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[Upcoming book: The Emperor's Brother's White Moonlight Is a Cross-Dressing Expert. Scroll down for the blurb or visit my author page.]
Before she turned eight, A Guo was a wild child in Lingnan, climbing trees, swimming in rivers, and losing her temper at the drop of a hat.
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But she had no idea that her mother, father, and older brother were hiding a huge secret from her.
The carefree life she should have had was changed by the young man A Guo rescued.
By the time A Guo turned thirteen, she was the most distinguished young lady in the capital.
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After all, she hadn't been sitting around doing nothing all those years.
[Upcoming book: The Emperor's Brother's White Moonlight Is a Cross-Dressing Expert]
Jiu Feng, the ninth daughter of the Phoenix clan, accidentally swallowed one of the Three Primordial Stones from the demon realm when she was young. It left her dim-witted and impeded her cultivation as an immortal. So she descended to the mortal realm to undergo a trial, becoming the ninth princess of the Great Qi dynasty.
If she could safely make it to her twentieth birthday, she could purge the demonic energy, gain immortal power, and return to heaven.
But...
In her first life, she accidentally saw Hua Qing, the capital's most celebrated beauty and the dream girl of every noble young man, grabbing and tugging at a man in a secluded palace. Jiu Feng fled in terror, only to be assassinated that very night.
In her second life, she was cautious at every turn. After finally marrying the new top scholar, she was stabbed in the abdomen on their wedding night before her veil had even been lifted.
The dashing scholar said, "I'm sorry. Hua Qing is the only woman I will ever marry..."
Jiu Feng spat out a mouthful of blood and rasped out her last words: "You... you bastard..."
In her third life, Jiu Feng threw caution to the wind. What did she care about immortals or the Three Primordial Stones? Nothing would stop her from taking out that fake, two-faced bitch first!
The first time she saw Hua Qing, Jiu Feng charged over and punched her repeatedly. After finally venting her anger,
Jiu Feng looked in confusion at the fragrant red bean paste in her hand and at Hua Qing, whose gaze was dark and menacing...
She cried out in horror, "You're... she's... he... he's a...!"
Theme: What goes around comes around. Follow the will of fate.
The author's writing is very good, but the copywriting is not very pleasing. It would be better for the author to change the copywriting to a more attractive one.
It felt a bit deliberate to practice for another quarter of an hour, but it felt more natural to finish writing this article. When I practice calligraphy by myself, I just practice a word until I am satisfied with it. Sometimes if a word is not written well, I just write it for one or two pages. A quarter of an hour may not be enough to write the few characters or strokes that you want to practice. It's just a matter of time, so I say it's a bit deliberate.
It didn't even make it to V. It's such a great article. Both of the books you wrote could be made into TV series. Especially the first one, Little Mouse Spirit, is so good that it really should be made into a TV series.
I originally liked the heroine The process calculation here The launch is my mother-in-law Yang's plan It is to make readers of the novel lower the heroine's over-smartness. This is very suitable for survival palace fighting
If I write like this for a whole day, my hands will tremble and I can't write well at all. But it does have advantages to use a heavier pen when writing. Your daily writing strokes will be more stable, and you will be able to write better. But going too far is not enough, especially in children whose bones are not fully developed, so doing this is just messing around.
The writing is very good, but the pace of the first chapter is too slow, and there is a lot of unnecessary foreshadowing. Please give it a try?
Lingnan has been a place of relegation since ancient times. It is also a rural area, and the hostesses also say it is a miserable place. How can the heroine's brother play polo in this remote place?
My mother's family was prominent and the whole family valued her, so she had a concubine harm her...
None of our close relatives and elders are just idle people, so there is one more person.
The scene transitions are well written.