This story is fairly controversial, so if you're about to open it, please read the following content warnings carefully. Thank you.
Disclaimer:
This story is full of landmines. If you have a low tolerance for them, don't read it. Please don't leave negative comments. Let's all enjoy the story.
The content does not represent the author's personal views. Everything in the story is purely in service of the plot. Also, this is a free story, so if you've opened it, please don't hold it to overly strict standards.
Content warnings:
1. The bottom is disabled and paralyzed, and the top is directly responsible for his disability for certain reasons.
2. There are medical scenes, many of which are inaccurate. There is no medical or physiological basis, so please don't take them seriously.
3. This is an explicit story with extensive caregiving scenes. The paralyzed bottom has all the complications that a real-life paralyzed person might have. Readers who are not used to this should be cautious.
4. All the story's settings are purely for the plot. Don't apply them to real life, and please be understanding of any inaccuracies.
5. The leads have a poor relationship at first. Be cautious if you're looking for sweet romance, and note that their relationship develops quickly, without a particularly smooth transition.
6. The writing is clumsy, so please bear with me.
7. This was written to satisfy an urge. The logic is inconsistent and the plot is a mess, so please be aware.
Theme:
As a social person with mediocre writing skills, I have almost never left a comment for so many years. I just read it in an unknown corner and then sneak away silently. However, this article is so treasured. In fact, I had a lot of things I wanted to say in the middle of reading the article but I held it back. In the end, I felt a little overwhelmed by the empty comment section. Such a good story and such a good author deserve a lot of praise and encouragement! So after reading it, I have been busy writing reviews for the past few days, writing intermittently. I will say whatever comes to my mind. There may be a lot of nonsense. The writing is not good and there is no logic. Please forgive me. First of all, what I want to say the most is that there are no grammatical errors in the more than 80,000 words in the whole text, only one typo (anyway, I didn't find any mistakes, but I was good at Chinese in high school but fell off a cliff after I went to college. There may be small mistakes that I missed, but overall there is no problem). I must praise my wife's serious attitude and writing skills! (I'm going to take a blind guess that my wife is a liberal arts major. Her writing skills make engineering majors cry with envy) Let's talk a little bit about the story itself. I thought I was immune to sour and abusive stories, but the story of Mr. He and Xiao Yi still made my heart ache. I also felt heartbroken when they quarreled. They came in smiling and left crying. However, the reconciliation of the two babies was so sweet that my aunt laughed while the groundhog screamed. How can I put it? It is a plain and simple text, but it is permeated with rich and strong emotions. It is full of laughter and tears, and it is a mixture of knife, sugar, sweetness and cruelty. Watch it and like it. I can also feel that my wife put a lot of effort into the character. She really tried to figure out the character's mood and feelings. She wrote from the character's point of view instead of raising her typing hand from a high position like lifting a bunch of puppets. I like Mr. He and Xiao Yi very much, as well as their big light bulb and love bodyguard Qi Zheng, and I also like Xiao Song who has a full sense of justice. Every time Xiao Song's generous speech is sincere, it makes people's blood boil. I think this is some positive energy that my wife wants to convey to everyone. I feel that my wife has a good outlook on life. Sorry for going too far, hahaha. I just wanted to talk about the characters. Thank you, my wife, for giving them flesh and blood and soul. During the reading process, I felt as if they really existed in this world, very real, instead of following a program to read the lines, and not being manipulated by the author to speak and do things. This is quite valuable, and it also shows that my wife wrote very carefully. Oh, by the way, speaking of reality, no offense intended, the setting of abdominal tumors is a little bit of a drama. In reality, there is a high probability that you will not be able to live like this. However, my wife cleared the air in the copywriting and explained the problem very frankly, so I think it is completely acceptable. Moreover, my wife did not write Xiaoyi to death, which is exactly what I wanted. Ahhhhh, such a good and miserable baby, why should I give him a golden finger? To be honest, if it was written based on the actual situation, then I might not dare to click on this article, hahaha. So everything is just right, and I like this ending very much. It's warm and sweet, so good. Also, when I first saw the copywriting, it was said that attack directly caused Shou's disability. I thought this was too cruel for Shou, could it really be done? At the same time, I was also curious about how the author would come around. I didn't have much expectations at first. After all, this plot is too difficult for both the attacker and the audience to overcome, and it's also too difficult to end. But I was pleasantly surprised that the plot was very well rounded out and made my eyes light up again and again. Everything is a smooth and logical process. From the broken mirror to the reunion, every step they take is a choice made from the bottom of their hearts. Having said that, let's talk about the characters. Xiao Yi has been bullied since he was a child. In a long-term unbalanced interpersonal environment, it is actually difficult to have positive expectations for the world. His sense of identity and value for his life will be much lower than that of other children who grow up healthily. He will habitually say sorry and talk to Xiao He. I would subconsciously move my eyes away from time to time. There was a small detail that impressed me deeply. Xiao Yi wanted to say thank you to Xiao He. He could just open his mouth to say a few words, but after holding it in for a long time, he still didn't dare to speak directly to Xiao