My Years at Hogwarts

A perfect score of 100 would be 90 points. Mainly because the last few chapters ended a bit hastily, and many characters evaporated. For example, Professor Lucas provided conveniences to Dumbledore and Esther during the summer vacation. After the situation became more tense, he would not abandon Esther and hide alone. Why is his description no longer there? ? ? Hull has already participated in the group looking for the prophecy, and has fought with Death Eaters several times, but he didn't appear again? ? ? The same goes for Sammy. In the early stage, he sent howling letters to save people in Africa Square, turned into a chipmunk and traveled to Hogwarts. In the subsequent scenes, he was just a landlord? ? ? Although there are so many criticisms, I still think that the flaws are not concealed. The first 90% of the article is extremely exciting. Esther is really a heart-warming girl~ Her growth line is very complete, she has her own interpersonal relationships and stories, she is not an NPC who works for the protagonist, and the plot also makes the magical world really a world, not just a castle. As for having too few emotional connections with Said, that's not a problem. A wonderful life is more than just love. Finally, I am lucky to be able to click on this article [Compare Hearts][Compare Hearts][Compare Hearts]

Boss, I need a sequel! Goddess, I really need a sequel! Goddess, can you write a little more and just feed it to the dogs? ? Ahhhhhhhhhh I still want to see it! Goddess! Goddess! I want to see Samuel... Goddess please Goddess!

An article I particularly like! ! Essie and Said are really great, and each person's image is well portrayed. I think this is the best fairy tale fanfic I have ever read that is in line with the direction of the original work! It's very, very beautiful, and I think the lack of emotional scenes is not a shortcoming. In a good story, beautiful love is just the icing on the cake of the adventure story. It's not that important, isn't it? I think it's a great article! (Only my personal views are dedicated to my favorite articles)

Spread flowers, is there any extra story about the siblings? The younger brother has never appeared like this since, pity

I recently read the Top 3 HP fanfics. I was delayed by the copywriting before, but I finally realized that the writing is so good! Although it ended a bit too quickly, I really like the heroine portrayed by the author. Both the plot and the characters are great. I can only say that the collection is too small compared to the quality!

It was really well written, but it felt like it ended abruptly when I read the last chapter. Something was missing? Is it intentional? I have to say that this is like the end of what? It's not that it's hard to comment on if it's not good. Finally, I want to say that this book is really well written!

[Come on] [Come on] [Come on] awwwww is so well written, both the main plot and the emotional line of the young couple are great! They were so cute when they first got together that my heart melted [lop-eared rabbit head] [lop-eared rabbit head] [lop-eared rabbit head], but it's a pity that there are no more extras woo woo woo [crying]

Please give me some extras.

It's a bit rushed, and Lucas Hull-Samuel's appearance doesn't play a big role in the plot, but it's still very interesting to watch. Spread the flowers?

Gone? This is gone? Please make a sequel! ! ! Essie and Seid aren't married yet! !