[Work in Progress, Don't Read!!! I might rewrite it, but don't read it for now]
Lu Wangyun transmigrates into another world with a mission: find the original owner's beautiful benefactor and repay her debt of gratitude.
She plans to infiltrate the cultivation world and cast a wide net to catch plenty of fish.
But as soon as she joins the Canglan Sect, she runs into Yuan Qiming breaking through to the Nascent Soul stage. He walks toward her amid a sky full of tribulation lightning, bathed in golden light, his jade-like face full of compassion. He instantly strikes right at her face-obsessed heart.
And so Lu Wangyun becomes the junior apprentice sister of Yuan Qiming, the most beautiful man under heaven.
To repay her debt (and for that face), she wracks her brains to please Yuan Qiming, caring for and protecting him, doing whatever he asks and obeying him in every way. She even accepts his utterly inhuman ascension training.
But Yuan Qiming is an ultimate tsundere narcissist who thinks far too highly of himself.
After five years, not only is he unmoved, he even tosses the birthday gift Lu Wangyun spent three months preparing onto the ground. For the thousand and first time, he gives her a cold warning: "Since you have chosen the Great Way, you must devote yourself to cultivation. Stop wasting your efforts."
Lu Wangyun: ...6.
Well, I'm not even sure he's the person I'm supposed to find. I'll go after another handsome guy instead.
*
Lu Wangyun starts fawning over the new junior apprentice brother at the Canglan Sect.
The junior brother is gorgeous, kind, and smooth-talking, the best people-pleaser in the cultivation world. Lu Wangyun soon becomes completely captivated and has the time of her life.
One day, as usual, she's laughing and chatting with the junior brother while they practice swordplay when she suddenly feels a cold, vicious gaze shooting her way. She jumps in fright.
Her sword slips from her hand, but Yuan Qiming catches it and grips it in reverse. In a hoarse voice, he says, "Manman, come here."
Lu Wangyun: ...9 (That was a 6 flipping over, but damn, he's so handsome. Am I allowed to say that?)
*
Ever since the Immortal Alliance entrusted Yuan Qiming with the important task of training Lu Wangyun, he hasn't known a moment's peace.
At first, he often wondered:
What should I do about my junior apprentice sister loving me so much?
How can I turn her down without hurting her enthusiasm for cultivation?
Later, he thinks about this every day:
So my junior apprentice sister only likes my face?! How is that possible?!
Why doesn't my junior apprentice sister like me anymore? Damn it, how am I worse-looking than that suspicious guy?
Lu Wangyun: ...Some people are really good at being full of themselves.
[Sweet-talking but cold-hearted beauty enthusiast heroine X hard-mouthed, self-deluding king of a hero]
Reader's Guide:
1. One-on-one romance, both leads have only ever been with each other. A silly, sweet comedy. Please make sure you can accept the characters before reading. Feel free to criticize the male lead, but I'll push back against any comments insulting the heroine.
2. The male lead is basically a tsundere narcissist with a 300-pound celebrity ego, and the worst thing he does to the heroine is probably force her to train hard.
Next up: "After I Gave Up Winning Over the Black Lotus, He Went Mad"
Blurb:
Mu Qiu transmigrates into a Mary Sue novel as a cannon-fodder supporting heroine. She barely has any part in the story, yet the main cast conspires to make her exchange blood with the poisoned heroine, leaving her dead without a whole corpse.
The System tells her that if she successfully wins over one of the male supporting characters, she can survive to the end.
Mu Qiu decisively chooses to win over the original owner's senior apprentice brother, Lou Hechuan, the gentle second male lead and one of only two characters in the book who didn't take part in the blood-exchange plot.
It's only natural to favor the one close at hand. Besides, she likes gentle white-haired guys more than loyal little assassins.
*
To win over Lou Hechuan, Mu Qiu makes him clothes, cooks for him, writes him love letters, and finds excuses for casual physical contact.
Lou Hechuan's affection keeps rising, but he shows no sign of it. Every day, he acts like an otherworldly immortal with no worldly desires.
Mu Qiu isn't discouraged. Instead, she prepares to confess to Lou Hechuan and give him a good shock.
On the eve of her confession, the System suddenly tells Mu Qiu that an extra chapter of the novel has been unlocked.
Only then does Mu Qiu learn that Lou Hechuan came up with the blood-exchange method. After the original owner died, he even chose the biggest and most luxurious coffin for her as a token of gratitude.
The lofty snow on the mountain and the moon beyond the clouds, supposedly carrying the world in their hearts, are actually the most vicious demons in a sea of suffering and a hell of torment.
Even a ghost story couldn't be worse.
Without hesitation, Mu Qiu hides her confession gift and says to Lou Hechuan, who has been waiting for her, "Senior brother, I've realized I have feelings for a little assassin. Can you help me?"
*
For the uncountable time, Lou Hechuan watches with his own eyes as his junior apprentice sister walks willingly toward death under the story's control.
He knows he's been mad for a long time.
He seals his junior apprentice sister's soul with his own hands, slaughtering supporting characters again and again, hunting down the protagonists, starting wars, and toppling a golden age, all in the hope of destroying this cliché story world once and for all.
But then his junior apprentice sister suddenly comes back.
Only, she doesn't want him anymore. She's fallen for the fourth male lead in the story and wants to escape the book with him.
It doesn't matter. He'll catch her sooner or later.
He'll kill her, and everyone in the story.
[A resentful white-haired yandere who worked so hard to awaken his wife's self-awareness and waited for her to win him over, only for her to run off with someone else X a sweet, clueless, lively heroine who happily runs into another man's arms, only to end up locked away]
Reader's Guide:
1. One-on-one romance, sweet and fluffy. Pure-love fans, come on in.
2. The heroine is the original owner, but she doesn't know this at the beginning.
3. The male lead is a full-blooded mad yandere. He'd go crazy if the heroine so much as glanced at a dog on the roadside.
4. The trigger warnings are all in the blurb.
5. There is a System, but it has a minor role. The focus is on romance.
Theme: Break free from restrictions, dare to challenge yourself, and love life.
After giving the chess pieces to my junior brother, Yuan Qiming will go crazy.
Hello, author, there is a typo in the word, it should be again. I don't know what to say, but two authors of the novels I'm currently following have failed to successfully complete their works. To put it mildly, I will not read the new chapter. I hope you can improve your writing skills in the future and write again when you can grasp this book. Likewise, I'm willing to pay for the storyline you took the time to write, even if it's relatively incomplete. I can take on the responsibility of a reader, and I hope you can take on the responsibility of a writer in the future. Be careful when starting and ending, and wish you well.
My wife is actually very good at writing and other things. I originally wanted to look through the catalog to find the emotional line, but I found that it stopped at the outline, which is indeed a pity. Looking forward to seeing you in the next book
Damn... I finished reading it and ordered it because it looked good at the beginning. I was so angry when I saw the end!! I feel cheated and cry to death
I still want my wife to finish this book. I think the writing is okay.
Ah, I just read the first chapter and liked it very much. Then I clicked on the comment area and found that the author left a message saying that it was not finished. I looked through the catalog and bought the detailed outline. I felt like I read 600,000 words in three minutes (? Hahahaha what?
In fact, this article is much better than the previous one in terms of writing style, rhythm and character control. I feel a little sad that the author gave up on it, but more importantly it feels like a pity. It's a pity that this world with a skeleton created by you can no longer grow flesh and blood.
If you can't write it, don't wait.
I finally woke up and wanted to grab his ears and shout at him: Did you hear that?!! You like her!! Acknowledge your inner feelings quickly!!
Is the male protagonist sick?…