May All Your Wishes Come True

I read the author's Substitute Beauty first, and then came here to read this one. I stayed up late reading both of them, and I really couldn't stop. I think the writing is very good, very coherent, and there are no particularly obvious logical problems. But I really want to know what Gu Sheng is thinking, trying to kill himself by himself... In addition, I think that the list issue that I have been complaining about in the comments might be able to be listed if the author had a less ridiculous name hahaha