Building the Number One Magic School from Scratch
从零建成魔法第一校
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Tweet the next door to receive the "Manual for the Construction of the First Village of Immortality" in advance ~ the copy is as follows: How to quickly become the head of the first village to cultivate immortality? Ye Wei'an said it was very simple. First of all, he was born and raised in a village full of powerful people. Then, he took the initiative to challenge the current village chief and forced him to abdicate in favor of someone more worthy. The current village chief, who has been complaining every day about not wanting to work and encouraging others to usurp the throne, will hurriedly give up his position to you. After completing the above two steps, congratulations, you have successfully become the village chief of the first village to cultivate immortality! What! The broken system doesn't even acknowledge it, so I have to continue following the process to complete the task? ! Damn it, I really want to mess it up. Anyway, there is a village boss protecting you, so what are you afraid of? Wait, does the village chief really have so many things to deal with? Ye Wei'an cried out sadly. Village chief, you are so busy! The head of the No. 1 Immortal Cultivation Village is working even harder!
Ha? I feel cheated, all I can say is that it didn't meet my expectations at all.
It's begun! The annulment stream!
I feel like this sentence doesn't flow smoothly.
Tie. I feel that the content written by the author is not able to arouse the readers' emotions. It is refreshing, but it is not thorough enough. Goldfinger has the same problem. Maybe the narrative rhythm needs to be adjusted again, or the text may need to be refined? It's at the level of "If I don't subscribe to v, I will continue to watch it. If I subscribe to v, I will consider whether to renew."
Why not learn the letters first? Just come up with the words.
Ah? What on earth is Old John talking about? I probably didn't notice the substitution.
. As I said before, the pampered young master was sent to the village in a society with obvious class divisions, and suddenly he became polite and courteous...
"Natural Monsters" is a big thorn in the side of the author~Natural Magic
"Extremely bland" gives the author a big bug ~ he is afraid