My new novel, After Mistaking the Divine Lord for a Substitute, is now available! Come check it out!
This story: [Sweet-and-Sour Second Senior Sister x Gorgeous, Strong, and Ruthless Eldest Senior Brother] This is my first original work, and it has plenty of flaws. Read with caution!
"Blurb"
Other people cultivate the Dao to become immortals. Chi Yu cultivates the Dao so she can be reborn.
After dying, she lost her memories because her soul was incomplete. She wandered by the Bridge of Helplessness for three hundred years, accompanied only by an old tree she had planted herself.
One day, the old tree suddenly said, "Go to the human world and collect the Seven Suffering Spirit Artifacts for me. Once you've done that, I'll send you into the cycle of reincarnation."
So Chi Yu returned to the human world in a body made from the tree's heartwood and joined Wanyun Pavilion, the foremost sect of immortal cultivation.
The good news was that, for some inexplicable reason, she became the sect's beloved Second Senior Sister. As the only alchemist in a school full of sword cultivators, she began a life of heavenly luxury, with food brought to her and clothes put on her back.
The bad news was that Eldest Senior Brother Mu Zhoushan had an immortal's looks and a venomous heart. He was polite to her on the surface, but had tried to kill her several times in private.
Chi Yu: "Old Tree, I want that guy as my henchman and bodyguard. I won't feel guilty about manipulating him."
Immortal Tree: "..."
It had gone to so much trouble to bring the two of them together in the human world for one lifetime. How had things ended up like this?
"At first"
Chi Yu tried every possible way to win over her Eldest Senior Brother.
When he was injured, she secretly brought him all kinds of miraculous elixirs. When he had a secret, she played along with him in front of the disciples and never once pried into his private affairs. When he was in danger, she made meticulous preparations, then pretended to risk her life to save him...
Chi Yu: I want my Eldest Senior Brother to feel more and more indebted to me, so he'll willingly do things for me. But why is he looking at me more and more strangely?
"Later"
"I've known for a long time that you want the spirit artifacts," Mu Zhoushan said. "You don't have to feel awkward about asking, A-Yu. As long as you stay by my side, I'll do anything for you."
Chi Yu stared blankly at Mu Zhoushan and thought: But if you give me the artifacts, I'll have to leave the human world, and leave you, forever.
Suddenly, she smiled. Her smile was more dazzling than the flowers on the branches at Xunfang Pavilion. She said to Mu Zhoushan, "That's all I need to hear, Eldest Senior Brother. I don't want the Seven Suffering Spirit Artifacts anymore."
I don't want the chance to be reborn as a human, either.
For you, I'm willing to be trapped here for all eternity.
It turned out that she had wandered in the underworld for three hundred years to fulfill her dream of walking this road by his side for one lifetime.
[Reading Guide]
1. One-on-one romance, both leads are each other's one and only. Tragic past life, happy ending in this life. My own take on immortal cultivation, with plenty of original worldbuilding.
2. The heroine's identity is revealed throughout. At first, she's an emotionless reincarnation machine. The romance develops slowly, with a large ensemble cast and no rivalry between women.
3. They are mutually in love. Their personalities differ considerably between their two lives, and the leads clearly distinguish between their past and present selves.
4. This is my first original work and has plenty of flaws, so I don't really recommend it. I'm working hard to improve. Thank you for your patience, and feedback is welcome! ^ ^
Old-school, melodramatic romance: After Mistaking the Divine Lord for a Substitute
[True ice-cold War God Crown Prince x Fake mad, beautiful mermaid demon] Eastern-inspired setting
A shocking scandal rocked the Divine Realm.
Sui Sui, the divine shadow who had served the War God Crown Prince Li Yue for a hundred years, was actually a spy sent to the Divine Realm by the mermaid demons.
As war between the divine race and the mermaid demons loomed, the gods demanded that Sui Sui be punished for betraying the divine race. Yet, for reasons no one understood, Li Yue only imprisoned her in the Celestial Prison and never allowed the divine executioner to pass judgment.
Everyone feared the Crown Prince had fallen under the mermaid demons' spell, but they depended on his unrivaled power as the strongest War God in the Three Realms, so they dared not speak up.
On the day of the great battle, Sui Sui broke free of her chains and fled through the chaos toward the Mermaid King.
Li Yue formed an arrow of divine power, wrapped it in Zhu Rong's true fire, and sent it streaking across the sky, piercing Sui Sui's heart.
Everyone breathed a sigh of relief, praising the Crown Prince for showing mercy to all living things, upholding his divine nature, and resisting the demon's allure.
But after the mermaid demon clan was annihilated, Li Yue's blue robes were stained red with blood. His spiritual power spent, he searched the battlefield from end to end, desperate to find Sui Sui, who had already drawn her last breath. He carefully carried her back to the divine palace.
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On the seventh day after Sui Sui's death, Li Yue was still using his spiritual power to preserve her body. He refused to give her a funeral befitting a fallen god.
"Keep saving her." His usually indifferent gray-violet eyes were now clouded with darkness as he ordered Jiang Linhui, the divine physician of Shennong Hall. "Her reverse scale is between her collarbones. Mermaid demons can't die as long as their reverse scale isn't harmed."
Jiang Linhui shook his head in grief. "She's half mermaid demon, half human. She never had a reverse scale. It was all a lie to deceive you. Your Highness saved Sui Sui's life in the Sinful Sea. Now she has returned your divine bones and died for you. You are even... Li Yue, let her go."
"But I don't want us to be even." Li Yue turned his silver hair black and bent down to press a trembling kiss to Sui Sui's forehead. "Didn't you only like Heshan? If you wake up, I'll spend the rest of my life by your side looking just like him."
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Master: Let me trick him into practicing dual cultivation with me
Madam, the writing is very good. I like it.
I cried so much in the last few chapters
I finished reading it. I saw the tweet during the series and saved it. It's so short that I actually cried several times.
Yun Dianzi has a yandere attribute.
I'm really curious about Fu Xi. She and Chi Yu give me a kind of relationship between Xiyao and Xuejian. Although the author is writing about the relationship between the past and present lives, Chi Yu has lost his memory for such a long time, and his soul is still incomplete, and he is not a complete Xi. It gives me a strong sense of fragmentation. I'm a little sorry for Xiyao and Xi
Nice. It's all sugar, I hope everyone comes to see it. (Confusion) I think the ending was good for everyone. Full of contentment.
So this is considered a horse loss! (Excited)
"Out" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ Except