All Things Under Heaven Shine as One

Ahhhh, this is my first time to send out a red envelope. I didn't know that the blessing and thank you input separately on the red envelope will be displayed in the comment area.

I found out that I received a red envelope, thank you boss! Congratulations on signing!!! Come on come on!

Huahua! God rewards hard work, I want to see you fly!

A thought: If there is no "Western medicine", then there is no concept of "Chinese medicine", and medicine is equal to important (hahahaha, strange focus)

Damn it, I think as long as the double arrows are used, regardless of life or death, it counts as he.

Seeing how seriously my wife responded to her comments, I will support her. It's rare to see an author who can reply so seriously and listen to fans' opinions in a long paragraph. Come on!

Maybe it's true that the novel's writing style is quite immature, and the setting is quite jarring to me, but I might not choose to spend so much time reading this novel. I really admire the author's perseverance in persisting in writing so much. I believe that you will write better and better as time goes by, so come on! Just a small suggestion, you can reconsider the paragraphing of the article, it looks uncomfortable. Just my personal opinion, no malice intended!

After reading the first three chapters of Wife, I suggested that Wife put things like lightning protection in the copy. The copy should focus on the character of the protagonist and important plot points. If there are cute points, it should be cute, and if there are sad points, it should be sad. The content of the first and second chapters of my wife's text can be combined. I tried it, and it happened to be more than 3,000. It is recommended that the long setting at the beginning be deleted directly. Starting from the emperor asking his two sons, the word "said" in the sentence is used too frequently. In fact, it can be [Character name: "Bala Bala"], or some connections such as the character's demeanor can be added. When I read the third chapter, I felt that the roles of the protagonist and his younger brother were almost the same. The appearance and character of the protagonist were not outstanding. Although the appearance of the prince was described, there was no corresponding plot. In addition, the setting of the wife is very detailed, but it is revealed all at once. The reader looks confused and just wants to turn the page. Some settings look like a full page when viewed on a mobile phone. My wife remembers to segment them into more sections to protect her eyesight. My wife has written so much, she definitely hopes that more readers can read it, and if she refines it, she might have a chance to sign a contract. If the above remarks are inappropriate, please don't take it to heart. The most important thing in writing is to be happy. Come on!