Something's Strange About This Tang Dynasty

Just express your opinion after reading this. It doesn't matter if the author ignores it. It's my personal opinion anyway. So far, the character of the senior brother has given me the impression that he is annoying, a ne'er-do-well, and he is afraid of ghosts, but the protagonist asks him to wait and see but refuses to do so. He doesn't even think about how to exercise to overcome it, so he relies entirely on the protagonist to protect him. Although it can be seen that he is a good person who cares about the protagonist, he is too self-aware. There are some highlights, including alchemy, but so far the article has not highlighted his advantages (sending elixirs to the protagonist does not reflect the effect in my opinion, even if it is later arranged to save someone who can only be saved by his senior brother who is very good at alchemy), it would be more prominent. I have some memories) I only saw that he has been dragging the protagonist back (how do you say this type of character? It reminds me of Zenitsu, the wife of Demon Slayer. They are usually noisy and cowardly characters who act like a drag, but Zenitsu has been highlighting highlights, such as closing his eyes and being super divine, etc.) The protagonist group is helpful. Although it is annoying, it is also very cute. The senior brother here... The advantages and disadvantages are not balanced at all. It feels like it is always highlighting how noisy and timid he is, but the alchemy aspects are not shown at all, which makes it difficult for me to like him, although intellectually it is true. I understand that he is very nice, but in fact he has been dragging down the protagonist...) And from the words of the protagonist's master, it seems that the senior brother should have a knife on him, but in the end, it is impossible to guess whether the senior brother died or if something happened to a dead relative or friend that caused the senior brother's temperament to change drastically. Anyway, good luck to the author.

The concept is really good, but the writing is too wordy, sometimes a bit repetitive and the words don't convey the meaning. The character creation of the male protagonist seems a bit inadequate, and the speech seems a bit too straightforward (of course, the above is purely my personal opinion). I hope the writing will get better and better.

When did the author write about Prince Song? I am more interested in that one.

Just one chapter, so little, I look forward to more from my wife.

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