The ending ended hastily, and many details were not explained clearly.
It took me two days to finally finish reading this novel. I like the male and female protagonists very much. The author's writing is very good and the plot is fascinating, but some plots are too little and too simple, and some things are not explained clearly. Overall, I still like it.
Great article! But the ending... Is a bit rushed?! And why didn't Xiao Yi die? Why is there no extra story~~??!!
Hahaha, the end of the article, take your time and look at the watch to mind
So good,,,, love watching it!!!!!
Very nice. . . I kept chasing.
I went~~ I didn't expect that Xiaoliu would succeed! Yun Qing couldn't stand the palace, how could Xiao Yi be able to stand it! And how could Xiaoliu take a concubine?! How could Xiao Yi be able to bear Xiaoliu's concubine?! Aren't they going to Mobei? This would be even more shocking than Yun Qing becoming the queen!
I haven't been here for a long time. I didn't expect Sister Ziye to still remember me! Today I secretly went online to see where I had written, but this is how it ended. It's really uncomfortable. Without that care, I don't know how I will spend my time after graduation. When I finished reading the ending, I burst into tears. In fact, happiness is so simple. The story of Dayu Chao is still going on. The love of Yun Qingchumu will continue. Xiao Yichuyi's every bit of sweetness infected me. I hope sister Ziye will be happy too! I'll be back when I finish my exams. . .
Sorry, I still can't leave a message to the readers. I am full of words and full of gratitude, but I don't want to hold it in my heart, so I will just leave you a message.
Thank you yh for your review. In fact, I hesitated about this ending and gave up the idea for a while. However, because the original writing was based on this idea, I was a little timid. I just added Xiao Yi's dialogue because it felt abrupt. I thought, maybe reading the whole article again and then coming back to the ending will be better. I will consider it carefully in future articles. Thank you!
E_younger, thank you for reading and leaving comments for many years. It is a good habit. You have also given me a lot of opinions. I have collected them all for now and will give me the next article. You may not have read the extra chapter of Volume 1 that I added later. It explains the first acquaintance of Chu Mu and Yun Qing, and also mentions the acquaintance of Chu Mu and Lan Ruoxi. As for the old man, he is still interesting. Ying wanted to end it as quickly as possible, so I deleted it, saying I'm sorry for him and the readers who had high expectations. In fact, I deleted many people's stories, just because I was afraid that the more stories I added, the more unclear the explanation would be. People are still no match for a lazy word... As for the refinement, I was a little lazy, but after reading the comments, I really had the idea of editing the article. Thank you!
Xiaowei, it's okay. I was quite concerned about the points when I posted them before, but it's all over now. All collections, clicks, and points are all gone. For me, the most important thing is that I persisted in writing 350,000 words! If you feel comfortable, it doesn't matter if you give him dozens of negative marks. The college entrance examination is about to take place. Come on, I'm waiting for your good news! By the way, many readers who are in the senior year of high school this year, such as Xiaoqian before, have not been here for a long time. Studying hard is the right thing!
Next time I write an article, I must be more poetic, have more close-ups of scenes, and have more emotions about the characters, so that more people may be interested~~
After reading this article now, the ending is similar to what I thought. In fact, there is no difference between Chu Mu and Chu Li who becomes the emperor. Can Xiao Yi accept Chu Li marrying San Gong and Liu Yuan? I feel that their two personalities are more suitable for being a pair of swordsmen, who are chivalrous in the world~~
Moreover, there are many places in the book that are not explained clearly, such as why Chu Mu fell in love with Yun Qing and wanted to kneel in the study all night to ask for marriage. Why does Yun Qing have to help Chu Mu win the world? What is the relationship between Chu Mu and a dead imperial concubine? Wait~~ Finally, I remember that an old man appeared. He was a worldly expert. I think many readers did not fully understand what role he played~~
So I really hope that the original poster can revise the article again. In fact, the article is very grand. It is no worse than the popular ancient costume dramas of the Qing Dynasty, but it is not rich enough~~
The ending ended hastily, and many details were not explained clearly.
