Daily Life on a Deserted Island

After finishing the chase, I felt a lot of emotion. When the heroine was struggling to survive, there were many people in the comment area who said that the heroine was soft-hearted or hesitant. But from my perspective, the more you go to the end, the more you miss the heroine at the beginning. Maybe it's because the protagonists in other novels are the same as the heroines in the later stages, so there are not so many emotions. But here, I have witnessed the changes in the heroine from the beginning, and I miss the past despite the stumbling blocks. But for the fresh and tough look, this article is honestly flawed, with typos, bugs, confusing transitions (especially the cupid's bow and arrow scene. In fact, I really want to complain about the poor writing of flashbacks and interludes, so I just write them in the normal order. The fishing rod and the cupid's bow and arrow are confusing people. Hahaha). There are also some plots that were inexplicably skipped in the middle and later stages compared to the early stage (such as the sudden appearance of the water spirit, from the A character who had never appeared before suddenly interacted with the heroine like an old friend in a certain scene. When did he meet him? There was no explanation before or after the plot. It would be fine if this kind of character appeared out of nowhere to promote the plot or have other functions. However, the two or three scenes where Shui Ling appeared were just chatting with the heroine for a few words, but the heroine was almost as familiar with him as Xiao Xiong. It was so sudden and unnecessary. I want it, I'm confused), but from the beginning to the end, I can feel that the writing is getting smoother and smoother. In terms of infrastructure and survival, the early stage is the most exciting. The middle and later stages of the plot tend to be fantasy adventures, which are also very interesting, but there is a feeling that the fast forward button has been pressed. In short, although it is a bit uncomfortable to watch in the early stage, I can't stop, but when I watch it smoothly and comfortably in the later stage, I start to miss the desert island survival and the vivid heroine in the early stage. There is a subtle regret and touch.

Tied, how can I put it~ I like it very much, and I have read many of Ji Jianwen's books, so I can't say that this one is outstanding, but Jiang Miao really appeals to me. I read some reviews saying that Jiang Miao is too weak and soft-hearted. (In fact, there is no need for it.) This book is about Ji Jianwen, not rebirth or time travel! Jiang Miao is just one person! A person who lives in a society governed by the rule of law! A man who is only 24 years old! It is great that she is not picky and not afraid of things. Although this book is generally good, the details are not handled very well (but the emotional expression is great, and the characters are well created). It is the first time I write such a long review. I am a little nervous (I feel that the details are not handled well, maybe I did not read carefully enough. I will come back to comment after the second time). If you don't like it, don't criticize! Also, it's my first time trying to write about infrastructure construction and it's already at this level. (Super loud encouragement) I will also support new articles (come on, come on???????)

I finished reading it in one night. I always have a three-minute enthusiasm for reading. It's rare to finish a novel, but I felt so melancholy after reading it. I wanted to find some other infrastructure articles to read.

I thought it was going to be a long novel, but I didn't expect it to end here.

It's even, super nice I really like Jiang Miao when she first arrived on the island. She is fragile but tenacious. Anyway, she is super pretty.

A very cute story

The writing by Da Da is really great. I have always liked infrastructure articles. There are many who write about infrastructure construction. I have collected many books. However, I am always a three-minute fan. Even if I think the article is very interesting, I always chase it. I don't know why but I don't want to pursue it. This book written by Da Da is the first time that I have followed the article from the beginning to the end (I mean I'm not saying that other people who write about infrastructure are not good at writing. Others write very well. It's my personal problem. If what I say makes people uncomfortable, please don't criticize me, thank you.) I am very happy that I have witnessed Jiang Miao's growth, and I am also happy that she reunited with Bailey in the end (this is the first time I have posted such a long comment, please forgive me if it offends)

Hehe, I risked my baldness to read it. It's very nice.

The end of the show, she really brought him back

Although, I don't understand the word redemption. Alice has always been a victim. There is no atonement for her. What she needs is to be saved. Why is the word redemption used for innocent victims? I beg the authors to be careful. I am not moved at all. I already have ptsd for the word redemption.