Snow over Qingcheng

Forgot to grade... Make it up.

Still thinking about Li Peiling and Lao Fang.

Thank you for your hard work, the last chapter was still powerful.

Reading articles is a kind of enjoyment, and seeing good articles is even more satisfying. Being a reader is a blessing, and it is natural to write reviews. I clicked on "Qingcheng Snow", which I have been following for a long time, and what I saw was a beautiful lady with a pursed lips and a smile. Her skin was as white as snow, and her neatly combed hair was matched by blooming peonies. At first glance, you would not think that this was a tragic article, but it was the tragic article that left the deepest impact on people. From the first chapter of the article, the author's delicate description of the situation, psychological description, and shaping of the character's personality and appearance are very successful. Fang Xiaoyu and Qiyu's childhood sweethearts, childhood playmate relationship, the special relationship between Zhang Zhihe and Li Peiling, and the incomprehensible relationship with Fang Shiyao who later appeared, are all laid out in this chapter, which well constructs conflicts and lays the foundation for further plot narration below. When I see this, I can't help but have the urge to continue reading. From the second chapter onwards, the mysterious relationship between Fang Shiyao and Li Peiling gradually becomes clear. They are clearly a loving couple, but they are better than sworn enemies. Why? Is he Fang Xiaoyu's father? Will Qiyu's fortune turn around after escaping the fate of becoming a child bride? The answer is very clear. In the author's writing, everything proceeds along the pre-laid route, and a wealthy mansion is opened to them. The opening of the mansion door means a new beginning and also reveals the occurrence of conflicts. Deep in the house, I have no worries, but I think I was born in a wealthy family. The jealousy among the servants and the viciousness of the housekeeper's mother made Qiyu suffer a lot and experienced the cruelty of the world. The intrigues among relatives and aunts, and the snobbishness among classmates made Fang Xiaoyu understand a lot and mature a lot. The world of cannibalism should not be taken lightly. After reading the latest updated chapter, I can see some new conflicts that are about to happen. The foreshadowing that the author has laid out before will soon be confirmed, which is really exciting! What happened between Fang Shiyao and Li Peiling in the past? Who is Chen Lan? Why did Fang Shiyao hate him to the core? Can Fang Xiaoyu and Qiyu go hand in hand? Will Fang Xiaoqin interfere with the two of them? What will be the fate of Panyu? Will Fang Xiaoru let her go easily? How should Hualang choose? Finally, the fetus in Mi Xian's belly meant that the fuse of an internal conflict was about to be ignited. After all these conflicts were triggered, what impact would it have on Fang Shiyao? Can Li Peiling get her wish to see Fang Xiaoyu, who lives in the same house but is thousands of miles away? Let the author answer these questions for us one by one. As a reader, in addition to support, we must also give encouragement. Writing is a boring and monotonous task, and it varies from person to person. Finally, I would like to throw a brick to the author: the proportion of dialogue and description in the novel should be appropriately adjusted. If the entire chapter is mainly description, no matter what description (environment, psychology, appearance, etc.) Does not need to be inserted into dialogue, arrange these descriptions appropriately. For example: I personally think that the description of snowflakes in the first chapter is a little too much. I don't know whether the author deliberately started the chapter with a topic or foreshadowing it afterwards. On the contrary, Chapters 15, 16, and 17 have a larger proportion of dialogue and less other descriptions. In addition, there are no typos in the novel. The author checked carefully and responsibly. Finally, I wish the author to put the body first, which is the basis of everything. We can wait! Come on!

To make up points. I've been very diligent recently. Hey-hey.

Someone else is going to suffer. . .

Isn't that sachet a gift from the maid?

Commander Fang is very cruel~ I don't know what happened before

Well. Forgot to rate.

Well. Counterfeit medicine. . . .