The Game of the Fearless (Entertainment Industry)

Dear author, I have a suggestion. I originally wanted to delete the comment after writing it, but I tried it and there was no way to delete the comment. Jinjiang also cannot send private messages, so I can only write it here. If the author can delete the comment, he can delete this comment. My suggestion is that this novel currently has 4 million words, and the author's writing style is very good. If the author insists on writing novels, it should have the potential to become popular in the future. There are still many people in Jinjiang who like to read long novels and like to select works based on numbers. It is recommended not to write about surrogacy and cooperative childbearing with women in this novel, because if this happened ten years ago or even five years ago, there would still be more readers. But now the novel readers tend to be younger, so their emotional requirements are very high, and there must be no flaws. If surrogacy or this method of cooperative childbirth is used, this novel will be stained in their eyes, and it will use women's bodies to develop some feminism. Looking at the current childbirth stories in Jinjiang, it is basically the protagonist who has more children by himself, which shows that the values ​​​​chosen by the audience are more biased towards the children being between the two protagonists. This novel currently has 4 million words, but the proportion of the birth of a child may be very small, especially the reason and method of giving birth to an even smaller part. I don't want to see the whole novel being boycotted in the future just because this point is less than 1% of the entire text. I think if you want the protagonist to have a child, you can adopt, adopt, or simply give birth to a child in a very fantasy way. Because the protagonist of this article is a kind of rebirth, it is also possible to have a child in a very fantasy way. The proportion of content about giving birth and raising children must be some events that will happen in the process of raising children in the future. If the author wants to write about a complete family, there is also content to write. In fact, the current development of the story has reached its conclusion. I wonder if the author has any ideas to start a new article. This is just a suggestion, the author can still write according to his own ideas.

Alas, little Ye Zi is really a saint. Maybe it's because I can't become such a person, so I yearn for it [hug] It would be really happy to be Ye Zhi's friend [feeling] It feels like it can last a lifetime? It's hard to say [sunglasses] It's lucky to be protected by someone he recognizes [red heart]

The author's first novel was praised for its flaws and good perseverance, and he wrote a long novel in V. But in the portrayal of Ye Zhi, I think the author really wanted to create a charming heartthrob, or a very charming adult male. But he has a really strong daddy vibe (but it's a good thing, he's not a soft baby after all), but I don't feel that the sexual tension between aggression and affection is enough. Another point is my personal preference. Ye Zhi is a little too good to Ye Zimu's parents. To be honest, I think the original parents are lacking a lot for Ye Zimu. Also, when it comes to Ye Zhi's handling of relationships, whether it's the relationship between the crew or his attitude towards Ding Jun, it's a bit too far. But this one is okay overall. The author keeps up the good work

More than three months have passed and I finally finished reading it. Congratulations on the completion! [Rainbow fart]

Last month, I finished my second brush and found that a lot of extra [love eyes] [love eyes] dropped, I was so happy😄. Gu Tingyue & Ye Zhi 99, love each other forever. Damn, let's see you next time [Hold your fists] [Hold your fists] [Hold your fists]

I'm so reluctant to leave [sunglasses] Xiao Yezi... Everyone... Will there be an extra episode on the forum [please] or something like that [crying] Thank you for your hard work! Five years! Chapter 1216 [Like] [Applause] [666] That's awesome [Compare your heart] The writing is so good and it's free [Hands together] You're doing it purely for love [Hold your thighs] Looking forward to the next book Good Cook Cooks Fragrant Rice [Shy] [Come on]

I'm really respecting, it took me a week to finish reading more than a thousand chapters.

Well! Wanting to hug Xiang Nan, Ji Xiaoxu is not that interested in Xiang Nan. In fact, she doesn't like Xiang Nan that much! If a normal person breaks up with his company, shouldn't he take his boyfriend with him immediately? I'm gone, but my boyfriend is still here. I know what will happen if I think about it [Cracked] In fact, their two personalities are not very compatible. One is careless and doesn't care about anything, while the other is sensitive and silent and doesn't like to talk about things. I hope they can have a good relationship in the future [crying]

Little Ye Zi's ability to act immediately when he thinks of it is so amazing [please] I envy people like me who have procrastination, and Ye Zi's character, regardless of past life or this life [hug] free and easy to do whatever he wants [biting handkerchief] feeling full of freedom [comparison] what's wrong with the mentality of being forever young [laughing]

Sigh... My life these years has been so beautiful that I can't let go of it, just like a dream. Now it's like waking up from a dream and it's time to get back to reality...