I just wanted to write a short story about an evil female prince in a matriarchal world.
It will be finished in a dozen or so chapters.
The story of the big boss of Ludao Street, who transmigrates into a mute female prince, takes her older brother, the prime minister's son, and the young, silly son of the minister of rites as lovers, defeats her sisters, and becomes queen.
Friends, I have a bad habit: I like to revise my writing. Usually, I just fix typos. If there are typos in the story and I spot them, I have to correct them, which sometimes makes it look like I've posted an update. Please don't blame me...
Theme:
I read the entire article in one go, and I think the author's beginning is really good. I always think that if an article doesn't shine brightly in the first two chapters, it won't attract me to read it. According to the foreshadowing of the previous author's story, it should be possible to write it longer and the story to be more exciting. I always felt that there should be a dramatic and tense big change and then the whole story should be collected. Maybe that would be better, but I didn't see the so-called climax part, and I always felt like I was not working hard, haha. The ending is a bit rushed, with a touch of regret and satisfaction. Life is not perfect, just like Yingzhen. In fact, I think the heroine still has feelings for him, not just the tender nostalgia for him that the heroine said. And his ending is what I have always cared about. In the end, although the fourth princess was under house arrest in Suizhou, he deserved a miserable ending, although it was not as good as the "relief" of death. This may be the so-called suffering alive, which is more terrible than death. The above is just my humble opinion, I apologize for any mistakes. Looking forward to the author's new articles.
Author, you are a little sad!
Well, I actually like incest marriages, hehe, although it is better for people who are not related by blood to live together since childhood.
It would be nice to have more. Adding some more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
No hexie
A a a aa suo l a
Hai bu cuo ``````
The first thing I wrote was fine, but at the end... I suddenly ascended the throne... I didn't write about how I came to the throne at all, I just came to the throne so inexplicably, it was too easy... I suddenly thought of the history of the Qing Dynasty, alas~~ The move was not very reliable.
I want to read the previous chapter. . .
Your writing is very good and your words are very clear.
I said that you wrote the heroine very realistically and vividly, which made me feel a living Yun'er unfolding before my eyes.
For Yingzhen, my personal opinion is that the ending should be death. Because the protagonist in the article has feelings for him, but the problem is that what you have been emphasizing is that the heroine is attached to his tenderness, as well as her cold-bloodedness and mysophobia.
As the old saying goes, it is better to live than to die, but my idea is that there is no motivation to live anymore, and it is better to die than to love.
I know you can't see my comment.
But I like your article very much.
I read the entire article in one go, and I think the author's beginning is really good. I always think that if an article doesn't shine brightly in the first two chapters, it won't attract me to read it. According to the foreshadowing of the previous author's story, it should be possible to write it longer and the story to be more exciting. I always felt that there should be a dramatic and tense big change and then the whole story should be collected. Maybe that would be better, but I didn't see the so-called climax part, and I always felt like I was not working hard, haha. The ending is a bit rushed, with a touch of regret and satisfaction. Life is not perfect, just like Yingzhen. In fact, I think the heroine still has feelings for him, not just the tender nostalgia for him that the heroine said. And his ending is what I have always cared about. In the end, although the fourth princess was under house arrest in Suizhou, he deserved a miserable ending, although it was not as good as the "relief" of death. This may be the so-called suffering alive, which is more terrible than death. The above is just my humble opinion, I apologize for any mistakes. Looking forward to the author's new articles.
Author, you are a little sad!
Well, I actually like incest marriages, hehe, although it is better for people who are not related by blood to live together since childhood.
It would be nice to have more. Adding some more! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
No hexie
A a a aa suo l a
Hai bu cuo ``````
The first thing I wrote was fine, but at the end... I suddenly ascended the throne... I didn't write about how I came to the throne at all, I just came to the throne so inexplicably, it was too easy... I suddenly thought of the history of the Qing Dynasty, alas~~ The move was not very reliable.
I want to read the previous chapter. . .
Your writing is very good and your words are very clear. I said that you wrote the heroine very realistically and vividly, which made me feel a living Yun'er unfolding before my eyes. For Yingzhen, my personal opinion is that the ending should be death. Because the protagonist in the article has feelings for him, but the problem is that what you have been emphasizing is that the heroine is attached to his tenderness, as well as her cold-bloodedness and mysophobia. As the old saying goes, it is better to live than to die, but my idea is that there is no motivation to live anymore, and it is better to die than to love. I know you can't see my comment. But I like your article very much.