[Since completed novels can't be extensively revised, I made a few minor edits starting from Chapter 65. I've been making changes here and there over the past few days.]
[To-read list: The Male Supporting Character Keeps Trying to Turn Me into a Puppet, So I Marry the Sickly Crown Prince to Bring Him Good Fortune (Both Reborn). Please add it!]
Blurb:
Shi Mingyue is pulled by a System into a xianxia novel to win over the male lead. After waiting for the person she's been longing for, she immediately binds herself to her target.
But a few seconds later, she realizes something is wrong. What happened to the kind, self-sacrificing male lead everyone promised her?
She watches him casually snap an evil spirit's neck, flick the blood from his sword without a care, then step toward her with a gentle smile.
"You're next. Don't be afraid. It won't hurt much."
Although the System goes offline and no one can explain what's going on, Shi Mingyue has no choice but to grit her teeth and try to win him over. But later, when she sees two identical people standing before her, even the mole at the corner of their eyes exactly the same, her blood pressure shoots through the roof.
The useless System, finally coming back online after a long absence: "Host, you picked the wrong person. You bound yourself to the male lead's twin brother. Good luck."
Shi Mingyue: ??? What kind of terrifying love-triangle hell is this? I want a refund!!!
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In everyone's eyes, Shen Shuanghe is gentle, courteous, and friendly, a perfect senior brother and cultivation partner. But only Shi Mingyue knows the madness and obsession lurking beneath his handsome exterior.
Those seemingly affectionate whispers in her ear are actually daily tests where one wrong move could doom her forever.
The two sit before a mirror, their bodies close, looking just like a pair of mandarin ducks with their necks entwined.
"Can you tell me apart from my elder brother?" Shen Shuanghe holds her slender, pale neck tightly in his arms. The mole at the corner of his eye is captivating.
Later, after her identity as a member of the snake clan is exposed, her sect sentences her to death. She thinks her life is over, but then he appears in a blood-red robe, pulls her into his arms, and murmurs,
"I killed them all. Now no one can stand between us."
He almost touched the moon, but dawn came.
(This line comes from Shi Huihai.)
Shen Shuanghe has seen through human nature since childhood. After being poisoned and left mute, he endured inhuman treatment, his soul trapped in the hellish mire, tormented and treated like a puppet, little more than a walking corpse.
Then he met Shi Mingyue, a woman whose smile was like the bright moon in the sky. She showed him the joy of being human and awakened his emotions, his selfishness, and his obsession, driving him to madness.
May the bright moon drive away the darkness.
(This line comes from an online meme. I couldn't find out who originally said it.)
Reading Guide: 1. One-on-one romance, both leads are each other's first, happy ending.
2. The heroine is a member of the snake clan. The male lead is gentle, cunning, and unhinged, an insecure big dog who can only be calmed by the heroine when he loses control. He's the strongest fighter, with boyfriend appeal off the charts.
3. The male lead is not adored by everyone. There is a reason the female disciples like him in the beginning. Later, the people he kills aren't good people.
4. Cherish life. Stay away from obsessive and unstable people in real life.
5. This is entirely fictional and set in an imaginary world. Don't overanalyze it.
Blurb for The Male Supporting Character Keeps Trying to Turn Me into a Puppet:
Shen Shuying transmigrates into a book and becomes a supporting female character. She is struck by the Blazing Flame Palm, and every time the poison flares up, it feels like she's being burned alive. The only cure in the world is the true-love tears of a snow demon.
The snow demon appears and disappears without a trace, and no one knows his true identity. But Shen Shuying knows who he is: Shi Xi, the sickly and obsessive male supporting character in the book.
To stay alive, Shen Shuying grits her teeth, seeks out Shi Xi, and plans to drag this aloof, unhinged beauty down into the mortal world.
But the moment she approaches Shi Xi, she is immobilized. He leans down and whispers into her ear like a devil.
"Be my puppet, won't you?"
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To stay alive, Shen Shuying does everything she can to please and obey Shi Xi each day, never sparing him a sweet word.
"I can't live without you, baby." If I leave you, I'll die. Boohoo.
Shi Xi's voice is cold: "I'm allergic to the word 'baby.'"
Shen Shuying: "That's fine. As long as you're not allergic to me." (She offers him two flowers.)
I'm allergic to those two words too!!
When Shen Shuying sees another couple arguing and the woman throws a bowl, she immediately turns to him.
"If we ever argue, I'll throw a bowl like that."
Shi Xi glances at her. "In your dreams?"
Shen Shuying giggles, grabs his wide sleeve, and gives it a gentle tug. "As long as you're in my dream, it'll be a happy dream." That would definitely be a nightmare, a nightmare!!
(She offers him another two flowers.)
Even so, she still can't win Shi Xi over or cure the poison. She immediately packs her belongings and leaves to find another way to cure it.
Later, a storm rises between the human and demon realms. Shi Xi crosses a thousand mountains and rivers to find her, pulls her into his arms, and whispers like a devil once more.
"How could you call someone else baby? You're being naughty."
"If you don't listen, I'll turn you into a puppet."
In the snowy mountains, Shen Shuying's eyes glisten with tears and her lips are crimson as blood, like a burning flame. The man presses close behind her, saying nothing, his jaw clenched, his fingers lingering on her neck as if he wants to devour every inch of her flesh and bone.
"You're right. It has to be you. I just can't live without you."
