[Hunter X Hunter] Life Simulator 2.0

What an impressive amount of updates! My sister has finally finished the plot of the vicious fox. I hope that one day she can feel confident to talk about herself and love herself more. I feel that with her high pressure, high willpower and benevolent attributes, it is easy for her to get into trouble.

This is the first time I saw this type of work, and I found it very attractive, so I wanted to share my views with the author from a reader's perspective. It would be great if it could help the author. 1. The setting is great, so it's very attractive 2. The setting of so many values shows that the author has put a lot of effort and care into it, so I give the author a big thumbs up. 3. The words and sentences are too complicated, and a simple description of the environment takes up a large part. After a large number of words are piled up, it is easy for people to feel confused and confused about the key points. Just like the character was saying a sentence just now, and then followed by a long description of the environment, it feels like there will be a gap. 4. There is also the movement of the characters. Although the movements of the characters can also reflect people's psychological activities, too specific descriptions will be like a solid sculpture that cannot move. Being too specific will make people feel that this person is not "moveable" and has no room for imagination. 5. Some of the words used are not very common, such as "eyelash lift", "knob" and other words. However, the settings of this game are very daily, and the dialogue between the characters is also very vernacular, so it will make people feel that this type of words creates a sense of separation and mismatch between the characters of this game. The above are some of my opinions, I hope it can help the author

What I liked about this article before is that all the events are written clearly, and each chapter is full of information. Nowadays, vocabulary affects reading, and I can't understand what is going on. What is that unspeakable secret? The amount of information that can be read is also reduced because of the large number of obscure words. I lost two of my favorite characteristics at once, so sad.

In many places, obscure words are used to replace the original meaning, which is difficult to understand. It's so troublesome, like a Gotham Riddler riddle, and the plot is getting darker and darker, which makes me a little sad.

Selfishly, I want to play games while writing, but if I'm too tired, just focus on games www

I really like the setting of the wife. I understood everything from Chapters 1 to 4, but the writing suddenly became so bad that I couldn't understand it. The rhetoric was very beautiful and the words were gorgeous. To be honest, I couldn't understand what the author was writing. The heroine was injured and it wasn't until Leorio helped bandage it that I understood "Oh, it turns out the heroine is injured." It was really sad. I couldn't understand the wife's story but I wanted to understand it at the same time... (Crying

Surprisingly, I still liked the previous version for the plot when I was a kid. Maybe it's because abstract expressions are easier to understand when the protagonist is alone. Later in the hunter exam, more characters appeared. If everyone was described in an abstract way, it would be difficult to follow it coherently. And when will you come back, madam?

I hope to only work on games. If I work on both, will it be very busy and tiring?

I hope my sister can live happily. . .

A child of the same age mentioned by the fierce fox. Is there any chance it's Killua? If not, just pretend I didn't say it. If so, they actually met when Killua left Greed Island to participate in the hunter test. But judging from the lines in the comic version, there is a chance that they didn't know each other before. Can you and I understand that the author made changes?