
Could This Be Love?
算不算是爱情
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 13k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
5Chapters
2Favorites
364Clicks per chapter
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算不算是爱情
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Regardless of whether it is a long story or a short story, if you want to attract people's attention, you must have a good opening. The opening of this article is just about the chance encounter between two people, which is unremarkable. And most of the strokes were describing the situation on the plane. I thought there was a crash or time travel, but the plane landed quickly. Personally, I don't think it's necessary to spend so much effort on this aspect. Short stories should clearly explain the development process of events or the flow of emotions in the shortest possible language. Personal opinion, don't scold me! It is a very plain and simple story, just like love in real life, it does not have much passion and excitement. Maybe everyone should face reality. This is my feeling after reading this article. It's very realistic, and the narrative is very thoughtful, but it feels a little scattered, but everyone has their own writing style, so keep going!
I can understand the meaning of the saying that it is easier to go up the mountain than it is to go down... Xue Mo and Xue Qi always make me feel very awkward. There is a story behind the two of them... I have a strong premonition...
Isn't first love always special and unforgettable...
The feeling between these two brothers is very strange... But the protagonists of each story also have stories to tell haha
That foreigner is so calm... It's hard to imagine...
Well, it's still not bad~~
In fact, this opening chapter is rather weak, especially the description of the sky is a bit awkward. How naked is the sky! This way of writing is very strange.
Come on, keep updating