Harry Potter: The Oriental Transfer Student Who Came Illegally

To explain a little bit about the conflict on the train, Severus actually came out to look for Joan. He met James who was also looking for someone - looking for which compartment Lily was in. Then Joan mistakenly thought that both of them were looking for Lily, and she was a little unhappy unconsciously.

I think it is a masterpiece. I beg the author to never give up and update it to the end [Orange Candy]. I have eaten [Purple Candy] kswl. I want to see a better magical world and a better Severus. I hope the heroine can be sweet with him.

Miracle... No OOC

I like the setting of the heroine, who is calm, persistent, and has a bottom line. I feel that only the tip of the iceberg has been unfolded so far. Ash's description is also great! It feels very close to the character, and the contact and friendship with the heroine (so far) develop step by step. Under the influence of the heroine's personal experience, Aspen gradually understands that the desire for power is not necessarily equivalent to following Voldemort, but he has a relatively better understanding of the general environment of the British wizarding world at that time, and it will be more difficult to change. Looking forward to the following article [Let me be healthy]

I want to first talk about June in my eyes As a stranger, she wanted to be cautious in her words and deeds at the beginning, guarding the boundaries, not pleasing anyone, and not rushing to the team. She has the sobriety of Ravenclaw, she is eager for knowledge, and is smart. When facing magic like dark magic, she does not judge blindly. She believes in the power of knowledge. She understands the neutral side of things. When she met Severus for the first time, she reached out to help, not for others, just because of her own heart. She is a complete and independent individual. She does not exist because of the existence of the male protagonist. I believe everyone can see the author's great love for her. I believe everyone also loves Qiong with the same love. Let's talk about Severus Most people compare him to a thorn in the dark and an unknown guardian. But in the author's writing, he is more like an old silver knife that has been repeatedly tempered by the embarrassment of youth. It does not hide its sharp edge. He is a stubborn shadow in the corridors of Hogwarts. This wind from the east makes him no longer just passively bear the sun, but quietly spreads a trace of the moist warmth of youth in a place where no one sees it. Some people want to ask, Severus Snape doesn't like Lily anymore. Is Severus Snape still the same person who no longer joins the Death Eaters? I answer firmly: I think so. In this article, I see more sides of him. Why do you say yes? His background has not changed. He is still used to hiding his true feelings. This time, his depth is used for "growth" and "protection" Then let's talk about Joan and Sev's life. What impressed me deeply was the flower that Severus conjured up while practicing Patronus. Needless to say, the symbolic meaning of that moment. The new power made Joan feel happy. I couldn't help but smile when I read this. The swallow flew gently to Severus' hand, and finally scattered a little starlight (I can't remember clearly, it seems to be written like this). And when Severus confessed to Joan that he was learning black magic, Joan showed no disgust or discomfort, which proved that she was rational and intelligent. It's more like giving Severus a reassurance. In the back, the moon cake suddenly appeared in the kitchen (to be honest, I was also surprised when I saw this. I didn't expect it at all). Living in a foreign country, every Chinese knows the weight of this gift. This contains more than just the homesickness of "Tonight, when the moon is bright, I don't know who is missing in autumn." (I'm going too far. I wrote it at the top. Maybe I can't control which sentence I want to write. It feels like Chinese reading comprehension) The last thing I want to say is also what I admire the most. The author's logic and thinking are very strong. It can be seen that he pays great attention to details. Some of the characters and settings that appear in the article are supplemented. The writing style is delicate and gentle. At first glance, it seems that he has studied the original work by himself. I really like it. I wish the author all the best and a smooth life. Please allow me to give you a little reminder 🤩 [sprinkle flowers] 🥺 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

I am humble and urge you to update online 🙏 🙏 🙏 🙏

Ahhhhhhhh!!! The author has greatly updated the text!!!! I am falling more and more in love with this heroine who has a little bit of the characteristics of the Eagle Garden and the Snake Garden!!! I really look forward to how Sijiao will confess his love for the heroine when he finds out!!! Hahaha!! Author, you are now my only motivation to open Jinjiang!!! Big confession!! 😍😍😍

Qiong's treatment at Deng Duoduo was almost as good as that of Little H. She felt a little nervous. Did Lao Deng really have no other intentions? . .

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! The author is finally back!! I am so looking forward to the follow-up of Si Jiao and Qiong!!!

Finished reading! I originally wanted to save it, but when I saw the teacher's update, I couldn't help but read it all [changed] Come on, teacher, I really like this story 🐰