[Shugo Chara] Stars Fill the Sky
[守护甜心]星星落满天
- Status
- Unknown
- Length
- 37k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
22Chapters
139Favorites
4.1kClicks per chapter
30Comments
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Reader comments 25
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Will the author continue to update?
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Ahem! First of all, "Sunlight is refracted through the window and onto the floor, intricately." Sunlight refracted through the window onto the floor does not give people a complicated feeling, but it can be used on big trees, similar to "Sunlight is filtered by leaves and falls on the ground, intricately." This way. Also, it is a bit unrealistic to send a large amount of money every month... Although the girl wants to be rich, it is not enough to send so much money. Changing it to "a sum of money" and being vague without making it clear will make it more acceptable. I also need to read more of the works of my predecessors and learn how they describe them. It seems to be a bit lacking in terms of description. Chapter 2, that's all. Author Sang Jia (laughs)
Visual inspection seems a bit... First of all, there are some punctuation marks... And please don't use "()" in the text. If you have anything to say, please indicate it in the "Author has something to say", otherwise it will make people think that I am a bit ignorant... After reading the first chapter, I have made suggestions. If there are similar problems in the next few chapters, I will not mention them. I hope the author Sang can take more advice!
Xiaoqian, will you update?
Qianqian, I am Xingchen Muying. With great ideals, I registered a pen name. After a series of complicated procedures, I discovered a cruel reality. Not many people clicked. I envy you so much, 555555555555555555555 555555555555555~~ And Qianqian, let me give you a piece of advice. Don't get a new one before finishing this article. You won't be able to finish the last one. I have had personal experience. Please Qianqian, please persist and finish the article. Please! It's so slow now, I'm going crazy! I'm not here to cause trouble, I'm just reminding you that I have very little willpower, so I'm afraid that others will follow my path again…
Qianqian, I tell you "ruthlessly", and I also wrote it~~~Don't mind! Holding bouquets of flowers
The writing is good, but it sounds like me, but I don't have that many friends, I'm always alone, haha, I occupy the sofa.
It looks like 30,000, Xiao Qian! ~
It looks good, but it's too slow.