I Haven't Mastered Loving You Yet

Still a little immature but you did a good job Persisted for so long I believe that everyone who knows how to persevere will have a future of his own At least it will satisfy you Come on Me too, I won't give up

Disadvantage 1: The portrayal of Luo Shanshan could be more fleshed out, but it may be limited by space, which is also expected; Disadvantage 2: Similarly, the story of Zou and Zeng could be written more; Disadvantage 3: I actually like this article quite a lot, so I can't say anything about the shortcomings, so 3, 4, and 5 had to be adapted to the occasion, hehe. Disadvantage 4: Let me add one more point, this type of emotional writing could use more descriptions of scenery and environment; Disadvantage 5: There may be more depth between Zou's comparison between Luo Shanshan and Zeng Yijing, but it will not be youthful. Advantage 1: The writing is smooth and the plot flows freely; Advantage 2: I like the name Zeng Yijing very much; Advantage 3: Zou Shuai dares to love and give up, he is a good-natured person, and it is good that Luo Shanshan did not completely shadow him. If Luo Shanshan knew, she would not blame him. At that time, he and Luo Shanshan did not know how to cherish; Advantage 4: I like the ending of the story very much, it's very heartwarming and not unexpected; Advantage 5: I love you, a little clumsily. I love you, but I am not perfect enough. I love you, please give me a chance to become proficient. ======With just these three lines, this novel is already excellent; Advantage 6: I like the idea behind the text, or Luo Shanshan is the underage Zeng Yijing, and Zeng Yijing is the grown-up Luo Shanshan. Summary: This article is more representative of your writing style. If I were to rate it, it would be 85 points. Hehe, it's pretty good! Keep up the good work!

Well, sometimes it's really a dilemma, you want both. . . You have to choose one - - Why do you think of Kagome and Kikyo in Inuyasha~~Haha~~ People. . . It's better to grasp the most real thing in front of you~~