
Developing Tourism in a Cultivation Sect [Book Transmigration]
我在宗门发展旅游业[穿书]
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 211k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
67Chapters
345Favorites
9.0Score
30Nutrient gifts
348Clicks per chapter
12Comments
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Reader comments 8
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Is the market value of silver very high? Why is it only 100 taels after tax?
So Xun Qingyu was the original owner and then somehow went to modern times?
The next step is to wait for the pre-receipt!?^▽^?
I finally finished reading it, let me tell you my opinion. Emotional lines: The ones written in large letters tend to relate to daily interactions. I think that in addition to my main writing career, I can appropriately add more descriptions of emotions. Wouldn't it be better to have a little ups and downs? As the career progresses, the relationship also increases in daily life, and finally everything comes naturally. Since the central content is/biased toward career, the protagonist's emotional line must be described appropriately. (Of course the author is Da Da, this is just my opinion) Time: Because sometimes the time span is relatively large, you can actually abbreviate the events of that year (that period of time). If there is a transition, it will not appear sudden. Then there is the writing of the entire story/plot. I think it is still okay, but I always feel that it is a bit lacking in taste. Then his writing style needs to work hard to improve.
"I used 'side wood micro hair'" to catch a big bug~ Damn, I remember it was the three o'clock water test
You've already seen nearly half of it?
Damn, let me ask if the love line can be drawn? Or is it mainly about career and secondary about relationships?
Attracted by the copywriting (*'▽'*)?