It took me two days to finally finish reading this novel. I like the male and female protagonists very much. The author's writing is very good and the plot is fascinating, but some plots are too little and too simple, and some things are not explained clearly. Overall, I still like it.
Great article! But the ending... Is a bit rushed?! And why didn't Xiao Yi die? Why is there no extra story~~??!!
Hahaha, the end of the article, take your time and look at the watch to mind
So good,,,, love watching it!!!!!
Very nice. . . I kept chasing.
I went~~ I didn't expect that Xiaoliu would succeed! Yun Qing couldn't stand the palace, how could Xiao Yi be able to stand it! And how could Xiaoliu take a concubine?! How could Xiao Yi be able to bear Xiaoliu's concubine?! Aren't they going to Mobei? This would be even more shocking than Yun Qing becoming the queen!
I haven't been here for a long time. I didn't expect Sister Ziye to still remember me! Today I secretly went online to see where I had written, but this is how it ended. It's really uncomfortable. Without that care, I don't know how I will spend my time after graduation. When I finished reading the ending, I burst into tears. In fact, happiness is so simple. The story of Dayu Chao is still going on. The love of Yun Qingchumu will continue. Xiao Yichuyi's every bit of sweetness infected me. I hope sister Ziye will be happy too! I'll be back when I finish my exams. . .
Sorry, I still can't leave a message to the readers. I am full of words and full of gratitude, but I don't want to hold it in my heart, so I will just leave you a message. Thank you yh for your review. In fact, I hesitated about this ending and gave up the idea for a while. However, because the original writing was based on this idea, I was a little timid. I just added Xiao Yi's dialogue because it felt abrupt. I thought, maybe reading the whole article again and then coming back to the ending will be better. I will consider it carefully in future articles. Thank you! E_younger, thank you for reading and leaving comments for many years. It is a good habit. You have also given me a lot of opinions. I have collected them all for now and will give me the next article. You may not have read the extra chapter of Volume 1 that I added later. It explains the first acquaintance of Chu Mu and Yun Qing, and also mentions the acquaintance of Chu Mu and Lan Ruoxi. As for the old man, he is still interesting. Ying wanted to end it as quickly as possible, so I deleted it, saying I'm sorry for him and the readers who had high expectations. In fact, I deleted many people's stories, just because I was afraid that the more stories I added, the more unclear the explanation would be. People are still no match for a lazy word... As for the refinement, I was a little lazy, but after reading the comments, I really had the idea of editing the article. Thank you! Xiaowei, it's okay. I was quite concerned about the points when I posted them before, but it's all over now. All collections, clicks, and points are all gone. For me, the most important thing is that I persisted in writing 350,000 words! If you feel comfortable, it doesn't matter if you give him dozens of negative marks. The college entrance examination is about to take place. Come on, I'm waiting for your good news! By the way, many readers who are in the senior year of high school this year, such as Xiaoqian before, have not been here for a long time. Studying hard is the right thing!
Next time I write an article, I must be more poetic, have more close-ups of scenes, and have more emotions about the characters, so that more people may be interested~~ After reading this article now, the ending is similar to what I thought. In fact, there is no difference between Chu Mu and Chu Li who becomes the emperor. Can Xiao Yi accept Chu Li marrying San Gong and Liu Yuan? I feel that their two personalities are more suitable for being a pair of swordsmen, who are chivalrous in the world~~ Moreover, there are many places in the book that are not explained clearly, such as why Chu Mu fell in love with Yun Qing and wanted to kneel in the study all night to ask for marriage. Why does Yun Qing have to help Chu Mu win the world? What is the relationship between Chu Mu and a dead imperial concubine? Wait~~ Finally, I remember that an old man appeared. He was a worldly expert. I think many readers did not fully understand what role he played~~ So I really hope that the original poster can revise the article again. In fact, the article is very grand. It is no worse than the popular ancient costume dramas of the Qing Dynasty, but it is not rich enough~~