
Hakuoki Fanfiction: The Setting Sun's Light Flows Through the Twilight River
薄樱鬼同人 斜阳薄暮川流光
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I was shocked to realize that this article was written ten years ago.
Originally, I just came here for Hakuoki, but I didn't expect to find a surprise. I initially read the comments after reading the first few chapters, but it was the content in the comments section that first piqued my interest. So I continued reading with such curiosity, and I couldn't take it back. I read this article almost without interruption. Guangjun is very attractive to me in the story. Through the various thoughts and actions of her and Minghai, I often seem to have some indescribable feelings and shocks during the reading process. Forgive me for not describing this feeling to you in detail (although I really want to), but it is still very difficult for me now to try to form a large series of clear and clear insights. This kind of difficulty and shock often occurs... After reading Minghai's article, I felt some of your thoughts. As for the fact that I can only feel but cannot express, it is probably because I still haven't grown up enough. I often want to read fanfiction and yy, but I am often attracted to this type of writing with an uneasy tone. Maybe I still have something to search for in my heart, and I am confused and need to find some support. But now I realize that this inner "disadvantage" is also my opportunity. Just like I think a person's characteristics should not be simply and crudely divided by "advantages and disadvantages", but should be called "characteristics." Haha, it's easy to have a desire to talk late at night~ When I clicked on this article on Jinjiang, I felt like I had opened the door and walked into an old garden with few people but lush vegetation. It has been about 5 years since this article was written, and the latest comment was a year ago. I couldn't help but feel lonely while reading the article... However, I still write this review with the hope that the author will visit me one day~
In the end, such a big time span really made me... Speechless. Why do you feel like crying? The only one who survived to the end was Minghai. Those children of the past, those vivid figures Gone far away after all…
The Shinsengumi is disbanded... Although there is always a sense of powerlessness about the inevitable ending of history, the ending in the article is considered a good thing for everyone.
Maybe Minghai will no longer see my comments... Read the full article. As a junior high school kid, I am actually a bit naive, but what I like most about Kawakami is that even if she hates a person, she can still see his advantages and put him in the right position. Even if she likes a person, she will not be overly partial and impose many things on him that are not suitable for him. Such a person is really rare. The eighth chapter of "The Great Learning" says this: "People love what they love and hate. They hate what they despise and hate. They fear and respect people. They mourn and cherish. They hate what they hate. Therefore, there are only a few people in the world who know their evils when they are good and know their beauty when they are evil." In my opinion, this is actually the case with Kawakami. Of course, this is just the opinion of a junior high school student, and Kawakami may not think so in Minghai's heart. After all, there are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand people. I have to say that this article by Minghai is indeed a rare masterpiece among fans. It is not just romance or sweetness, but it contains your historical views or values, Minghai.
Now that I am planning to go abroad, I almost cry when I look at my childish words back then. Oh, by the way, Minghai-san, can you come back... I recently took the IELTS exam and wanted to hit the wall. I got 6 in one month. I just finished the college entrance examination and I couldn't do it... In fact, when I read this passage again, I feel it is incredible. Some things never expire anywhere. In the past, present and future, people cannot be static. Of course, some things cannot be changed. The future is difficult and the fate is misfortunate. I don't know where I will go, and I don't know if my ideals are still there. When I said this, I was very serious about becoming a diplomat. Now I just want to rest in a corner and spend my life without worries about food and clothing. I don't know what this change is, maybe I know it but don't want to admit it. In the past three years, I have fought with people, skipped classes, been on the red list of grades, had heart attacks, been hospitalized, my parents were seriously ill, and I have been taking god-like drugs for depression. I have made new friends and made a lot of friends. I also feel happy when I am called Mrs. Now that I am back, I really have to thank the Internet. My memory is still stored in the virtual data and has not been erased. It is really, great.
Hello Minghai, I watched "Setting Sun" a long time ago, and I wrote comments and tweets in 2011, but I haven't responded here. To be honest, I'm not sure how to respond, because everything I want to say is written in that tweet, so please forgive me and just post it in the tweet (I watch "Setting Sun" two years later, and I don't know if my feelings will be much different from that time) This work is generally good. Marisu uses it very well. The heroine is not overly strong. The author does not play with history arbitrarily. Instead, he handles history very carefully and does special homework. Human beings have a tendency to play tricks on others by nature. The more powerful and powerful they are, the more they like to play with others. Super-powerful protagonists, a specific history of a certain race, time-travel elements, magic circles, etc. Are all familiar. If the writer is not very skilled, using these elements may become his biggest failure. However, in this work, it can be seen that the author Naomi has carefully managed this work. He has considered a wide range of aspects, not only the history of the Shinsengumi. The history also includes how the protagonist learned the language of the time, the various factions, the political situation at the time, the character's personality, etc. These elements are intertwined and intricate. If you don't do enough homework before writing, and just follow your own ideas, it will definitely "super unfold", especially the background of the novel was a very chaotic era at the time. However, one needs more experience to read his novels. People who have read them after graduating from high school or who have entered the society early will be more able to relate to them. In many places, the author's writing is very obscure, and even I, a college student, found it a bit difficult to read. In addition to my favorites of Kawakami Hikaru and Nakai Yaichi, Saito Kazuo's description is pretty good, and Ito Koshitaro is also my favorite. The author describes Ito's ideas, talents, and swordsmanship very