The Azure Dragon Descends with the Moon

The author of Pingkeng is so cute~ There will be 2 packs of sauerkraut next time~

All I can say is that some things don't make sense.

Comments on "The Moon Descends the Blue Dragon" Since the author welcomes poisonous tongues, I won't be polite. First, I can't seem to see the cover. Could it be that JJ smoked it? By the way, is one session too short? Personally, I feel that once it is divided into chapters, there is no need to subdivide it further. It's better to keep the number of words in each chapter stable, not too many sometimes and then too little, but at least 3,000 words. "Last time, I said that the emperor thought Yu Qingliu... We just need to understand in our hearts." If the author has something to say, he will say it in the text. It is not appropriate to include it in the text. "—Mi Tiao, I am the pseudo-H dividing line~—" This kind of thing is not used. There is more later, so I won't talk about it. "Ahem, let's watch someone slowly decompose it." This should be the author's habit. Is it okay to comment on the style of the book? But this sentence: "Even if one day the imperial city can no longer accommodate me, I will still take care of you for the rest of my life. I will never let you down in this life!" Readers like it very much. Although many articles have similar sentences, readers still like it very much. This sentence comes from Xiao Gong's mouth, and it is very suitable. I think the author wants to use dividing lines to create some introductions, but I think the author can express it in the text. Having dividing lines is not very standard. "Yu Qingliu is only twenty-eight years old" seems to appear many times in the article. A quarter of an hour is indeed fifteen minutes. There are indeed a lot of pairs in this, but I think the emperor and his wife will have too many scenes. There is also Xiao Shou. In fact, I personally prefer weak Shou, but I feel that Yuan'er doesn't have any advantages other than being weak, plus he is a prince. The relationship between the two people is quite obvious, but the feeling is relatively weak, and the love for each other is relatively unreasonable. Why do they like each other so much? At first, there were not many characters and it was understandable. However, after Shou returned to his country from childhood, there were so many people all of a sudden that it was not easy to digest. And I feel that the author loves them very much. Of course, the author must love his own children. I personally think that there is no need to write too much about each pair, just mention it in one stroke. I felt that Xiao Shou was crying and struggling from the beginning to the end, and did nothing useful, but having a baby did play a role. The author is not a novice, but because this is an old article, there are some minor problems that the author himself knows now, so I don't need to say more. Readers like warm articles. If the author still wants to change this article, he should make it more warm. It is not a crime to be sweet. The plot is quite slow, and you will get tired easily after watching it for a long time. I have read all the chapters without V, so I have no say in the rest. Generally speaking, this article should be completely transformed after a major revision, and the author is not a novice, and his ability to control words is definitely beyond the level he was at the time. As long as the author truly loves this article, it will succeed. The author should not abandon his own child. I admire this quality of the author very much. No matter how long it takes, the author will always have feelings for his articles. The above is the humble opinion of readers. I wish you success.

...= = Huahua and other things are easy to forget

= = This is the end... The evil aunt...

= = It looks like It's time to finish... Right?

Mother! It's right to have pressure~~ Hurry up and support the big HE!

The writers of Thirty Updates are as good as the cheats! =V= Happy New Year to all my friends! ! May you be happy and prosperous! ! Good luck always comes! ! Good fortune! ! Be healthy and safe! !

It's very beautiful. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to it.

Great author. . . NetEase won't let me watch the full version of Chapter 28. Wuwu. . .