[My goal is to write the world's most satisfying novel that you don't have to stay up all night reading]
After the hugely popular boy band Hexagram wrapped up the final concert of their world tour, they received the good news that they were getting a vacation.
The company arranged for the members to rest and recuperate at a secluded resort. But a bizarre murder took place, and none of the six members survived.
Why were they killed? Who was the murderer?
Perhaps the answers will only be revealed when the long night is over.
It's a bit strange not to call the police. I didn't expect that the vacation would end. Is it even more strange that there is one less person in the group? The police will come to the door later. By then, the evidence will have been covered up and everyone will be a suspect.
It still feels like it's not in blizzard mode. At first, I didn't quite understand that it didn't involve the police, the company didn't care about the body, etc., So I didn't get into the plot.
This extra episode will be a big drama.
(Non-professionals speak based on their feelings, and their suggestions may not conform to literary theory)
What a great god! If this article were to be expanded and written with some foreshadowing, it would be very Agatha-like. I feel that the overall rhythm is very fast. It would be more natural if a little daily life is interspersed to slow down the rhythm, and the characters are portrayed through daily life. The feeling of character motivation reflected in the previous article is still lacking a little. The full text is estimated to be in an ideal state in about 20 chapters.
What should I replace with the syringe? I can't guess what it is. It's blocked.
But if you don't call the police or tell the company, you can't hide this matter? I don't understand. Do you want to treat it as a sudden death? Then you have to tell the company. Could it be possible that you buried someone by yourself?
Many of the kills in the script are all villains, and everyone has a motive and action. In the end, everyone analyzes and deduce who is the murderer who directly caused the death of the victim.
I always feel that there is still a lot to explain. What did Yu Fa give to the paparazzi? Is the camera in the lamp a camera? Did Yu put it in?
Was it finally exposed by the paparazzi?
How did Yu know that Pan had killed someone?
It's a bit strange not to call the police. I didn't expect that the vacation would end. Is it even more strange that there is one less person in the group? The police will come to the door later. By then, the evidence will have been covered up and everyone will be a suspect.
It still feels like it's not in blizzard mode. At first, I didn't quite understand that it didn't involve the police, the company didn't care about the body, etc., So I didn't get into the plot.
This extra episode will be a big drama.
(Non-professionals speak based on their feelings, and their suggestions may not conform to literary theory) What a great god! If this article were to be expanded and written with some foreshadowing, it would be very Agatha-like. I feel that the overall rhythm is very fast. It would be more natural if a little daily life is interspersed to slow down the rhythm, and the characters are portrayed through daily life. The feeling of character motivation reflected in the previous article is still lacking a little. The full text is estimated to be in an ideal state in about 20 chapters.
What should I replace with the syringe? I can't guess what it is. It's blocked.
But if you don't call the police or tell the company, you can't hide this matter? I don't understand. Do you want to treat it as a sudden death? Then you have to tell the company. Could it be possible that you buried someone by yourself?
Many of the kills in the script are all villains, and everyone has a motive and action. In the end, everyone analyzes and deduce who is the murderer who directly caused the death of the victim.
I always feel that there is still a lot to explain. What did Yu Fa give to the paparazzi? Is the camera in the lamp a camera? Did Yu put it in? Was it finally exposed by the paparazzi? How did Yu know that Pan had killed someone?
Wow, the ending of the extra chapter is great
The author writes very well! Come on