He. Instead, he handed the note over. Xiao Yi glanced at Xiao He and immediately lowered his head. His past is gloomy, he has low self-esteem, and his love is quiet, calm, and cautious. But Xiaoyi's low self-esteem hides a strong self-esteem. It only takes a little spark to ignite it and burn it more and more intensely. The beginning of love may be regarded as an opportunity to ignite, so before he is tempted, he can be indifferent to everything and passively accept the bullying, but after being tempted, he starts to turn his passivity into counterattack. I didn't quite understand why after Xiao Yi fell in love with Xiao He, he no longer remained silent but fought back when he encountered someone who bullied him, and no longer passively accepted the bullying as before. After thinking about it, it might be because Xiaoyi has someone he likes. Just like a person walking alone in the dark night sees the moon, he has new concerns, expectations, courage and strength, so he will not continue to let himself be stepped into the mud by those who bully him. He will stand up straight and reach for the moonlight. This is my personal understanding, which may not be correct. I can only think of this level for the time being. Xiao He's feelings for Xiao Yi have already been known for a long time. It didn't happen overnight when he grew up, but he was naturally attracted to Xiao Yi when he and Xiao Yi lived together under the same roof for a long time. He saw Xiao Yi's inferiority complex and also saw Xiao Yi's self-esteem, kindness and tenacity. Xiao Yi is a weed that keeps struggling in the mud to grow toward the light, and Xiao He is the source of light that is born bright and dazzling. Just like what the wife said in her speech, both of them are good babies. Two such good babies, close to each other and attracted to each other, will of course come together sooner or later and move forward side by side. Father He is also quite interesting. He vividly explains the complexity of human nature. His experiences seem to be separated but are actually unified. In the past, he could be a loving father, but later he could also become a devil. My wife just mentioned it here without going into details. I think this detailed treatment is quite good. Neither we nor Xiao He Xiaoyi know how Father He went on the road of no return. It doesn't matter if it's okay. We just need to know that the consequences are serious and tragic. God, I'm serious, when I saw the broken mirror, I felt so distressed that I collapsed. It hurts so much, madam, don't be too good at writing, it's too painful. There's obviously not much description, and there's no strong color rendering. It's just a few paragraphs and a few lines of words, but reading it can make me burst into tears (actually, I'm really tearful). But it's not pure pain, it's painful but it's "sucking" at the same time. The turn at the moment of life and death, the rescue without hesitation, the care during the coma, and keeping the room as it is. The two people love each other to the extreme, just like two stars attracting each other at the limit of Luo Xi. They collide and break into ashes when they get close. Xiao He is missing and repenting crazily, and his heart is crushed to pieces. , Xiaoyi's spinal nerves and hopes were all cut off, and she was damaged both physically and mentally. But fortunately, their love was deep enough, and it seemed to feel like breaking bones and connecting tendons. Therefore, although it was a pity that the physical injuries were difficult to repair, the two hearts put aside all misunderstandings and barriers, and were able to reunite, heal each other, and support each other. Generally speaking, everything is quite satisfactory and I am satisfied, hehe. By the way, I suddenly remembered that when I saw Zhong He bullying Xiao Yi, I thought Xiao He would find out about this problem and stand up for Xiao Yi or take revenge or something. But it turned out that Xiao Yi probably didn't want Xiao He to worry so he endured it and didn't tell Xiao He. I also thought that Xiao He would investigate on his own and find out the bully and beat him up or something, but in the end he didn't, maybe it just left the matter. At first, I thought it was a pity to let these people go in vain, but then I thought it was good. Xiao He is a doctor after all, and he is extremely busy, so he has no time to bother with all this. Since Xiao Yi doesn't want Xiao He to know, then Xiao He will respect Xiao Yi's opinion. They all look forward and never look back. No matter what, all the pain remains in the past years, and Xiao He will protect Xiao Yi now and in the future. It is better for the two babies to live peacefully and peacefully than anything else. Okay, okay, I can't chatter anymore, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh God did I talk so much, why did I write so much unknowingly? This is my first time to leave a long comment, many things may be different from what the author thought, they are all my own understanding, and the words are quite confusing hahahaha. In fact, my original intention of leaving a long review was to let my wife know how much I like this story. I originally read it for the D part, but I didn't expect to receive so many surprises, touches and warmth. What attracted me the most was no longer the D part, but the full-bodied characters and the story itself. I will always pay attention to my wife in the future, but I may not write such a long review again. I am really too verbose hahaha.
Qi Zheng: If either of you insulted me, your face would have been gone.
Ah ah ah, these two babies are so cute, they make my heart melt.
So warm 🐰 Will the two of them get a cat of their own?
[Covering face and laughing and crying] It's so well written, it makes me feel sad when I read it, but what makes me admire you even more is that you are only a freshman in high school... This old aunt is really stimulated by young people again! 🤩 Keep up the good work! Looking forward to the next work [Orange Candy]
So it turns out that you also wrote this book? I feel like the two restaurants I love to eat in are actually cooked by the same chef [make me healthy]
What a magical author, so productive [Compare your heart]
Dr. He is tamed and obedient. Haha, he will be dazzled by the sunshine.
Ahhhhhhhhhhh it's beautiful!! I just saw it somewhere else yesterday!! Love watching!