Reading Guide: 1. The heroine didn't call anyone else baby. It was a misunderstanding.
2. The male lead is obsessive and unhinged, and cold at first. There's a reason he doesn't cure the heroine's poison early on. He wants to cure it too!
3. Both leads are each other's first, one-on-one romance, happy ending.
Theme: A warm story about staying positive and saving each other
I stayed up late reading the novel, and the more I read it, the more speechless I became. I always felt that the writing was cluttered, and the inner drama of the male and female protagonists was not well written. The ending was also too hasty. I felt that the author had no inspiration at the end, and it was dry. The core of the story is not bad, but the language skills really need to be strengthened, and the narrative ability, the story is incoherent, and sometimes the plot development makes people roll their eyes!
Pre-order, please collect it~~ "I haven't decided on the title yet" Shen Shuying once passed through the book and became the heroine in the book. The heroine was struck by the red flame palm, and every time the poisonous hair was burned like a burning fire, she was in excruciating pain. The doctor said that if things go on like this, they will be burned to death by internal fire and poisoned to death. Only the Snow Demon's Tears of True Love in the world can cure this poison. The Snow Demon appears and disappears, and no one knows his true identity, but Shen Shuying knows who the Snow Demon is, Shi Xi, the yandere male protagonist of this book. On the surface, Shi Xi is innocent and abides by the rules, but on the inside, he is extremely violent and crazy. He never trusts anyone and is even more heartless and loveless. If he doesn't go his way at all, he will make puppets of those who displease him. In order to survive, Shen Shuying gritted her teeth and found Shi Xi, intending to drag this crazy flower of the high mountain to fall into the mortal world. But as soon as he approached him, he was frozen in place. Shi Xi smiled lightly, leaned over and whispered in her ear: "Be my puppet, okay?" In order to survive, Shen Shuying tried every means to please and obey Shi Xi every day. She never hesitated to say sweet words, and she screamed like a baby when she opened her mouth and closed her mouth. "I can't live without your baby." Shi Xi's voice was cold: "I'm allergic to the word treasure." Shen Shuying: "It doesn't matter, as long as you are not allergic to me." (Sending two flowers) When Shen Shuying heard other senior brothers say that her sweetheart was acting coquettishly and she felt soft-hearted, she immediately became dejected, glanced at Shi Xi cautiously, and muttered "lowly". "But my baby is never soft-hearted or sad towards me." When Shen Shuying saw other Taoist monks arguing and the woman throwing the bowls and chopsticks, she immediately turned her head away. "If we quarrel in the future, I will throw the bowl like this." Shi Xi glanced at it lightly: "Dream?" Shen Shuying smiled, grabbed his sleeves, and shook them gently: "As long as you are in my dream, it will be a happy dream." (Sends two more flowers.) Even so, she still couldn't conquer Shi Xi and couldn't detoxify him. When Shen Shuying was about to die in a short time, she immediately left here with her baggage and looked for other ways to detoxify. Later, when the world of humans and demons stirred up huge waves, Shi Xi traveled across thousands of mountains and rivers to find her, took her into his arms, and once again the devil whispered. "How can you call someone baby? You're not good." The two of them were in the snow-capped mountains. Shen Shuying's eyes were filled with water, and her lips were as red as blood, burning like fire. The man clung to her back without saying a word, gritted his teeth, and caressed her neck with his fingers, as if he wanted to eat every inch of her bones and blood. "You're right, I have to be with you. I just can't live without you." Reading guide: 1. The heroine did not call someone else baby, misunderstanding. 2. The male protagonist is paranoid and crazy, and is cold and cold in the early stage. It's not that the male protagonist doesn't help the female protagonist detoxify, there's a reason~~
Finished watching it, it's great! It's the ending, it's such a happy ending, especially seeing the couples flying up there... How should I put it, it's a bit like the one in the Spring Festival Gala, we are all together, for sure! Dumpling! Smash it! That feeling QAQ
Srds, that is, I hope that when I write articles in the future, the female protagonist will not be like this... She will say she wants redemption when she sees some tragic scenes of the male protagonist...
Read it, read it. I like every situation set by the author. I can see the growth of the male protagonist's character, and I can also see how the female protagonist goes from fear to pity to falling in love with the male protagonist. The brushwork is delicate and the details are well controlled. This yandere novel is highly recommended and gets five stars.
This is my first full-order book, wow, it's really good. (Personally, I think the main text is much better than the extra story, and the ending is a bit strange because it is too happy. I feel that the wedding of the male and female protagonists in the Tianyuan Sect is a bit unreasonable. Although the two masters take good care of the male and female protagonists, the Tianyuan Sect is more than just these two masters. Others will definitely raise objections. And the female protagonist died in the Tianyuan Sect. Not to mention the female protagonist, wouldn't the sickly male protagonist be embarrassed?? And didn't the hero's master's cultivation run out for the sake of sealing? Why did he ascend so quickly and reach his age? The ending is a bit far-fetched, personally? It's strange. But regardless of the ending, this novel is really good. I ordered the first one in JJ. I'm so looking forward to it. I hope my second fully ordered book will also fall into the hands of my wife haha
The author's writing is good, it would be better if there were some extras with supporting characters.
Overall it's good, but the handling of the boss doesn't fit the male protagonist's character
Shen Shuanghe is beautiful, strong and miserable, Shen Shanhe is the winner in life
Well written! Post it!