I Offer You Mountains and Rivers to Win Your Smile

Aha, my little Mumu

I thought it was a happy short article, but I didn't expect...

Come here to make up for the points, come on^^

Yeah, it was so touching. I almost burst into tears.

He only wanted a virtuous king, not a lover. He slowly killed his lover... I felt sad instantly when I saw these two sentences T T.

He has never loved, but has always loved Good calligraphy

Tears running, Mr. Vomiting Blood was tortured

At first, I didn't quite understand the conversation between Shuzhen and the Brigadier. I thought it was a bit confusing... The insertion was too sudden... And it's actually BE, so cruel... T_T

He stood up from the chair with almost a jump and rushed forward two steps - "Two steps" I think it's good, but it's so cruel. T T The author recommends a BE article on his birthday. It's not kind~

In some places, the third person "he" is used continuously, which is a bit difficult to understand. When I read it for the first time, I didn't understand the "What else does he have to say? It was he who said at that time that he wanted a virtuous king, not a lover. So he gave him a virtuous king, and then slowly killed his lover." Who specifically refers to "he" and "him" here, and then I felt that my enthusiasm for reading was affected, which made me a little depressed. The next few sentences were written in a hurry. The overall plot is good. Since the idea of ​​the story is based on the phrase "offering mountains and rivers to please you", it means that if you can choose a beautiful woman from a beautiful country, you will naturally offer him a kingdom to please your sweetheart. In the story, the country is offered to you, but your sweetheart is not necessarily happy at all. The whole article does not have the reckless joy and freedom in the lyrics, but seems depressing. In the final analysis, both people are tossing. The two of them were doing their own thing, and the couple didn't understand the style.