The Peerless Beauty Chooses a Bad Ending [Quick Transmigration]

I am still very grateful to the author for listening to the suggestions and finishing it well. The author seems to be as gentle as his own writing style. Finally, let me talk about my feelings. The last story does not have a sense of melancholy, but a sense of confusion. As a young man, I actually understand these confusions. It is like a snowflake falling from the sky, not knowing where it is floating. The keyword in the title of the article is "Stunning Heartthrob", but the author doesn't seem to think that face determines everything, and appearance is power. On the contrary, the heroine always encounters various twists and turns because of her face. In the era of backward productivity, the heroine is not free enough, in the era of advanced technology, the heroine is relatively free. The heroine becomes a fairy, and the heroine is relatively free. Regardless of the heroine's appearance, I think the heroine is just a confused young man. I guess the author is also confused, so there is no way to write a heroine who is not confused. I am also confused, so I also see confusion. I hope everyone can find the freedom they want! Finally, I would like to suggest that in the next article, you can refine the core ideas you want to write first, and don't make the main line too scattered. Come on! It would be a loss to us readers if we don't write more articles with such good writing style.

Pre-collection★ "Passerby A is far away happily!" She was just an ordinary passerby. Apart from her excessive beauty, there was nothing special about her. When the protagonist of Counter Attack was hit by a sword and fell to the ground bleeding, a passerby walked past the protagonist. When the beautiful and powerful villain was betrayed and lay like a dog in a mass grave with all his meridians cut off, a passerby walked past the villain. When... On this day, passerby A was suddenly caught by his ankle. Protagonist and villain: "If you don't save me, you will die." A passerby stomped on and broke the wrists of the protagonist and villain. Sorry, the plot of rescuing them does not belong to Passerby A. A few years have passed, and I am still a stranger all over the world. However, those people blocked her way. "I said, if you don't save me, you will die." Passerby A did not die, she became the lover they could not keep despite all their efforts. Passerby, regardless of love or hatred, just go away happily! Reading tips: The heroine is a passerby in N book.

To be honest, I think it is right to weaken the character of the heroine, because this book always alludes to reality, and alluding to reality will easily make readers feel a sense of violation, because reality itself is contrary to the setting of the book. Reality will not have this kind of heartthrob. Even if it is particularly beautiful, no one will love it so much that it will change itself. Love is loyal and unswerving, and it is not uncommon for beauties to be let down in this era. . . So what exactly is Awang that fits the setting of the book? Forgetting is desire. Ah Wang is their deepest desire, so they can no longer look away when they see her. Too few people can say no to their own desires, and too many people are obsessed with their own desires, loyal and loyal until they die. So weakening A Wang, she seems to be no longer a person

The author's writing style is very good and he can go to great heights. I would like to give you some advice: to have the patience to finish writing a world and to polish the plot. If the writing style is in place, the only thing missing is the plot. At present, most of the stories end with the heroine being raised. The heroine is a fairy. I don't know if she is satisfied with this ending, but the ending gives people a sense of melancholy. I feel that something is missing.

This ending is considered to be in the earthly world. Fortunately, the author did not write a drifting ending every time like in ancient society. The modern background is still influential. The heroine, a weak person, has become stronger.

It felt a bit rushed, and the other characters weren't introduced much.

When you like someone, you are afraid that she will know, but you are also afraid that she will not know, you are afraid that she will know but pretend not to know.

It's so sad. I have to follow the same old path as the teacher. One person cannot fight against the entire order system.

Yeah, yeah, the eldest brother has taken over. I feel that his personality is suitable for the heroine. The heroine is also emotionally moved in the second world.

The relationship between the two of them is so sad and happy at the same time. If you don't think about it, just treat it as eternal freedom.