[Harry Potter] Azkaban Apothecary

The author really wanted to express some profound meaning, but unfortunately the level was not good enough, so the plot of the story suddenly turned and Mingming continued to write about how the heroine played the role of mother (she had never enjoyed maternal love, did not have a complete family, and even the children were born for the sake of the family, but she herself Want to get rid of the shackles of the family, so I think it is quite reasonable for the heroine to think about these issues), how to deal with the relationship with the hero after the female consciousness awakens, etc. Are enough to support a good fanfic, but it is a pity that the author did not choose to do this, but suddenly started to discuss the stars and the sea. Is love small? Maybe, but love is always the least insignificant thing a human being can have. The entire Harry Potter series emphasizes the power of love, and I think this is one of the reasons why it was eventually classified as children's literature. After all, the power of love sounds a bit too weak and unreal, unlike powerful weapons, precision-designed traps, and dazzling superhero-like battles that convince adults. But in the real world, I have indeed witnessed the power of love time and time again. The universe is vast and worthy of being pursued by the heroine, but I don't think that exploring the mysteries of the universe (this is also a rather abrupt turn. I don't think that a person who has not even received a junior high school physics education has become a famous physicist in just ten years. Of course, it would be fine to explain this as an illusory dream), or in the author's words, "pursuing self-worth" must seal your heart and love. I am the most fond of the HP series. My favorite character is Dumbledore, not only because he is powerful, wise, and humorous, but also because after experiencing such painful love, he can still believe in love and understand the power of love. "Already aware of the vastness of the world, I still pity the green grass and trees." If the author hopes to create such a heroine who is not limited to small love, the transition can actually be smoother. For example, Doment appears quite abruptly, why is it a small wooden stick? Why send it back to the Room of Requirement? This whole chapter leaves the reader confused. If you want to use divination as a metaphor for the future, you can lay in more foreshadowings and let Doment appear earlier. If you want to imply that everything is illusory, you can also add some self-contradictory points in the text. In this way, a chapter suddenly comes without warning, and it really looks like you can't write anymore and end hastily. Originally, I was looking forward to the heroine's awakening of female consciousness and her all-female family. After all, the original text didn't describe much about gender issues in the wizarding world.

Let me remind everyone in the front row: If you don't read the last chapter of the main text, it is a perfect HE; if you read it, it will be a TE that reflects everyone who reads fanfics! This is a fanfic that I personally like very much. While it follows the plot, a few golden sentences occasionally appear to adjust the atmosphere. It is very lively but not too nonsensical. I really like the setting of the author's wife. Although it is a story about the family generation, the friends and classmates the heroine meets here can all see the shadow of familiar characters from the later generations. For example, the mother of Seamus, a demolition genius who married a Muggle, is the heroine's good friend, the mother of the whimsical Luna, etc... Made me exclaim "It turns out to be him" from time to time while reading. Of course, the description of Snape is more in line with my impression of Snape in his twenties. He is not naturally as cold-looking as in the original book. The occasional few words of complaint make this young man more real. The relationship between the male and female protagonists was also in line with my expectations. There was no coercion, no humiliation, everything just happened so truly! The most surprising thing is that the heroine and the heroine's family, the rise of female consciousness and leaving the father and leaving the daughter are really cool! "You are a woman first, a wizard second"!

Write it here 2: If there is a moral, then Achina is the ending of a beautiful fantasy, having an excellent and proud child with the one you love. This is the HE readers love, but I didn't stop there. So Doment is not only a point that awakens Terry's fantasy, but also a point that awakens readers to read fan fiction. I'm sorry that everyone has indigestion. But for the protagonist Trivia, rather than fantasy, her thoughts after various experiences in the story, her awakening of self-awareness, and her decisions determine that her height should not stay in the beauty in front of her. Reality is cruel, and so is war. She will think more and want to escape from the narrow definition of human beings and pursue a broader world. This is the realization of self-worth and more self-focus. The words in the first few chapters are a bit clear. Snape is also a protagonist, not as a spouse, but as an alternative way of life. How to truly love, not as an obsession. Acknowledging Lily as a friend, dealing with the aftermath of Lily's death, and letting go of the past with her is a kind of open-minded courage. How many people can truly let go but not forget? In his relationship with Terry, I used more of a conflict & resolution method (because when I read the original novel, I didn't like SS even if he died, but now I'm writing a fanfic of him, which is why I have complicated emotions towards him). Finally, let's talk about Doment in the prophecy chapter. It's just an imaginary dream. The so-called prophecy is just a false destiny. It can be said that I have written dozens of single-arrow fanfics on popular themes many times to express hatred and vomiting. I only focused on a few points to create a good character: "The age difference with SS is either very big, or the same year." A sarcastic comment on all fanfic writers, myself included. Poor dream! Why not grab him by the neck and coerce him! Use his deep affection to make him bow his head for me!

I especially want to see the professor being so angry at Akina that he can hold back his temper.

Regarding the controversial version of Chapter 89: The author wanted to express something deeper, but the writing was not strong enough, giving people a feeling of being unfinished/hard/inexplicable. If you can't accept it, just skip 89 and don't watch it. Other places are fine.

Chapter 89 is such a terrible scene... You remind me of a certain Korean comic. It was sweet, but there was a filming theater for the extra episode, and the two male protagonists were filming... I couldn't watch the second season instantly. It's so disconnected... It's like I was drinking water and someone suddenly punched me in the stomach. The author is from the newspaper, right?

The writing style is good, with lots of details, and it touches on turbulent times without being irritating. The author is great, and his interpretation of the characters is very good. The love also made me feel delicate and romantic. Unfortunately, more than 100 chapters are not enough for me to read. Do you still want to read? Also, I hope that the ambiguous process will be lengthened or described in more chapters. It is indeed a bit unfinished. And the ending seemed a bit rushed to me. It could have been polished more or continued to be written. It didn't pull together, and it skipped ten years in one go. But overall it's well written. (Don't read Chapter 89! You have to write a be if line, as if it has some profound meaning. It's not necessary. My suggestion is don't read it)

Ha? What is this? I seemed to have skipped dozens of chapters

Crazy, this article develops steadily, and the ending is a surprise to me.

It sucks... Why not kill me (?_?)