I sincerely pray that God will not let me down." What bad luck! Hehe!
Haha I feel a little comfortable...
Good. I saw some shadows. Feeling distressed.
Is this the end? But it's pretty good-looking
Thank you for your opinions. Ha, this is my first time writing, so there are inevitably some shortcomings. I need everyone to give more suggestions to make progress!
Well written