Is the Villain's Planner Doomed to Die?

Congratulations on the completion! ! It is also very symbolic to end with the young man returning home. Although it ended a little hastily, it is good that it is over! I really hope more people will discuss the plot. I can't fully understand it without my brain, and I'm curious about other people's thoughts. I feel like I could have written a longer one, and there are many areas that could be expanded upon. I originally thought that there would be self-rescue of the church, war, complete reunification, and talks at a later date... Chapter 128 has compressed a lot of points that could be written in close-up... Damn it, I can only rely on my own imagination. This book is indeed a bit cold, but I think the characters, story and concept are all great! I just finished reading it and recommended it to my friends. I look forward to the author writing more interesting stories that she likes! ?^▽^?

Everyone: My Majesty! Your Majesty: My Fenia. Hahahahahahahahahaha Your Majesty said my lover is this country! The Lape family will do whatever it takes to survive. One small detail I think is particularly good. The nobles of the Southern Border who have appeared so far are all matrons. Whether it is Evans or Lape, the people in charge are all women. The social structure of the border city is also a matriarchal society because of Hyena Yachu, which is really good.

Garion: ... So disgusting Jaffet: Are you happy that you can see me every day from now on, and I am still a close guard?

We must not be so oppressive that we pay workers' wages.

Only then did I realize that I wanted to save the entire manuscript. I've been following Bai Hong's book all the way. I love every book you write! ! Going from derivative to original may indeed result in the loss of some fans and popularity brought by the original work, but I believe that your writing and narrative will definitely attract many readers and choose to stay. I hope that this book will not die prematurely, and QAQ will not be like the Japanese knotweed book. I am really looking forward to the development of the story in the future (crying)

Go along with the sea and abandon the unnecessary Well written, ma'am! ! !

I want to put a tag on the puppy, but the Queen won't do it, even if the puppy wants to

Foer: Come, praise my Lord!

Matriarchal society! That's how cool it is! ! !

Congratulations on the completion! Although there are many, many characters in it that I like very much, I didn't tell them in detail, and it's a pity that they are qualified for full-length novels. I also hope that Mommy can write some short stories in the future. [Red heart][red heart]