Major revision in progress!!! Read with caution
Recently, a huge scandal broke out in Misty Rain Jiangnan: the top-ranked player on the server turned out to be a balding old man, and a scumbag who specializes in deceiving pretty young women. The whole internet is waiting for this stinking number one to hurry up and disappear. Who would have guessed that just a few days later, this stinking number one would find himself another pretty young woman? How can anyone stand for that?
And so, a strange phenomenon emerged: everyone online was urging the young woman to break up with him.
"Break up with him! He's a balding old man!"
"He's a scumbag, don't let him fool you!"
Jiang Huan: "?????"
Jiang Pei is a computer engineer who works nine to five. Sometimes she skips work, but few people know that she has a severe mental disorder and is prone to anger and irritability. Everyone, even her parents, keeps their distance from her.
Jiang Huan is an art student about to graduate, a pampered rich girl whose parents have a happy marriage. She's an only child, an outstanding student, and very beautiful. Her one flaw is her social anxiety: she can't get a word out when she meets people, and stammers whenever she tries. She's extremely shy around strangers.
Also known as: When a Person with a Mental Illness Meets Someone with Social Anxiety
Theme: Strive to grow and reach for the light
In fact, I think the big idea is very good, but some plots that can have ups and downs are a bit too bland. For example, the old man who wrote the copy clarified too quickly. In fact, everyone likes the feeling of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. Every time I get to that kind of plot, I feel so good. Why are those online novels popular? It is because they get people's points of interest, so like Jiang Pei's Identity, ability, etc. Can all be buried, and then when a certain plot point is reached, writing it out for her will make people feel that it is true. I am really smart and feel that novels are written for people. I can put myself in someone else's shoes and think about whether it is interesting to write like this or comment on it to others (like me, I actually just want to save the manuscript). The recent plot feels very light and ordinary. I can write two chapters appropriately. I know that Da Da wants to write the subsequent plot. I don't know if Da Da wants to finish it or what, but it seems a bit too fast. In fact, online games are very rich in plots. Once one is written, the game can be updated to have something else. He can become a main body (of course, I read the copy and feel that online games should not just be polished, the subject matter is very good) and another female protagonist can also be included in the game. In the play, due to some reasons, her characteristics can be written sideways or frontally. In fact, the main purpose is to provide some materials because Dada doesn't seem to know what to write recently. I think the copywriting role is quite good, but Dada is a bit over the top. I think that online games are just the beginning. In fact, he can promote the development of the plot, connect the two heroines, and become a bond between them.
Can you please remind me to update it? It's so beautiful.
The reversal can be that you become a yandere from an assist, or you become a love rival from a love rival, and you will have the feeling that you are a thick-browed, big-eyed person, but you didn't expect to be such a person, or, I knew you were a gay.
Ah, I can't see the follow-up...
So, does Jiang Pei have two names? What kind of mental illness does Ji Pei have in the copywriting?
The paragraphs are too scattered, so I type them out in full. "Ji Wuhuan's cultivation level is naturally good, but the blood loss rate is too fast, which is not good at all." Medium: "Engage" → high "Yes, yes" → Really
Chapter 3 Paragraph 14 "Keep using money" → urgently need money "all" → so