After I Died, the Cold Beauty Fell from His Pedestal

Regarding the question "Does Su Wan like Xu Qingyi?", I have refined the comments written by two readers of Chapter 1 and Chapter 109. On this issue, I think these two little cuties wrote better than me. If you have any objections to this issue, please click on the refined comments to take a look. If you think their writing is good, you can give a thumbs up to express your like. Thank you everyone~

Su Wan knew that A Yao liked him, but he didn't love A Yao, but he didn't want to lose A Yao as a friend. A Yao himself doesn't understand this kind of feeling, or he knows that Su Wan doesn't love him, so he just wants to maintain the status quo. He rejects Xu Qingyi. In addition to hating Xu Qingyi for killing Su Wan once, he also has his own selfishness. It's this selfishness that I don't understand. It's really uncomfortable for a germaphobe. If he only respected and loved Su Wan, then I wouldn't have any sympathy, but then A Yao's character would be flattened into a tool-man apprentice, and the most attractive feature of this book would be lost. Xu Qingyi loves Su Wan, but as a tool leader, he does not understand what love is. If possessiveness and love are opposites, then he would rather not have Su Wan love him but have Su Wan stay with him. He will not tell Su Wan the reason why he died and turned into a dragon. In his eyes, it is unnecessary. This means that he cannot convey his love to Su Wan and can only hurt himself to attract the attention of his lover. Su Wan was destined to fall in love with Xiao Xu, from the surprise of being rescued at the beginning to the empathy and compassion for Xu Qingyi. He really loved Xiao Xu carefully and did not dare to think that Xiao Xu loved him. He was afraid of gaining and losing again. I was really worried about the last part of the tug and pull. Exclusivity is the constitution of love, and love is exclusive, so Xiao Xu will be jealous of A Yao, so Xiao Su is afraid that Xiao Xu will leave him when he wakes up.

This book has great stamina. It has been almost two months since I read it. Two days ago, I suddenly thought of the part in the middle where Su Wan jumps into the river to save Ah Yao, and it was really, wow, that feeling. I myself have been a patient with depression for five years. The author's description of Su Wan's depressive state in the middle period is really real and delicate, including the description after he jumped into the river and was rescued by A Yao. I really wonder if the author has also experienced such a period. It can be said to be the best-looking novel I have read this year. Every character is full-bodied and has very delicate emotions. There are many commentators in the comment section who have said it very well, except for the cult who wants to make a series about Xiao Su A Yao. Maybe I did take on Xiao Xu's possessiveness a little bit later on, and felt a little alienated from A Yao, but the little tiger just had unrequited love and didn't do anything wrong. The worlds of Lu Yao and Su Wan are completely different, that is, "emotions do not come first, only love or not." Even if Lu Yao stays with Su Wan for a longer time and saves Su Wan's life, it is still not as good as the soul compatibility between Su Wan and Xu Qingyi. Su Wan's love for Xu Qingyi has always existed. He has always treated his senior brother differently from the beginning. In the end, he admitted that he liked his senior brother from the beginning and it was really difficult to find this double standard. Of course I'm not a bad character, I'm just a fan of CP. It's true that Ah Yao has too many supporting roles, which somewhat overwhelms Xiao Xu's presence in the middle period. Moreover, Xiao Xu's emotional turn towards Xiao Su still steals A Yao's opportunity. Some people in the comment area assume that if A Yao was trapped with Su Wan, I would be quite alienated?

Except for love, all the other feelings towards the younger generation are well written. Su Wan fell in love with Xu Qingyi too suddenly. . There is not much preparation at the beginning, and I feel that the writing is not strong enough... Many words are piled up too gorgeously, which seems to lose the true feelings.

After reading it, I found the author's writing to be quite good, and the characters to be well created. The only shortcoming is that the relationship between attack and reception may be natural to the author, maybe it's foreshadowing but it's not obvious, but I think it's a bit sudden, but it's okay. After all, I've read so many novels, so it's not surprising that I've seen this kind of thing a lot. Another thing is that it ends so quickly! It feels like I could write a few more chapters, but that's all I can say.

After reading it again, I felt relieved... Xiao Su and Xiao Xu are souls dependent on each other. People who criticize evil cults and scold Xiao Xu didn't understand this article at all.

I really love this article. I have read it again for the second time. The author's XP really coincides with mine (big love). I really like the pull at the end, and Su Zhi is really sober all the time. Who can not love this beauty? It's really hard to find good articles. I really love this article (???)

It feels like Su Wan suddenly fell in love with Xu Qingyi from a straight man, and later said that he fell in love at first sight, which is completely invisible... And don't write classical Chinese anymore, it's so literate, there are many descriptions of appearance, and the references are unclear, all "have"

I want to see Ah Da's side story, I love him so much

I like all the characters in the book so much. Besides Su Zhi, if I had to compare, my second favorite would be Lu Yao. I really like him. I also really like the scene where Su coaches him in writing, it's so beautiful and tender. Let my heart be intoxicated with this beauty. I also really like the scene where he drew him on the paper. I wonder if Lu Yao was taken there by the red ghost at that time, would this white tiger boy have begun to have feelings for him? What will happen between him and Su Zhi? As a beast, he seems not to understand the love between men and women. But he undoubtedly loves his master. Xu is also very good. But I still prefer the tenderness and variety between Su Zhi and Lu Yao, which is very attractive to me. Thank you, madam, for writing such a beautiful article! It would be great if there was a story about Su Zhi and Lu Yao in the parallel world.