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I just found the first edition elsewhere and finished reading it. I happened to be listening to a song, and half of the sentence in it was: "You are not by my side." After reading the first edition, I only have one feeling: Don't keep asking the people you love to wait. Time can heal pain, but it can also break the heart. Not everything can withstand wear and tear.
I really like this article, the ending of the first draft was a bit melancholy. Although it is HE after all, it would be nice if Jing Qing could be more honest and direct. Bai Ran takes the initiative throughout the whole story, which really feels like a one-man show. The revised version of Jing Qing looks crisper and crisper than the first draft, and he even makes jokes XD However, is this article a scam?
I've seen the ending of the preliminary version. I feel that Jiang Ruolin has always been a barrier between the two of them. As long as he has something to do, Zigong will leave for him. The ending of the preliminary version did not resolve this knot. Feeling always comes second Because it will feel a bit cheap Zha Gong's feelings are hesitant
This article hopes that Gong won't be such a scumbag and looks forward to becoming a real mother.
Hey hey, did you forget this place again?!
Mo... Could it be that classmate Bai Ran is a wolf in sheep's clothing? By PIA Okay... I was wrong...
This one, I seem to have read a little bit of the original version~~ Well, Xiaomu has finished all the changes, let me take a look... I haven't been following articles lately >_<
Yo, let's start filling this hole -0- catch a bug After fluttering and rolling and coquettishly for a while, she ran to the side and ate happily. ---->Have a big feast
Laughs] The sentences in ancient Chinese are elegant and subtle, with the style of classical Chinese. The sentences of modern writing are concise and bold. Looks like vernacular writing. Well... Jiang Ruoran must be Bai Ran? Jiang Ruolin is Jiang Ruoran's sister? If so. . . All right. . . (Holding the forehead)
[I haven't seen the original version...] The first time I saw Ruo, I was surprised to find that Twilight, who has such a strong ancient flavor, can also write modern prose very well. Still speaking the same words, well... The character's personality and appearance are portrayed very naturally and delicately. Come on~