
[Harry Potter] The Western Realm
[HP]西界
- Status
- Unknown
- Length
- 111k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
25Chapters
547Favorites
4.3kClicks per chapter
260Comments
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Reader comments 45
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After all, this is a novel, not an essay. If the author has a lot of ideas about these characters and three views, he might as well describe them in novels, stories, and plots, which is much better than telling them directly.
I'm so annoyed that I can't stand it. It's totally inconsistent with the style of writing I appreciate.
There are too many personal reflections. Author, are you not writing a long review of HP?
It's a bit nonsense. This is a story, not a composition about "Love", right?
Stop making subjective arguments in long paragraphs. It looks boring. Everyone has similar ideas. There is no need to write an argumentative paper specially, but also write an argumentative paper with narrative and discussion. I would rather see the class scene and the advancement of the plot, instead of talking to the old madman all the time and expressing my personal feelings.
A lot of discussions and even pure opinions make me a little tired. It would be nice if there were more descriptions. Well, I admit that I would rather read the transition chapters without the protagonist's appearance.
It's too much of a stream of consciousness... Although this kind of subjective judgment is included in the dialogue, I really don't think it is necessary.
Is this writing an essay or a novel?
Did you stop updating just because you had some interactions with the professor? It's so sad~ But the cold, awkward and vicious person is really cute~~! ! (/≧▽≦/)
The tail hair is not updated anymore? ? Is it a trap? ? ?