My Nen Abilities Are Chrollo and Ging

King, you must be magnanimous! (Best friends, awesome!)

In front of Pariston, Hisoka's perversion is not worth mentioning :)

Pariston is so perverted

Congratulations on the ending. It's really well written. What moved me the most is that what I saw in this article is not just about falling in love with so and so, but really feeling the heroine's growth and transformation. I can also feel the wanton joy and the hunter's spirit of never-ending exploration. It really captures the most attractive part of the hunter's worldview. ! Of course it would be better if there is a side story of Dong, I like him very much.

In fact, we can create another extra episode, just make it a little more subtle.

That's it!!! Ah!! I really want to see how awkward everyone is with Ayan!!!

It's rare to see a novel written in Jinjiang that has the ability to read, this kind of exciting fighting style and Hunter World style. The grasp of character design can be said to be top-notch. The character design of the heroine is also very good and fits the style of a hunter. The growth of the heroine is perfectly written. It is a real growth that readers can feel. It is easy to appreciate the charm of the heroine. It can be said that the early and middle stages are very good. Whether it is the original content or the character design, the mastery of fighting and the arrangement of the plot, there is a charm that is unique to the hunter and does not make people feel uncomfortable. But in the later stage, it seems that due to the rush to finish, the characters felt a bit one-sided, such as Wheat, and it felt that its own charm was not particularly described, and it seemed that it was completely forgotten in the later stage. The fundamental reason is that the level of plot has dropped somewhat due to too many characters. (This seems to be a common problem among many Shura films with multiple male protagonists. Because of the large number of characters and the short length, the article is relatively compact, and there is not too much text to overlay the plot and lubricate the marginal characters.) Many fringe characters were passed over in one stroke. It feels like something is not right since the Ant King ended up entering the Dark Continent. Maybe it's because the original work envisioned the Dark Continent too wonderfully, but it can only be said that it didn't particularly express the charm of the Dark Continent itself. Moreover, the battle of wits and fighting scenes were all rushed through, and I just kept throwing out settings and sugar-coatings. It may also be due to my personal reasons. I always feel that if the author can be given more time in the later stage, he can write a more exciting plot. The ending in the later period was a bit too fast. If I could write more, I feel that the Dark Continent chapter could be written more excitingly. But no matter what, the portrayal of the character Jin Fulisi in this article is really the best among all the novels I have read. The character's personality and tension are reflected in the original work. It is perfectly explained in this article. The character itself has extraordinary charm. I'm really happy to see this kind of interpretation of the characters perfectly expressed in fan fiction. Moreover, the wits and fighting scenes in this article are really the best among the best, especially among Jinjiang novels. My God, even among Qidian novels, I have only read three that can be compared with the author. This is really, really wonderful. The author can try to write a long novel. Because the author's grasp of the character itself and the world of the original work are really top-notch. And the author is really good at writing the growth and changes of characters. All in all, very good work, very good hunter heroine and very good Kim. ❤️

Because the author completely loves Pariston. . . Great God of Authors, give me Paris's extras!!

It's really great. The heroine's growth path is reasonable and delicate, and the most important thing to say is the emotional line (╥╥) Nowadays, many fan fictions don't write about emotions from 0, or they just pull the progress bar to skip if they are full of good feelings. It always gives me a feeling that is inexplicable, but the author really writes it very well, and brings out the emotions. Progressing layer by layer, from the initial entertainment to interest to attraction to liking, every emotional turning point is very reasonable, and when writing the battle process, I was completely involved. The hunter's spirit is so exciting and not boring at all. There is also the transformation of Mu Yan, ah ah ah ah, I like it so much, I want to become Mu Yan's chef too!!!

So does the college entrance examination make you happy like this? Why do you have to take it? That's outrageous.