well, without any sense of violation, and he also steals the show, which is impressive. It's rare that I can read a full-length novel in one sitting. I highly recommend it to everyone. If you don't mind the author's negative descriptions of your favorite characters, then read it now! I believe you won't regret it! In addition, regarding history, because I first read Mr. Lu Lizhou's "Meiji Restoration - Japan's Journey towards Modernization" and then read "The Setting Sun", regarding the last emperor, I think it is impossible to depose the emperor, unless certain conditions are met to depose or someone dares to challenge the impossible task, but it is currently impossible (the existence of the emperor is very subtle. I asked a Japanese teacher who teaches Japanese history what kind of existence the emperor is, and he could not give a clear answer) I like the "Winter Day" chapter very much, and I'm slowly finishing it. Saito's description techniques in that chapter are more mature than those in "The Setting Sun", and his character and way of speaking are also very well written. Reading "Winter Day" is like reading the official novel of "Hakuoki"
The content is in-depth and the writing is good. After reading it, my worldview and values have been upgraded. All in all, Minghai is very talented and awesome
After reading this article by Ming Hai, I was really touched. Just a few days ago, I made what may be the most important decision of my past twenty years. With my parents and friends only giving advice, I was very confused. It was at this time that I read Ming Hai's "To the Reader". In this era of fast-food literature, to be honest, there are very few authors who can calm down and think seriously. Who said that the third young master of the Tang family said that nowadays, Jin Yong will not be popular when he writes online, because he cannot write several chapters a day (laughs) Because there is a demand, there will be a market. The author's superficiality comes from the impetuousness of the readers. In this case, it is really emotional to see such serious suggestions from Minghai. . . . . . . What am I talking about! ! I'm going too far. Anyway, Minghai, cough, I really want to make friends. Can we continue communicating elsewhere? By the way, I'm a girl. This is my email hyy0605@126. Com If you are jet-lagged, it would be better to leave your email.
Before replying, what I want to say is that I am desperate. I edited four times in a row. The first three times I closed the web editing browser by myself. The last time, my hand shook and all the notepad on my mobile phone disappeared. In total... I have two thousand words! My character is so bad that I am even worse than Ah Yin Bu Lian Xin Ba Ji! Okay, now I will put together my thoughts on the first review and two chapters of Xianyang (with tears streaming down my face). The first is "living for the sake of life". This is not wrong because the ideal of most people is that this young man has this kind of thinking because the current social burden is too heavy, so being able to live is a great satisfaction. Few people have such thoughts and consciousness, such as the time when there is no self, and paying for the invisible future. This is not wrong. Isn't there a saying that says, "What you have today is the tomorrow that those who died yesterday expected"? And many people also think "even if I do it, it's not my turn", so people who can give everything are either crazy or have great love (the second one is not a derogatory meaning). The second is the news network. What the people want to know is only what they want to know. Besides, what people believe and are willing to believe is the truth. Who will pursue the multiple transfers of information? Ah, but of course I am not willing to give in. But after I have recognized the facts and no longer insist on anything, I just feel disappointed and confused, and then "live for life" (laughing) The third thing is about making your own decisions and not being afraid of failure. First of all, what I want to say is that every time I type here the first four times, the words will disappear, so I will save them first. For example, Xiang Yu raised an army and committed suicide in Wujiang. Regardless of whether Jiangdong's fathers could tolerate his failure and support his comeback, he himself could not bear this failure and committed suicide. Because from the time he raised the army to the time of defeat, he made all the decisions by himself. Facing failure, even the first failure, he couldn't bear it. After accepting the reality, he "had no face to face Jiangdong's elders" and saw the sun from behind. Moreover, before his death, he repeatedly emphasized that his decision was correct and that "heaven is going to kill me." Letting others make decisions for you is like this. "Even if you fail, you don't have to take full responsibility because the main fault is not mine." This kind of thinking is to make excuses and gain understanding and forgiveness from others. People, especially Asians, rarely accept phrases like "make a comeback" and "failure is the mother of success". Instead, they are happy with phrases like "hit the ground running", "get off to a good start", "new officials take office with three things in mind" and "immediate success". Failure is not allowed, and people rarely tolerate or reuse losers. At this time, an excuse is very important. If you say "this decision is not mine", although others will also wonder "didn't you fail because you chose to listen to him in the end?", But after all, you have reservations so people will not be disappointed with you, and you still have the opportunity to start over. This is the necessity of the phenomenon of "letting others make decisions for you". The person making the decision can say, "The decision he asked me to make, I don't know if it is right or not," and the person being decided can say, "It was not my idea." Therefore, making your own decisions is easier said than done. The difficulty ultimately lies in the "shame" in people's hearts. They do not allow themselves to stand up and do not allow themselves to trust and support people who have failed, because they may say that they have failed completely. Who knows whether they or themselves will succeed next time. Everyone strives to achieve it in one step, and failure is an intolerable shame. Mr. Daisuke Kondo pointed out in his article "Shame, Conspiracy and Special Effects: The Resurrection of Japan's New Prime Minister", "In the Japanese subconscious... It is the biggest insult to be said "あのは らずだ"". "Shame means failure, failure in life, failure in doing things. Once you fail, you will no longer be trusted by others. It is best to leave yourself a room for change. Obviously, if you don't make a decision and others do, you are preparing for failure, because no one will tolerate losers, and not many people can have 100% confidence in themselves that they can succeed. Well, I thought of this much first, and I am very happy to meet people like Minghai. 2013.01