
Don't Even Think About Taking First Place
别想抢第一
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- 509k Words
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- Danmei (BL)
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- Modern Era
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- 14d ago
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123Chapters
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Happy New Year, teacher!!! (The following are some of my thoughts and so on. Teachers can just take a look at it.) In fact, I came across "Don't Try to Be First" by accident. I was very fond of campus articles at that time, so I randomly read this article in Xiaolujiang. It was still being serialized at that time. In fact, the setting and copywriting were also quite attractive to me. When I first watched it, I followed Chen Zizhou's perspective and saw those moments when I was secretly in love. I really like the little thoughts, the sour little emotions, haha. It was only later that I found out that the teacher had written it on zhihu first, so I decided to read it, "I am not unconventional, I am one of the many admirers. I am different, I am the only one who cannot express my love." I remember this sentence very clearly, and it also strengthened my determination to read it. (Actually, due to some real-life academic problems, I haven't come back to see them for a long time. This New Year, I just happened to come back to see Jin Fang and Chen Zizhou~) In fact, there is a part of the kiss that I remember very deeply and like. It was the time when Xiao Chen went to Xiao Jin's house. Xiao Chen wanted to breathe, and then Xiao Jin sucked on Xiao Chen's tongue, causing Xiao Chen to say "Ah"!! When I saw it, I was really spinning and jumping, I was so excited! In fact, when I first read the copy, I thought Xiao Jin was a little more than 1??, But later on I didn't expect that Xiao Chen was more!! I feel (it's just a personal feeling, it may be different from what the teacher thinks) when they first met, or when they were making the sauce, Xiao Jin gave me the feeling of being a bit pampered (the kind that comes from Xiao Chen, that is, you can indulge Xiao Chen in the sauce). But I also liked the time when Xiao Jin was on top! I seem to remember that it was Xiao Chen's first tiaodou, but actually I still remember that one! Xiao Jin asked Xiao Chen to try to breathe according to the rhythm, and then Xiao Chen seemed to be suppressing his voice. Xiao Jin wanted Xiao Chen to remember what Xiao Chen thought, "Why did I forget what my boyfriend likes to listen to?" And Xiao Jin said to Xiao Chen, "There is nothing to drop on the table, baby." This is really touching!! (Especially when Xiao Jin calls Xiao Chen baby, it's really touching! It pokes me! The teacher is so good at writing!) The teacher's writing about kiss and Jiangjiang Niang Niang is really great! I like it so much!! In fact, there may be a lot of things that I haven't understood very deeply, and I just saw things at a superficial level. Teacher, don't mind!! Finally, I wish the teacher success in his practical work, all the best, all his wishes come true, good fortune, and a happy New Year!!!!??
I like my wife's writing!!! I came to Jinjiang from Zhihu a few years ago... I followed the last article every day until it was finished. My ID was "" before. I don't know if my wife still has an impression of me. Hahahaha. When I was looking through the collection recently, I saw that the book by Chen Zizhou and Jin Fang had already been completed, so I started to follow it again... After all these years, I still like it so much!
Good evening, teacher, the Spring Festival is approaching! First of all, I wish Teacher Buwen a happy Spring Festival. On Tuesday night this week, I happened to read the first version of "Don't Grab It" written by my teacher on Zhihu. I didn't finish reading it because I had to go to class the next day, so I only read the outline, but it reminded me of it again and again the next day - it was really touching. In Zhihu's Don't Grab, the teacher's writing style is obviously immature, but at the same time, the feeling Brother Jin gives me can be said to be completely different from the current Jin in Don't Grab. The contents of the diary, Brother Jin's monologue... Made me shocked by the first version of Brother Jin, not least because of the huge difference in personality. The first version of Brother Jin would curse, be irritable, and change for Brother Zhou... I don't know how to describe it, because the current Brother Jin also has the above actions, but I just feel that the first version of Brother Jin gives me a more vivid feeling. And this version of Brother Jin feels more divine to me, like the male protagonist, but not like a living person. So much so that after watching the current movie Don't Grab it, I always have the feeling in my heart that "Brother Jin is the ideal, Brother Zhou is the reality". Perhaps because of this, I always feel that the new version of Zhou Ge often carries a "loneliness" that feels secure but not enough. Comparing the two editions, Teacher Buwen's writing style has been greatly improved and his writing is more delicate. But I don't know why, after reading both editions, I feel a little melancholy. But Teacher Buwen has always been developing in a good direction! Very, very powerful! Just when I saw the first version of Brother Jin, I always felt that he was "not" Brother Jin? Maybe the changes have really been too big, and I kind of wish I could get to know the "real" Brother Jin. I'm just complaining. I don't know what I want to express, so I just treat it as a post-viewing review without a main purpose. [Well-behaved jpg.]
Come back and take a look. Is there any chance that this article will be published as a physical book? Really love it!
I really hope I can publish a book
My favorite Qiangweixiang novel. The words and sentences were chosen fluently, and I could see that my wife was thinking about it over and over again. Two male gods, non-retained, doting on each other, 1V1, HE, double clean, cold, pure, gentle and noble son Even though the male protagonist's emotions are a little too reserved, Brother Fang's love can be vigorous and blatant (I don't mean to ask for a change of character), and Brother Zhou can boldly assume the role of himself when he was in unrequited love when he was in AI CAO (I won't laugh at you!). I still have a little question, why can't Brother Zhou and Brother Fang both get 655 points and tie for first place in the province's 35th grade? Wouldn't it be better to point out that "they are the number one in each other's hearts that no one can match"? Because of the alley abuse (101, 102) plot, I haven't dared to revisit it for a long time. Recently, I mustered up the courage to use my spare time to copy this book. I found that the stories are intertwined and it requires a lot of skill to cut out the entire fight scar plot line and delete a few characters I don't like while maintaining the continuity of the whole text. So I felt frustrated. As time goes by, my mentality becomes childish and I prefer this kind of sweet story. My wife has a lot of ingenuity, and she laughs from ear to ear every time she sees the luminous watch scene. "You are really hot" is much better used to describe JING YE than CHANG DAO. The artistic conception is tranquil and flowing, and a little sad. After all, it is too beautiful to be true. A few excerpts: "The wind is not strong at noon, and the evergreen trees in the distance are motionless, like a painting. Youth is fixed at this moment, as if it can reach eternity. If he can only touch Jin Fang in that situation, he really does not want the opportunity. It is best if this person is free from illness and disaster." (19) "Be firmly recognized by others and plan for the future. The joy was so strong that it penetrated deeply into his beating heart. Chen Zizhou suddenly recalled what he said in the distant past: "Let's buy a house together in the future." The other party just said, "Okay." Under the blazing sun, that smile was very shallow, and it was brighter than the light of all the bright things in the world." (122) Finally, thank you Mrs. Mustard Buwen! Brother Fang and Brother Zhou will always be in love and happy in their world!
Www After hard work, Teacher Buwen came back to unlock the door. When I reviewed it, I found that there were so many locks, and my heart almost wilted. Now that I come back and see that they are all unlocked, I am really happy. Teacher Buwen, a good person has a safe life!
Really well written!! It's particularly delicate and real. I was a high school student in Sichuan and Chongqing four years ago. It's so real. Both of them respect each other and dare to talk about love openly. Thank you to the author's wife for describing such a beautiful and sweet story... It healed my week.
From Zhihu to Jinjiang, this is my fourth time reading it, I really like it!
After watching it, I felt it was a bit bland. I didn't see what I wanted to see, such as coming out as gay and Jin Fang being hospitalized. I wanted to see something more detailed.