
The Unbusy Slacker [Quick Transmigration]
不得闲的咸鱼[快穿]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 91k Words
- Genre
- No CP
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
27Chapters
293Favorites
25Nutrient gifts
1.5kClicks per chapter
16Comments
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Reader comments 15
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Overlapping ideas? These are all exactly the same, right? Keywords such as "Lian Zuo" and "Military Merit Lord" are used. The author's explanation is quite reasonable. After all, he is an ancient with few routines, but it is still a bit uncomfortable to watch. The protagonist can make similar arguments, but in some places the protagonist is deliberately confused, Shang Yang looks at the common people! An ordinary person! If you can do this, you will be eager to love, and you will either bring them with you to reform, or you can become confidants with each other as equals, and often communicate with each other about the specific matters of the reform, so that you can sit on equal footing. I think it would be better to write it this way. But some people may think that the protagonist's style is not very high, so I will only express my opinion.
Shang Yang's erecting of trees was not to test his prestige among the people. He was to win the trust of the people and make them believe in him, so that only after he promulgated the reform would some people believe in the reform. It was not to test his prestige, but to gain prestige.
I feel that the character of the protagonist has collapsed and is a bit crazy. The impression given to me by Xianyu is that he is indifferent. The protagonist talks to himself like a madman for a while, and dances some hip-hop the next. Maybe the writing is too good, which makes my expectations too high, hey! Come on, author, I hope to see better works from you in the future!
After the protagonist said this, he felt like he was playing tricks in front of the public. It made me so embarrassed.
Ah, this, this, this dance feels so embarrassing.
Every world ends so quickly! It would be nice if there was a side story to talk about later.
Emmm it's so short!
Can hip-hop... Sir, isn't this the protagonist?
What a different feeling
It's actually finished. Woohoo.