Short historical transmigration novella, "The Drama Queen Concubine Quits": The blurb is at the end (complete)
-- This story's blurb (4.7 yuan for the full text, half a cup of MXBC) --
Su Nian transmigrates into a novel whose countless abandoned plot threads have been deleted, leaving behind a story that's hard to describe. She becomes a low-level succubus in it.
The System tells her, "There are too many plot holes, and this world is about to collapse."
There's only one way to stop it: fill them in!
To stay alive, Su Nian tearfully accepts the task.
Then one day, she meets the Demon Lord Shen Linxuan, who appeared for fewer than three hundred words in the original book. His power is terrifying, and his mind is frighteningly innocent.
The System excitedly urges her, "Quick, grab hold of this golden thigh!"
Su Nian does just that, and accidentally bullies the pure and blameless Demon Lord.
Beneath the moonlight, Shen Linxuan's expression is unreadable. Feeling guilty, Su Qin says, "I didn't mean to. You can bully me back, big brother."
A gorgeous heroine who only wants to stay alive x a male lead who seems like a Demon Lord but is actually good at tying bows
[Reading Tips]
1v1, both leads are each other's first. The heroine is a succubus, and the hero is a demon too.
The style is probably nonsensical fluff. The heroine isn't a super-smart, arrogant badass, so readers looking for a power fantasy might not find it here.
-- [Next Story's Blurb] --
"The Drama Queen Concubine Quits," also known as "After Bearing the Male Lead's Child, I Faked My Death and Ran Away"
[Synopsis]
Yun Yao is fair-skinned, beautiful, and long-legged. She is a concubine in Prince Ning's household.
There are plenty of concubines in the household, but Yun Yao stands out with her beauty and sweet tongue. She wins Prince Ning, Xie Jin's, favor and successfully takes charge of the inner household. Promoted to housekeeper, she enjoys several happy years with food, drink, and money to spare.
But happy days never last. One day, the woman Prince Ning has loved from afar finally agrees to marry him, on the condition that he dismiss all his concubines.
Prince Ning agrees and orders the matron to dismiss them, forgetting that Yun Yao is one of them.
When he returns from out of town with his beloved, he discovers Yun Yao is gone and is utterly dumbfounded...
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Xie Jin thinks the person he loves is Yan Xi. He goes to great lengths to marry her, but when the day finally comes, he isn't as happy as he imagined. Yun Yao, whom he kept in the inner household, has run away with her contract of sale and some money, leaving behind their month-old child...
He searches for her among the common people for a long time and finally finds her. She is selling noodles by the roadside with her slender hands, while an unfamiliar man tenderly wipes the sweat from her brow.
Furious, he rushes over to take Yun Yao back to the manor, but she tells him, "I've already burned my contract. I'm not going back with you. Raise your own child."
Only later does Xie Jin finally realize that Yun Yao's love for him was all an act. For the first time, the haughty prince feels utterly defeated...
[Reading Tips]
1v1, both leads are each other's first.
The heroine is a drama queen. At first, while serving as the hero's concubine, she pretends to love him. But the childish hero thinks she's head over heels for him. When he discovers she's actually left him with her contract in hand, he's furious and can't believe it.
The heroine doesn't dislike her child. The child will have a better life with Prince Ning than wandering around with her.
Theme: Keep an optimistic attitude.
This chapter of the heroine is a bit inconsistent with the character. She was supposed to be a soft and sweet little girl, but she is also a little smart. She suddenly believes too much in Lin Zhiyuan, who is almost a stranger who she has saved before but does not remember. The demon is a very strong and intelligent being. Even if he is favored, it is impossible to be so intelligent that he can be calculated so easily. The villain dies too easily, without exaggerating the reactions of other people in the later stage, and it does not achieve the effect of a plot that can be regarded as a big block of people's hearts. Relaxation, sweetness, and fun are all a bit lost in this chapter. I hope my wife's writing will get better and better.
Why don't you edit this chapter? It's really weird. Look, I feel really bad (;_;). It feels so abrupt.
By the way, in Nian Nian's eyes, they are not a couple!! Demon Lord has been angry for several days in vain.
Do you really want to finish this chapter and are you making progress?? Just reading this chapter, I felt it was too rushed and urgent. Everything was very deliberate and everyone was OOC. One is the heroine. Even if the heroine believes the person being impersonated, there are still two steps to take. 1. Give medicine to hide the evil spirit. 2. What kind of cloak should be used to hide it? How can you hide him without communicating with the male protagonist? So I never understood why the heroine didn't say a word, and she also hid the demonic energy very well when she went to the human world before. Hiding the aura is very easy for the devil, but the heroine is so stupid that she never thought that she would have to feed people some unknown pills. The second one is Lin Zhiyuan, who is also very strange. How can he be so sure that he will kill you?? He took the heroine away without saying anything. Didn't he know nothing about that scene? Shouldn't we be confused and ask what happened?? When he forcibly took away the heroine, I thought it was Xie who was pretending to be her, but it turned out not to be the case. Is the third male protagonist too romantic?? The previous Demon Lord gave me the impression that he was an ignorant Demon Lord who didn't understand much about love. When his life was threatened, the first question he asked was not what I was fed and what I was doing now, but whether you liked him?? Then when the heroine was taken away, his first reaction was that his wife had run away? But didn't he see her being knocked unconscious and handcuffed away? Even if the heroine ran away, his first reaction would be to close the Demon Realm? I think it's beyond common sense. And the villain Xie Qinghe's death should not be so simple and ordinary. The three-year timeline is also very strange, and isn't the heroine pregnant? How to describe the process of giving birth in a three-year timeline? According to the character of the heroine, she should try to find a way to return to the devil world, instead of studying such a bad trick for three years. Her mother and Lin Yiyi don't know the information about this trick. If she is not pregnant, why is she constantly retching and burying the pregnancy line??
This chapter... Is so nonsensical
This picture is the mystery of Su Nian's life experience, finally solved
Seeing this, I think the heroine is really a bit stupid. She always wanted medicine to repair herself but found out that there was something wrong with the medicine. She was so unprepared.
I really didn't expect that... I would be so cruel later... I suddenly went back to ancient times...
The people in the immortal world really make me speechless. Why are there so many irrational people who think that the demon world is going to harm them? They are suffering from persecution paranoia.
Finished spreading flowers~ Looking forward to the next work