As You Wish

How about writing more detective stories? The inner house is really long-winded, and there is actually a dialogue with the maid, a whole page of three thousand words, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! Just talk about the third lady's bad stomach!!!!

Get better! Throw flowers!

This one is starting to look good. Really, detective stories should talk more about cases. Those daily routines seem really boring.

The interaction between the male and female protagonists is pretty good. I went back and looked at the word count of the chapters. I thought each chapter was only one or two thousand, but it turned out to be three thousand, three thousand words. Can you give me some useful information 🧋

Big, there are three pictures. The heroine has no progress, action, or crisis. She can only talk for half of the picture [heartbroken]

The plot is really slow. Consider deleting those useless dialogues.

We just went to have a meal. What's the plot?

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