[The main story is complete. I'm revising it now. Since I'm worried I might leave it unfinished for a long time and have it locked, I've marked it complete for now. I'll change the status after adding the extras.
Some implausible interactions and character portrayals will be revised. The main plot will stay the same, but many details will be adjusted. The revised version will flesh out and stabilize the main and supporting characters, and fix plot holes. Some parts of the plot don't connect smoothly.]
[Coming soon: My Villainous Self Is the One Who Saves You. Please add it to your reading list! Blurb below.]
Blurb:
Luo Muyi is the fiercest madwoman in the Eight Wastelands, infamous for her ruthlessness.
Who could have known that she would fall in love at first sight, setting her heart on Feng Song, a heaven-blessed prodigy who had come to kill her, and forcibly taking him as her Dao companion?
For years after they became partners, Luo Muyi looked after him devotedly, always asking after his well-being. Even when Feng Song treated her coldly, she remained warm and affectionate for years on end.
Luo Muyi is cold and violent toward everyone else, but she brings Feng Song all kinds of precious treasures and treats his cold poison.
"This is a warm jade chess set from the Southern Netherworld Island, a rare treasure, and worthy of my A Song."
Luo Muyi risks life and limb, venturing alone into enemy territory to kill Feng Song's nemesis, all just to make him smile.
"A Song, give me a smile."
Feng Song lowers his eyes, hiding the thawing of the ice in them.
Everyone believes the two will stay together for life, and that they make a fine pair. No one expects the heaven-blessed prodigy, the untouchable flower atop the mountain, to one day barge into the Demon Lord's private chambers, point at a painting on the wall, and demand with a heartbroken look:
"Luo Muyi, who is this?"
The person in the painting is stunningly beautiful, holding a jade chess set and smiling. The expression is gentler than anything Feng Song has ever seen.
And yet he looks seven parts like Feng Song as he is now.
The proud sword cultivator is furious, but Luo Muyi says nothing. She turns and leaves with the painting, making the sword cultivator vomit blood and stain his white robes red.
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Everyone believes Luo Muyi is hopelessly in love with Feng Song, but they don't know her two secrets:
First, she has no idealized first love. The whole thing is a lie.
Second, when she was still mortal, she was destitute and begging outside an immortal sect. That radiant, noble prodigy beat her away, thinking she was a demon.
She watched him leave, so far above her, and enter the moonlight. From that day on, jealousy and hatred took root in her heart.
He is the moon, so she will...
Drag the moon down into the mud, watch him struggle and sink, watch him fall in love and suffer because he cannot have what he wants.
Reader's Guide:
1. A powerful couple: a sharp-tongued demoness with a poor memory who always gets even x a tsundere, taciturn, untouchable flower atop the mountain.
2. They get back together after a breakup, so the protagonists have hurt each other. Readers with strong preferences about any aspect should steer clear, as this could be upsetting.
3. This blurb was written on April 22, 2023. Cover art used with permission from K.
4. A niche-kink, self-indulgent, laid-back story that may be somewhat weak in logic.
Coming soon: My Villainous Self Is the One Who Saves You
Xu Qingning, a heaven-blessed prodigy revered by thousands in the immortal sects, gets into danger one day and accidentally acquires a System. Only then does he learn that he's the tragic, beautiful, and powerful second male lead in a book.
The System's mission for him is to protect the protagonist and win over the villainous mastermind.
Xu Qingning scoffs at the idea.
He has always upheld the righteous path and despised the wicked. He follows his elders and considers it his duty to uphold the Heavenly Dao.
As for a villain who defies the Dao,
he has no intention of getting entangled with them. He only wants to kill them.
But when Xu Qingning sees the villain's name, "Zhou Fuling," the sword in his hand suddenly stops.
That name is the same as his junior sister's.
Five years ago, Xu Qingning brought his junior sister back to the sect. She's kind and innocent, and the person closest to him.
Xu Qingning will never forget that when he was at his lowest, it was his junior sister who carried him through the snow, tears streaming down her face as she gently called him "Senior Brother" over and over. She begged him not to give up and helped him find the will to live again.
But now, the System's description of Zhou Fuling reads:
Born evil, honeyed words and a serpent's heart, never to be trusted.
The night he learned the truth, Xu Qingning sat in the snow all night, unable even to hold his sword steady.
A Short Scene
When Xu Qingning quietly returns to the courtyard, Zhou Fuling sees how haggard he looks and takes his hand, speaking softly:
"Senior Brother, what's wrong?"
Xu Qingning presses his lips together and silently turns his eyes away, trying to hide his expression.
Silence falls.
Just as he closes his eyes and prepares to leave, a cold hand wraps around his wrist like a snake.
His once gentle and lovable junior sister stares at him with dark, icy eyes.
"Senior Brother, why don't you tell me what's wrong?"
Black tentacles suddenly twist behind the startled young man, pinning his hands as he raises his sword.
His usually cool, sharp eyes grow misty, and he lets out a muffled groan of pain.
So delicate. So lovable. Zhou Fuling thinks.
She giggles. "Now that you've found out, don't even think about leaving."
Theme: Only you can define your own worth.
The Conqueror Remembers She Is His Villainous Nemesis
I Won Over Three Senior Sisters
Players Behind the Scenes [Sci-Fi]
I'm the Villain Who'll Save You
Prisoner [Western Fantasy]
Changelog
After Forcing the Villain to Submit
Treading the Demonic Path
After the Villain Deceived the Son of Heaven
A Western Fantasy Crematorium Story
The two of them are like hedgehogs, and they don't have long mouths. They are sensitive in their stance. Because of interests and marriage, the relationship between the two of them is like that of children who lack love, tentative and eager. The overall heroine's fullness is okay. She is running around when she is young, and Baicao is tenacious.
Crazy sweet. I want to see the male protagonist give birth to eight babies (not
I want to watch the extra story about Xiaoyi and Xiaofan.
I want to see Fan Yu ((The big-tailed fox is so seductive (touch, touch, touch))
Well... If you don't want Yiyi, can you give me those down-and-out young masters? TTTT
When I think about the heroine being cheated by her dead ex, I get very angry.
Seeing this finally cleared up the fog. It's really beautiful. I don't understand why I can have such a big idea. It's really beautiful.
Hahahahaha Xiaofeng was so angry
Heh heh heh heh, are you even more serious about it? The emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists in the back are just based on the outline. The emotional lines between the heroine and the fox are not that rigid. I said I wanted to change the story because I was afraid of ending the contract first. But it turned out that after I finished writing Prisoners, I wrote Redemption, and now Redemption has been cut off for a month. Although I didn't read those books, I just ran away, and I didn't even see that you had a leave note. Or are you being carried away by the comments that praise you and really feel that you have a vast and complete world view and are good at writing nonsense, so your readers will firmly stick to you? Your copywriting is very good, and it can lure people in and deceive you [heartbreak]
Although there are many flaws, the most important thing is that the plot is not smooth, but it is so good-looking, how can a bloody lover resist this plot and characters?